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Intervention – Chpt 21
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Previously
Helena emerged from Bette’s room and walked quickly into the living room. She stopped next to the couch and Bette reached up to take her hand.
“Bette. Tina. I’ll just be going. Tell Angelica I said ‘good-bye’. Call me later?” she asked Bette, at last.
Before Bette could say a word, Tina jumped up. “Helena, I’m so sorry! Don’t go!” she said, hugging her. “Thank you!”
The door to Angelica’s room squeaked and the little girl peeked out the door.
“Mommy? Mama? Can I come out now?”
“Oh, yes, sweetie, come here!” Tina called out, crying and stooping to catch Angelica as she ran into her arms.
Fluffy came bounding out behind her.
“Evweefing is better now?” Angelica asked, nuzzling her face into Tina’s neck.
“Yes, sweetie. Evweefing is much better. Thanks to the Lion Queen,” Tina smiled, looking up at Helena with tears in her eyes.
Chapter 21
Helena adjusted the volume on the baby monitor that was set between her chair and Bette’s next to the pool. Hearing Angelica’s door squeak, she smiled and resumed reading her book.
Bette peeked in to check on Angelica as she napped. She was curled up sweetly in her bed. And Fluffy lay curled on the pillow dozing with her. Bette smiled and shut the door.
When Helena heard the sliding door open, she looked up from her book. Bette approached her lounge chair next to the pool, and Helena grinned inwardly, as Bette, clad in her black two-piece bathing attire, walked towards her.
“Still sleeping contentedly?” Helena asked softly, as Bette straddled her own lounge chair and sat.
“Like a baby,” Bette said grinning.
The mid-afternoon noon sun shone brightly on the water.
Bette pulled back her hair and twisted a black elastic band around it. She lifted her sunglasses from the table next to her and turned to Helena, who was admiring her.
“What?” Bette said, grinning.
“Nothing,” Helena replied, turning her gaze back to her book.
“What?” Bette said again, reaching to brush the back of her hand gently over Helena’s cheek and removing her sunglasses as quickly as she had donned them.
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Z, you know I love this fic, and love the lovin. Bette and Helena are so hot, even if Helena does seem to be unusually limber…I love it. More, more I say! But I gotta tell ya, sex and monkeys should not be in the same sentence or paragraph or nuttin!! This was just a bit skeevy, especially with Harry watching and imitating the sex and pulling Alice’s clothes off. I think I would revisit the issue of having Harry around really fast. Where did he come from anyway? I thought Jenny lived next door, with the erstwhile Shane..not Alice. I think Bette is fairly lucky she didn’t crack Helena’s skull, tackling her poolside, but all’s well that ends well. I bet Alice would not have left one minute faster if she had seen them nude but I guess with harry seeing and doing, it was a good thing for her that they weren’t. I need to go wash my brain out with bleach now!! Write more soon!
hi,me again. Alice telling Harry to get her the scoop on Bette and Helena’s bodies?? EWWWWW! LOL
My Goddess, you’re good! “I’d prefer to go cherry picking, Darling,”. But the best is the monkey joke! That has to be the best-ever monkey joke of all time!!!! Let’s take a vote…?!!!
(…”This is obviously a case of monkey see, monkey do!” )that is.
LOL @ Hellbent. That was hysterical.Very sexy scene until Harry and company ruined it. Oh well. Poor Bette and Helena need some childless, monkey less, friendless, alone time.
Ya the monkey see, monkey do is hysterical, I was laughing right out loud. Come back soon Zheese. Thank you, Md
Hehehe! Let’s hope that Harry subscribes to (while what you gave us was the opposite of evil) hear no, see no, speak no. Is Alice more than just a dirty bisexual in this story? Does the bi refer to species as well as genders? Yikes, kind of gives a new meaning to the phrase “hot monkey love”. I think I need more wine again. And careful with all that pee-ring, eh? You know I’m lysdexsic. Well, shit zheese, as long as you put all of that on the menu this time, why don’t you have Bette get Angie all settled and give us a full out NC-17 for the next chapter. You’ve got all my prurient interests peaked now.
Hey Baby loved this update :) f I’m considered the Queen of dialogue than you are definitely the Queen of Comedy.I really loved it how you had it turned out that Harry had been spying on B&H unlike some other people who can’t seem to find the humor in this :). Keep them chapters coming baby and put as much monkey love in them as you like :) Me likey Alice & Harry very mucho.
apparently also missed out on another chap..which makes it 3… well, not anymore… anyway, loved it (‘specially Helena’s Siberia comment cracked me up.. but well, that’s like weeks ago right?!) anyway, weiredst thing just happened…again… (@monkey see, monkey do…)guess the connection’s still there. but hey…if it’s still there… *grinning mischievously* i think you need to write mooooore…immediately… request arrived? good, then go write and post asap, kay?! thanks ^^
Zheese, I am constantly amazed at your clever use of dialogue — I was rolling at the Monkey See. Harry and Alice definitely needed to punished for interrupting our lovely ladies frolicking in the pool…
I think Alice has met her soulmate!Love the update! PPS!
i love love love harry! I wish he was on the show for real….good post, hope to see more soon!
You know Z you are quite the comedium with how you are writing this great story. I love it,,,that Al and Harry are something else!!!
I love it!!!! THanks PPS
Z, hilarious as always. I swear Alice and her money are bloody priceless. Laughs. Oh man. Wipes laugh tears from my eyes. Seriously. (: Oh man. Haha. (: PPS!