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    Something so right – chapter 67

    Story written on January 23, 2009 by allyemmerson.
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    Bette’s big night

    SOMETHING SO RIGHT

    Chapter 67

     

    Tina looked around the gallery – this was the culmination of a show that Bette had been planning when they first met. This was the show that she had seen her lover put blood, sweat and tears into. She had worked so hard at this and this was the result. A truly ground breaking show that would take people’s breath away. This show would shake the LA art scene and everyone would want to come and see the spectacular pieces that Bette had gathered.

     

     

    Tina could see for the first time how putting on a show was very like movie production. To make something this beautiful and thoughtful took hard work and months of careful preparation. In the film world Tina could call on specialists in lighting and have a set designed for her so she could see what it looked like. Bette had just relied on her own talents and this was her displaying her own skills and backing her judgement. Tina loved Bette and was so utterly proud of her – tonight was the high watermark of Tina’s devotion to her lover.

    A noise made her turn and she saw that woman – her best friend, lover and tonight very much the supreme gallery

    manager Bette Porter. Even though she had watched her dress Tina could still have her breath taken away by the woman she loved. Bette look fantastic. She had straightened her naturally curly hair and it hung loose. Tina had never seen Bette with straight hair and it was a wonderfully new view of her partner. Bette was wearing an exquisite black two piece suit and white blouse. She was wearing an ethnic necklace that drew attention to itself. All in all the effect was just stunning – in three inch high heeled boots she looked even more in command of the room. Tina smiled at her as Bette came across to her

     

    “Its all ready “

     

    “Its 17:55 – are you ready to open the doors yet ?”

     

    “In five minutes I will be. Are you ready for this ?”

     

    Tina nodded – when Bette had told her that she wanted her by her side when the exhibition opened Tina had been very anxious. But she knew that her place was by her side – that was what couples did -they supported one another. Plus there was no greater situation in which to show that they had never been happier or more in love. Alice had warned her that there would be prowlers out with their prime target being the glamorous Bette Porter. Tina’s position by Bette’s side – at Bette’s request meant that Tina’s position was unassailable.

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    1. Okay, Ally… you know I love this story, but Tina needs to put her notions about marriage related to her parent’s arrangement to rest and move on to the monogomist union example she and Bette can define… seriously! Tina needs to say YES! *wink* PPS!

    2. Oh my God Ally that is worse than Miss Chaiken herself.I don’t believe Tina said NO. Then again with her parents marriage being the way that it is, she maybe scared.I hope this doesn’t mean they will separate or anything like that.

    3. ِAlly what’s that???? Did you honestly ended this chapter like this, I am shocked, why did you do this to Bette?? My God my heart is breaking for her, I honestly didn’t see that coming, I mean what does Tina have to say to justify herself??? Unless she wanted to be the one who propose. PLEASE post soon, you are probably laughing at us and at our comments, I feel like you have something in store and I can’t wait to find out what is it exactly. Thank you so much for being the amazing writer and one the most talented writers that you are. Love

    6. OMG, I think Tina said no because of her parents lousy open marriage. But the embarrassment for Bette is astronomical. I feel so sad and sorry for Bette that others have witnessed this debacle, not to mention ruining one of the greatest nights of Bette’s life. Please post your explanation very soon. Thanks for posting, I think.

    7. Are you kidding…who would ever believe theywould say no to Bette Porter???? There better be a way out of this Ally. Great update and it certainly made everyone take notice!

    9. Ok gang, the fugitive’s name is ‘Ally Emmerson’ she’s on the run…we’re gonna spread out and check every hen house, pool house and dog house in the area… LOL! Got carried away there but you better post soon or I will send my posse out to get you!

    13. So you are saying that Bette is on her knee and Tina says no? All I have to say is why Ally why? I know you love the cliffhangers but this was just cruel. Excuse me as I wipe a tear from my eye.

    19. hihi oke you held something back for us huh! because this isn’t happening, is it?!? :S OMG.. you have the worst timing you know, how can you stop right here.. there is something about writers, they always stop at the wrong moment you know! :P but i like it, i have some fate.. so do not disappoint me oke!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!PPS! and thank you very much for this update :)

    22. oh boy… good thing its a friday which i am hoping means you will have time to give us the next chapter over the weekend! at least i’m sure that B&T will be fine in your hands :)

    24. Noooooo, why oh why do cliffies even exist!!! Come on Ally… between you and Tina are going to give me a heart attack! What’s wrong with that girl, why doesn’t she want to marry Bette?? Great update… oh and I didn’t leave a comment on JTWYA but I’m still loving every minute of it! Please post pretty soon… pleeaasssee?? :o)

    26. I tend to agree with honda90, but the fact that Bette ask her to marry her and she said No worries me. I could see if she asked her to be her wife and she said No I want you to be MY wife and wipped out a ring. Come on Ally PPVS :o).

    29. Oh, Ally, you are sooooo naughty! Hehe! What were the Hitchcock films Shane and Finn saw? Vertigo is my favorite, but I admit it had to grow on me and I wonder if those two are quite old enough to appreciate it fully.

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