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If it makes you happy – Chapter 34
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Chapter 33
‘Just not enough to stay’ Tina thought to herself as she watched Bette walk out of the bedroom.
Less than a minute later Bette made her way across the courtyard of Tina’s apartment complex towards her car. She pulled her cell phone out of her pocket, called Abby’s number and waited for the call to be answered.
“Hey, it’s me.” She said into the phone as she hit the remote on her keyring to unlock her car. She smiled slightly at something Abby said before responding “I’m coming over now, see you soon.”
Chapter 34
“I’m glad you’re here.” Abby said as she held her apartment door open.
Bette’s breath hitched as she drank in the sight of the woman in front of her. Abby looked positively stunning in a cornflower blue dress that seemed to make her eyes shine like sapphires. Something in the back of Bette’s mind urged her not to take another step. Her heart raced and unable to form a rational thought she crossed the threshold, incapable of coming up with a plan that would keep her safe from her own weakness.
Her palms began to sweat as she watched Abby close the door before turning to smile at her, “What’s the matter?” The blonde asked lightly whilst closing the distance between them, “Cat got your tongue?”
Before she was able to respond, Bette felt Abby’s lips on her own in a warm, sensual kiss. Her mind still shrouded in a thick fog of wanton desire, Bette reciprocated. She let herself be swept away, drowning in the sensations Abby’s lips and tongue never failed to evoke.
“There it is.” Abby said, having created not more than an inch of distance between their lips. Bette could see her smile as their foreheads rested together.
“Abby, I…” Bette began, in the hope that her thoughts would gather themselves. She was silenced with a slender finger covering her lips.
“Not now” Abby said as she looked into Bette’s want laden gaze, “The only thing I’m interested in hearing right now is you moan with pleasure as I slowly fuck your gorgeous body.”
Bette felt her heart skip a beat as her body reacted to the carefully chosen words of her seductress. “Abby, I can’t” Bette said, her voice laced with regret as her eyes fell to the floor.
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I am a bit surprised by and disappointed in Bette. It feels a bit out of character. Has Bette’s libido always been so beyond her control? Then Tina is right to worry about her.
hello hackgirl,very happy to see an update been missing the story.i hope fortlw isn’t right that tina has to woory about bette.lets just hope that she does has her libido in check.pps
i actually think it fits bette’s character…she did the same on the show when she was breaking up with jodi…the main point is: she wants and loves tina and she found the strength to resist and said goodbye…i don’t like abby and i hope she won’t cause any more problems
I’m a bit worried by your summary, “Into temptation” I don’t think being with Tina constitutes temptation. I hope I’m wrong. Back to the story…
Yay! The hero(ine) is tempted, yet she resists! Yay!!! I love this story, infrequently appearing though it may be. You show the human, realistic side of temtation, pleasure and conflicted choices. I love how Bette grew in conviction, how she gathered herself by degrees. It’s so realistic! Go, Bette, go!
Well, she resisted, didn’t she? But the way this played out she can’t really be proud of herself. Tina might be the one who needs verbal reassurance but it’s Bette who needs the physical one and the flattery… I love your writing but I don’t have much sympathy for Bette at this point. And this proves what a hell of a writer you are ;) Thank you!
jwet and you. great combo. thx
Glad to see Bette get her head out of her ass, and now let see what she gonna do next. Please post soon, thanks!
Bette is a true disappointment, but yet true to form. She actuals wants Abby and is only using Tina for her own selfish needs of finding redemption, and is not judged harshly. Tina deserves MUCH,MUCH BETTER, than Bette has to offer. She has just finish havin sex with Tina but still can not resist Abby and pretty much said in her mind that Abby was a better sex partner than Tina. Please let Tina find out that Tina slept with Abby and leave her and actually start seeing Helena again.
Sometimes, Bette’s her own worst enemy. I hope she can draw a line under this Abby thing now, but she’s going to need to tell Tina *everything*. And they’ll likely need to start afresh, again, after that, cos I don’t see Tina being instantly trustful or entirely welcoming after she learns the truth. Great chapter, HG. Thanks for the post.
Another textured interaction that feels genuine and real. Always much appreciated. Thank you for sharing.
Oh, Bette fell into temptation all right. But it seems kissing is not cheating for her. I just hope she comes clean to Tina, for once. Despite not liking Bette one bit now, I love your writing. :) Thanks for posting.
I wonder if people have been tempted before. It happens, as you succinctly portray, and it’s not necessarily easy to decline opportunity. Well written as always! Thanks for the time you take for the story.
yea Bette finally comes to her senses. It was touch and go for a while. Love how Abby’s truebcolor came out. Thanks for the chapter
At first you had me spitting fire at Bette. The first thing that she does is run back to Abby. But now, she has made the decision to fight to be with Tina and her child. Love can conquer all if given a fighting chance.
yea Bette finally comes to her senses. It was touch and go for a while. Love how Abby’s truebcolor came out. Thanks for the chapter