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Intervention – Chpt 21
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“Oh?” Helena grinned, “It’s not? And how would your kind of dip turn out differently?”
Helena’s fingers moved strategically over Bette’s clit.
Bette began to thrash beneath Helena.
“God!”
Helena slid down further, removing Bette’s suit bottom. She threw it back and it landed in the pool as Helena began sucking and nibbling on Bette’s clit.
Placing her palms against each of Helena’s cheeks, Bette lay back and relaxed, rocking into the touch of Helena’s tongue.
“It would have been you coming,” Bette managed to utter in spasms, answering Helena’s almost forgotten question.
Helena entered Bette and looked up to watch her contorted face before it relaxed into bliss. She lay on top of her and felt her body breathing, slowing its contractions.
They lay peacefully there for a while.
Then Bette nudged Helena. “Let me up,” she said quietly.
“Where are you going?” Helena asked softly, licking Bette’s ear.
“To retrieve my bottoms from the pool,” Bette answered softly.
“Allow me,” Helena said, raising up and smiling into Bette’s eyes.
“Be my guest,” Bette replied, smiling back naughtily.
After kissing Bette, Helena raised up and stood, heading towards the pool. She bent over, leaning to reach Bette’s discarded and floating trunks.
Bette, grinning hugely, lunged and grabbed Helena around the waist. She quickly slid her bikini bottoms down around her ankles and pushed her into the deep end of the pool. Helena screamed, and the garment, that had been covering her luscious ass, floated away from around her feet. Bette laughed and dove in after her, pulling her to the side of the pool. Their heads bobbing above the surface, Bette kissed Helena passionately.
They were interrupted from a sound not far away.
“Harry! Oh, Harry!” they heard call.
Looking around, they saw Alice open the gate that led from Shane’s to the pool.
“Hey! You guys seen Harry?” Alice yelled nonchalantly, her head moving here and there, searching, and moving closer to the pool.
“Alice! What the fuck?” Bette yelled, conscious that both she and Helena were naked from the waist down and had just made love.
Suddenly all of their eyes looked up to the chatter in the tree above the fence that girdled Bette’s pool.
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Z, you know I love this fic, and love the lovin. Bette and Helena are so hot, even if Helena does seem to be unusually limber…I love it. More, more I say! But I gotta tell ya, sex and monkeys should not be in the same sentence or paragraph or nuttin!! This was just a bit skeevy, especially with Harry watching and imitating the sex and pulling Alice’s clothes off. I think I would revisit the issue of having Harry around really fast. Where did he come from anyway? I thought Jenny lived next door, with the erstwhile Shane..not Alice. I think Bette is fairly lucky she didn’t crack Helena’s skull, tackling her poolside, but all’s well that ends well. I bet Alice would not have left one minute faster if she had seen them nude but I guess with harry seeing and doing, it was a good thing for her that they weren’t. I need to go wash my brain out with bleach now!! Write more soon!
hi,me again. Alice telling Harry to get her the scoop on Bette and Helena’s bodies?? EWWWWW! LOL
My Goddess, you’re good! “I’d prefer to go cherry picking, Darling,”. But the best is the monkey joke! That has to be the best-ever monkey joke of all time!!!! Let’s take a vote…?!!!
(…”This is obviously a case of monkey see, monkey do!” )that is.
LOL @ Hellbent. That was hysterical.Very sexy scene until Harry and company ruined it. Oh well. Poor Bette and Helena need some childless, monkey less, friendless, alone time.
Ya the monkey see, monkey do is hysterical, I was laughing right out loud. Come back soon Zheese. Thank you, Md
Hehehe! Let’s hope that Harry subscribes to (while what you gave us was the opposite of evil) hear no, see no, speak no. Is Alice more than just a dirty bisexual in this story? Does the bi refer to species as well as genders? Yikes, kind of gives a new meaning to the phrase “hot monkey love”. I think I need more wine again. And careful with all that pee-ring, eh? You know I’m lysdexsic. Well, shit zheese, as long as you put all of that on the menu this time, why don’t you have Bette get Angie all settled and give us a full out NC-17 for the next chapter. You’ve got all my prurient interests peaked now.
Hey Baby loved this update :) f I’m considered the Queen of dialogue than you are definitely the Queen of Comedy.I really loved it how you had it turned out that Harry had been spying on B&H unlike some other people who can’t seem to find the humor in this :). Keep them chapters coming baby and put as much monkey love in them as you like :) Me likey Alice & Harry very mucho.
apparently also missed out on another chap..which makes it 3… well, not anymore… anyway, loved it (‘specially Helena’s Siberia comment cracked me up.. but well, that’s like weeks ago right?!) anyway, weiredst thing just happened…again… (@monkey see, monkey do…)guess the connection’s still there. but hey…if it’s still there… *grinning mischievously* i think you need to write mooooore…immediately… request arrived? good, then go write and post asap, kay?! thanks ^^
Zheese, I am constantly amazed at your clever use of dialogue — I was rolling at the Monkey See. Harry and Alice definitely needed to punished for interrupting our lovely ladies frolicking in the pool…
I think Alice has met her soulmate!Love the update! PPS!
i love love love harry! I wish he was on the show for real….good post, hope to see more soon!
You know Z you are quite the comedium with how you are writing this great story. I love it,,,that Al and Harry are something else!!!
I love it!!!! THanks PPS
Z, hilarious as always. I swear Alice and her money are bloody priceless. Laughs. Oh man. Wipes laugh tears from my eyes. Seriously. (: Oh man. Haha. (: PPS!