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Reconciliation Part 7
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Raquel saw the disappointment on Helena’s face and pulled her back in. She studied Helena’s eyes and lips and caressed her cheek. She spoke softly, “Querida. Você é bonita. Eu poderia amá-lo toda a noite. Eu poderia cair no amor com você. Eu não posso cair no amor com você.“ (Sweetheart. You are so beautiful. I could love you all night. I don’t want to fall in love with you. I cannot fall in love with you.)
Helena become frustrated with her answer and asked, “What did you say? I don’t understand.”
“I said you are beautiful. I had a beautiful night. I would love to see you again. I hope you will let me see you again.”
Helena felt her heart skip a beat, smiled and nodded, ”Yes, I would like that, very much.”
“Bom, bom. Good, Good.” Raquel answered excitedly. They leaned in for a kiss that started soft and slow but became deeper and wanting indicating to each other the passion they felt. Raquel broke the kiss and gently pushed Helena away. “Wow. I think I’d better go. You are making me weak.”
“Good. I’ll see you next time. Goodnight. ” Helena stepped back slowly releasing Raquel’s hand as she did so. As she stepped back she realized her own knees were feeling slightly week.
“Next time. Boa noite. Goodnight.” Spoke Helena softly as she watched Raquel’s car drive away.
When Raquel arrived at her loft in downtown LA she was greeted with a very angry Joelle. Joelle Beaumont had been Raquel’s longstanding, on again, off again girlfriend. She was a firecracker of a French model/actress. She was known to be extremely difficult to work with. Her tantrums and demands were legendary. She was a beautiful, curvatious and voluptuous woman. Her jet-black hair, dark brown almond shaped eyes contrasted with her pale skin and volatile personality. “Where have you been? I came here to see you and you just take off on me. Why didn’t you answer your phone? I’ve been calling you all night.”
“Joelle I am tired. I don’t feel like arguing with you tonight.” answered Raquel as she passed by Joelle.
Joelle, who was never one to be brushed aside, followed Raquel as she moved further into the loft. “Who was that woman you left the club with? Did you fuck her tonight?”
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Helena needs to swallow her pride and face Dylan. She’s only kidding herself thinking all she wants is a one night love affair. Helena is a romantic and she should cut Raquel loose before she gets hurt. I think as long as Helana keeps running from Dylan and how she feels she’ll never have a healthy relationship.
Wow! I just got caught up and am absolutely loving the compelling stories you’ve been telling. If they do anything as intelligent and complex as this with Helena next season, I will be beyond pleased. Lil Ms. Raquel has her own drama..ummm hmm…that is so much like life. I love it! PPS
Helena and Dylan really needs to talk.Dylan did hurt Helena,yet she did return the pictures and money, Last but not least she did send her a DVD but Helena didnt look at it. If the keep on running,they will never have peace. thanks
One of the many things I love about your stories is that you allow the reader to get into the heads and hearts of your characters. There is so much to them under the surface and although you write the sex scenes well, they are so much the better because of the richness of the actual story. I do think Helena needs to be able to forgive Dylan in order to move on with her life, but Dylan needs to try everything before she gives up.
You know-I’m not sure if Helena is nursing a broken heart, a broken ego or a busted ass over Dylan. Was she truly in-love with Dylan? Personally, if I was Helena I’d feel like Dylan was harassing me at this point…and doing so to assuage her own guilt…I think Dylan has left her ‘need to talk’ a little too late…but who knows, its your story & Helena might just fall again…but whats that saying about ‘fool me once’????? Great stuff. PPS
I can only agree with all the others : Hel’s needs to get her act together and give Dylan a chance to explain no matter how hard it is. She obviously hasn’t found closure on her relationship with Dylan yet and maybe when she hears her out she might find that closure and move with her life (maning the Brazilian) pr she might realize she still loves Dylan very much and is willing to give her a second chance. Looking forward to ore.
Squirl, you make me think poor Helena is like one of those little paddleball games with the ball bouncing off the string getting wacked over and over again. Don’t know if Helena would feel better listening to Dylan or not but can someone at least get her a beer. Thank you, Md
Thank goodness Dylan took “the bull by the horns” – I was beginning to become disgusted with her nonchalant actions. As for our main lady – she needs to open her heart – as painful as it is – if she is to truly move forward. Obviously she still has feelings for Dylan or she wouldn’t be struggling so successfully. Meanwhile Helena is playing with Brazilian fire – this is indeed intriguing. She knows it and the Brazilian knows it as well. I wonder who is going to get burned? Or will they both?? Loving your character development, Squirl! I agree with Lobo, discovering the complexities of the characters is what makes the SL so much more meaningful. Hope you are able to post more soon. East