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Intervention – Chpt 21
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“Harry! Come down from there!” Alice screamed, espying her new chimp in the tree. “I been lookin’ all over for you!”
Bette and Helena huddled together in the water.
Harry jumped down and padded awkwardly across the concrete towards Alice from the distance. He was wearing swimming trunks.
“Alice! You’ve got that animal bathing attire!” Helena exclaimed with astonishment, wiping her wet hand over her eyes.
“Yeah, I thought we’d stop by for a swim.”
“Alice! Damnit! You’re so presumptuous!” Bette yelled, chastising her, still conscious of she and her partner’s partial nudity below the surface of the water. “You need to leave!”
“Okay! Okay!” Alice cried, holding out her arms to the ape. “We know when we’re not wanted. Don’t we, Harry?”
Harry chattered and oo-ed.
Without warning, he pulled down Alice’s pants and shoved her in the pool and quickly dove in after her.
Alice’s head emerged from the water as Harry pulled her arm to safety.
Bette and Helena couldn’t help but howl with laughter, still holding each other closely.
Alice shook her head vigorously, shedding water. She noticed two sets of bathing suit bottoms floating in the water along with her shorts. Harry crawled out of the pool and squatted next to it, peering at Alice.
“What are you two laughing at?” she hollered to her friends, wiping the excess moisture from her face. “This is obviously a case of monkey see, monkey do!”
“Let’s hope not! I know you love Harry, Alice. But let’s hope entirely not!” Helena said, meeting eyes with Bette.
Alice looked from Helena to Bette and back and forth quickly.
“You mean? You mean you just…?” Alice coughed.
Bette and Helena just stared back at Alice with smirks.
“Harry!” Alice screamed. “You frickin’ voyeur!”
Harry cowered and hid his eyes behind his arm.
“Mama!” Angelica cried out through the baby monitor. “Mama!”
“It’s Angie! I’ve got to get out,” she yelled, pushing herself up on the edge of the pool. Suddenly, she remembered she was nude from the waist down.
“Alice, turn around!” she yelled.
“Me? Turn around? Ain’t nothin’ I ain’t seen before! And what about her!” Alice yelled back, pointing to Helena.
“She’s seen it too, Alice. But she’s allowed now! So turn your ass around!” Bette screamed.
“Jesus!” Alice complained, turning away. “Harry, you gotta give me the scoop later, okay? I knew I loved ya for a reason!”
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Z, you know I love this fic, and love the lovin. Bette and Helena are so hot, even if Helena does seem to be unusually limber…I love it. More, more I say! But I gotta tell ya, sex and monkeys should not be in the same sentence or paragraph or nuttin!! This was just a bit skeevy, especially with Harry watching and imitating the sex and pulling Alice’s clothes off. I think I would revisit the issue of having Harry around really fast. Where did he come from anyway? I thought Jenny lived next door, with the erstwhile Shane..not Alice. I think Bette is fairly lucky she didn’t crack Helena’s skull, tackling her poolside, but all’s well that ends well. I bet Alice would not have left one minute faster if she had seen them nude but I guess with harry seeing and doing, it was a good thing for her that they weren’t. I need to go wash my brain out with bleach now!! Write more soon!
hi,me again. Alice telling Harry to get her the scoop on Bette and Helena’s bodies?? EWWWWW! LOL
My Goddess, you’re good! “I’d prefer to go cherry picking, Darling,”. But the best is the monkey joke! That has to be the best-ever monkey joke of all time!!!! Let’s take a vote…?!!!
(…”This is obviously a case of monkey see, monkey do!” )that is.
LOL @ Hellbent. That was hysterical.Very sexy scene until Harry and company ruined it. Oh well. Poor Bette and Helena need some childless, monkey less, friendless, alone time.
Ya the monkey see, monkey do is hysterical, I was laughing right out loud. Come back soon Zheese. Thank you, Md
Hehehe! Let’s hope that Harry subscribes to (while what you gave us was the opposite of evil) hear no, see no, speak no. Is Alice more than just a dirty bisexual in this story? Does the bi refer to species as well as genders? Yikes, kind of gives a new meaning to the phrase “hot monkey love”. I think I need more wine again. And careful with all that pee-ring, eh? You know I’m lysdexsic. Well, shit zheese, as long as you put all of that on the menu this time, why don’t you have Bette get Angie all settled and give us a full out NC-17 for the next chapter. You’ve got all my prurient interests peaked now.
Hey Baby loved this update :) f I’m considered the Queen of dialogue than you are definitely the Queen of Comedy.I really loved it how you had it turned out that Harry had been spying on B&H unlike some other people who can’t seem to find the humor in this :). Keep them chapters coming baby and put as much monkey love in them as you like :) Me likey Alice & Harry very mucho.
apparently also missed out on another chap..which makes it 3… well, not anymore… anyway, loved it (‘specially Helena’s Siberia comment cracked me up.. but well, that’s like weeks ago right?!) anyway, weiredst thing just happened…again… (@monkey see, monkey do…)guess the connection’s still there. but hey…if it’s still there… *grinning mischievously* i think you need to write mooooore…immediately… request arrived? good, then go write and post asap, kay?! thanks ^^
Zheese, I am constantly amazed at your clever use of dialogue — I was rolling at the Monkey See. Harry and Alice definitely needed to punished for interrupting our lovely ladies frolicking in the pool…
I think Alice has met her soulmate!Love the update! PPS!
i love love love harry! I wish he was on the show for real….good post, hope to see more soon!
You know Z you are quite the comedium with how you are writing this great story. I love it,,,that Al and Harry are something else!!!
I love it!!!! THanks PPS
Z, hilarious as always. I swear Alice and her money are bloody priceless. Laughs. Oh man. Wipes laugh tears from my eyes. Seriously. (: Oh man. Haha. (: PPS!