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    Something so right – chapter 67

    Story written on January 23, 2009 by allyemmerson.
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    Bette’s big night

     

    Bette reached out and took Tina’s hand

     

    “That dress is sensational “

     

    Tina was wearing a ivory/white dress – it had a split up one thigh and showed off her long pale legs. The neckline was just on the right side of daring and Helena had lent Tina a diamond necklace that was a Peabody heirloom. Her blonde hair was tied up on the top of her head and the whole effect was finished off by high heel shoes. She felt self conscious but she knew this outfit was the right one for this event – it was vital to her that she made the same right impression that Bette wanted for the rest of her show.

     

    “Can’t wait to get it off “

     

    “I was thinking the same “ Bette said with a smile

     

    “Porter “ Tina pushed Bette who laughed

     

    “Seriously – this show has been the most fun to do because of how wonderful you have been. I know there have been times when I have come home and bored you senseless about some tiny detail that I was obsessing about at the time. You have been nothing but loving and supportive. I couldn’t have done it without you angel “

     

    Bette lent forward and kissed Tina passionately. Tina touched her face and whispered

     

    “You are amazing and I will never have been prouder of you than tonight. You are something so special “

     

    “Come on you two -just for once leave it until you get home “

     

    Bette sighed and smiled privately at Tina. She turned to see Alice, Helena and Peggy Peabody arriving. Alice looked good in a light cotton dress, Helena’s flame red dress was stunning and Peggy looked as classy as always in a black cocktail dress.

    “Darling Bette “

     

    Peggy hurried forward and hugged the brunette. Peggy was very fond of Bette and when Helena had told her that she was with Tina – Helena’s best friend she could not have been happier. Bette needed a woman to love and to worship – and Tina was strong enough to allow her that level of devotion.

    “Peggy – I am so glad that you are here – all of you – welcome to my gallery “

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    1. Okay, Ally… you know I love this story, but Tina needs to put her notions about marriage related to her parent’s arrangement to rest and move on to the monogomist union example she and Bette can define… seriously! Tina needs to say YES! *wink* PPS!

    2. Oh my God Ally that is worse than Miss Chaiken herself.I don’t believe Tina said NO. Then again with her parents marriage being the way that it is, she maybe scared.I hope this doesn’t mean they will separate or anything like that.

    3. ِAlly what’s that???? Did you honestly ended this chapter like this, I am shocked, why did you do this to Bette?? My God my heart is breaking for her, I honestly didn’t see that coming, I mean what does Tina have to say to justify herself??? Unless she wanted to be the one who propose. PLEASE post soon, you are probably laughing at us and at our comments, I feel like you have something in store and I can’t wait to find out what is it exactly. Thank you so much for being the amazing writer and one the most talented writers that you are. Love

    6. OMG, I think Tina said no because of her parents lousy open marriage. But the embarrassment for Bette is astronomical. I feel so sad and sorry for Bette that others have witnessed this debacle, not to mention ruining one of the greatest nights of Bette’s life. Please post your explanation very soon. Thanks for posting, I think.

    7. Are you kidding…who would ever believe theywould say no to Bette Porter???? There better be a way out of this Ally. Great update and it certainly made everyone take notice!

    9. Ok gang, the fugitive’s name is ‘Ally Emmerson’ she’s on the run…we’re gonna spread out and check every hen house, pool house and dog house in the area… LOL! Got carried away there but you better post soon or I will send my posse out to get you!

    13. So you are saying that Bette is on her knee and Tina says no? All I have to say is why Ally why? I know you love the cliffhangers but this was just cruel. Excuse me as I wipe a tear from my eye.

    19. hihi oke you held something back for us huh! because this isn’t happening, is it?!? :S OMG.. you have the worst timing you know, how can you stop right here.. there is something about writers, they always stop at the wrong moment you know! :P but i like it, i have some fate.. so do not disappoint me oke!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!PPS! and thank you very much for this update :)

    22. oh boy… good thing its a friday which i am hoping means you will have time to give us the next chapter over the weekend! at least i’m sure that B&T will be fine in your hands :)

    24. Noooooo, why oh why do cliffies even exist!!! Come on Ally… between you and Tina are going to give me a heart attack! What’s wrong with that girl, why doesn’t she want to marry Bette?? Great update… oh and I didn’t leave a comment on JTWYA but I’m still loving every minute of it! Please post pretty soon… pleeaasssee?? :o)

    26. I tend to agree with honda90, but the fact that Bette ask her to marry her and she said No worries me. I could see if she asked her to be her wife and she said No I want you to be MY wife and wipped out a ring. Come on Ally PPVS :o).

    29. Oh, Ally, you are sooooo naughty! Hehe! What were the Hitchcock films Shane and Finn saw? Vertigo is my favorite, but I admit it had to grow on me and I wonder if those two are quite old enough to appreciate it fully.

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