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Something so right – chapter 67
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we are teaching one another new things. We went to the movies the other night “
“What was on ? “
“A Hitchcock series at the local indie cinema -it was a fantastic night. Your brother is a sweetheart and you have every reason to be proud of him “
“I am – he has fitted in so well “
“My current tenant is talking about moving out – if Finn would like the room “
“You mean it ? “
“Sure – he is at my place a lot – and I like him around. He wants to build a greenhouse “
“At your place ? “
“Sure – he wants to grow salad foods and maybe some soft fruits outside “
“You don’t eat greens – that’s what Bette has always told me “
“We are starting to cook when he is around “
“You two cook ? “
Shane nodded
“You two are a very odd couple “ Tina commented
“I just see him as a mate – and Tina – the women just adore him “
“Is he being – eh – careful ?”
“I gather he is – he tried a jacket on when we went shopping and a 6 pack of condoms fell out of his jacket. I would say he’s not going to make you an auntie just yet “
“Thank God for that “
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It was close to 11 and the crowd had thinned out. Bette looked around – in total there was about 20 people still there – among them Helena, Alice and Peggy who had been there for the whole evening. Bette felt very happy that she had friends who were prepared to support her to this extent. Tina was talking to Helena – Bette decided that this was the time to take Tina to one side and ask her to spend the rest of her life with her.
“Helena – can I borrow Tina for five minutes ? “
“Of course “
Bette rested her hand on Tina’s back and lead her away to a corner of the gallery that wasn’t being used. Tina smiled
“I thought you were going to wait until we are in our bed before you ravish me ?”
Tina grinned
Bette swallowed and touched the ring box in her pocket. This was the time to ask Tina to marry her.
“Tina. When I first saw you I think part of me knew that my life would never be the same again. You have given me more love than I ever thought was possible. I love you so much Tina. I know we have our problems but you are so strong and loving and you know me so well – better than I know myself. I love you with every part of my being and I know that for me- there is only ever going to be you. “
Bette reached into her pocket and pulled out the ring box. She opened it and swallowed again. This was the moment that had been building up since Hawaii – that was when Bette had first started to think about spending her life with Tina.
“Tina “
Bette dropped to one knee
“I love you and I really want to spend the rest of my life with you. I would be the proudest woman in the world if you would agree to wear my ring and agree to marry me “
There was a silence – Tina’s hand was on her mouth in shock. For several year long seconds Tina did not speak. Bette’s smile wavered a little but stayed in place for a few more minutes.
“I love you Bette but – no “
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Okay, Ally… you know I love this story, but Tina needs to put her notions about marriage related to her parent’s arrangement to rest and move on to the monogomist union example she and Bette can define… seriously! Tina needs to say YES! *wink* PPS!
Oh my God Ally that is worse than Miss Chaiken herself.I don’t believe Tina said NO. Then again with her parents marriage being the way that it is, she maybe scared.I hope this doesn’t mean they will separate or anything like that.
ÙAlly what’s that???? Did you honestly ended this chapter like this, I am shocked, why did you do this to Bette?? My God my heart is breaking for her, I honestly didn’t see that coming, I mean what does Tina have to say to justify herself??? Unless she wanted to be the one who propose. PLEASE post soon, you are probably laughing at us and at our comments, I feel like you have something in store and I can’t wait to find out what is it exactly. Thank you so much for being the amazing writer and one the most talented writers that you are. Love
Aww why Tina why? PPS
The night was going so well. Why did Tina say no? There better be a good explanation for this. Thanks for posting!
OMG, I think Tina said no because of her parents lousy open marriage. But the embarrassment for Bette is astronomical. I feel so sad and sorry for Bette that others have witnessed this debacle, not to mention ruining one of the greatest nights of Bette’s life. Please post your explanation very soon. Thanks for posting, I think.
Are you kidding…who would ever believe theywould say no to Bette Porter???? There better be a way out of this Ally. Great update and it certainly made everyone take notice!
Aahhh.So cruel of you for leaving it like that. PPS :)
Ok gang, the fugitive’s name is ‘Ally Emmerson’ she’s on the run…we’re gonna spread out and check every hen house, pool house and dog house in the area… LOL! Got carried away there but you better post soon or I will send my posse out to get you!
WHAT!!!!!!!! (i just scared the dog with my screaming)
Please don’t do this to us, your loyal readers! Not nice! And it was so good up to the last line!
This is a joke right, Please update soon
So you are saying that Bette is on her knee and Tina says no? All I have to say is why Ally why? I know you love the cliffhangers but this was just cruel. Excuse me as I wipe a tear from my eye.
oh my god !! Why ………… I am really sad now – PPS really soon I cant cope !
Just got caught up on this story and loving it. I hope that Tina is just in shock and rethinks her answer. Please? PPS!
What?….you bette continue this and soon!
Ok, before any panic sets in here is my take. The no, is because Tina is going to whip out a ring and ask her……..pls pls pls.
What?!?! And you stop at that. Bad, Ally. Bad! This is a great chapter… But I think a page is missing. ;) PPS
hihi oke you held something back for us huh! because this isn’t happening, is it?!? :S OMG.. you have the worst timing you know, how can you stop right here.. there is something about writers, they always stop at the wrong moment you know! :P but i like it, i have some fate.. so do not disappoint me oke!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!PPS! and thank you very much for this update :)
You’re bad, Ally! You know you can’t stop there! Just maybe Tina is saying no because she wants to propose to Bette! PPS
what? why did u stop there? hopefully tina has a good reason for saying like she has a ring for bette?:)PPS
oh boy… good thing its a friday which i am hoping means you will have time to give us the next chapter over the weekend! at least i’m sure that B&T will be fine in your hands :)
Ally, that was just bad of you to stop there. Why would Tina say No? Please give us a new chapter ASAP!!!! Thanks
Noooooo, why oh why do cliffies even exist!!! Come on Ally… between you and Tina are going to give me a heart attack! What’s wrong with that girl, why doesn’t she want to marry Bette?? Great update… oh and I didn’t leave a comment on JTWYA but I’m still loving every minute of it! Please post pretty soon… pleeaasssee?? :o)
WTF! No!!! i am so hurt for bette or is T or U playing us? pps
I tend to agree with honda90, but the fact that Bette ask her to marry her and she said No worries me. I could see if she asked her to be her wife and she said No I want you to be MY wife and wipped out a ring. Come on Ally PPVS :o).
OMFG NO ???? O_oPPS ally PLEASE
Oh Ally you’re such a tease! Anyway who says no to Bette Porter? Please explain before too long, pretty please!
Oh, Ally, you are sooooo naughty! Hehe! What were the Hitchcock films Shane and Finn saw? Vertigo is my favorite, but I admit it had to grow on me and I wonder if those two are quite old enough to appreciate it fully.
oh no why ????????