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Something so right – chapter 83
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Something so right
Chapter 83
Tina rolled over in bed, reaching out for her lover – her absence caused the blonde to open her eyes and look at the clock. Instinct told her that Bette wasn’t just using the toilet or raiding the fridge. Knowing what was on Bette’s mind Tina got up, pulled a tee-shirt over her head and went looking for her. Bette was sitting alone at the kitchen table – the clock on the oven read 3:01. She sipped her drink and turned over another page of the photograph album and stared at the pictures. Tina stood for a few seconds just watching Bette – her heart was really aching for her – Bette was just so lost about the sudden appearance of her mother. Tina sat down beside Bette and just rested her hand on hers.
“I can go back to bed if you want to be alone “ Tina said
“No – please stay with me “
Bette pushed the album towards Tina “Its her”
Tina looked at a picture that Bette rested her finger on. It was of Bette’s parents at a formal dinner. Melvin was in a dinner jacket with a white shirt and black bowtie, Elizabeth Porter was wearing a black cocktail dress – Bette was right – there was no doubt that the woman who had introduced herself to them the day before was the same woman who beamed at them from that photograph
“Oh if only these pictures could talk – if only she could step out of the photo and tell us how she was feeling “ Tina commented
Bette nodded and kissed Tina’s hand “ Tina – I have no idea what the hell to do about all of this “
“How do you feel about seeing your father again ?”
“There is a reason I haven’t seen him in 3 years “
“Is he really an old bigot ?”
“He can be utterly charming. Its funny when I was growing up people would tell me what a great bloke my father was. Oh Bette – you are so lucky – Melvin is such a laugh – such a great man – you must be very proud of him. “
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haha soo good!! absolutely love your story! thanks! :D
“That is my wife Hannah ” WOW…. I DIDN’T SEE THAT COMING!!! GREAT UPDETE BY THE WAY :)
Absolutely wonderful, just wait till Melvin knows his ex has a wife, going to be some fireworks.
That is a great twist! Bette’s mom is full of secrets. It will be interesting if Bette goes and confronts Melvin after all this. Thanks for posting so many wonderful stories!
Wow didn’t see that one coming. Melvin must have known and that is why he is so down on Bette. Can’t wait for B&T’s talk with her dad. PPPPS
Didn’t see that coming, like mother like daughter no wonder Melvin didn’t approve of Bettes sexuality. Glad they talk and Elizabet explain why is she leaving Bette. Please post more, thanks!
Always the drama queen. Makes for interesting stories.
Yeah your definitely on a roll. Not complaining though :D Wow, just wow!
whoa… didn’t see that one coming :) great update ally!
Huh…wife Hannah? Didn’t see that coming. Great update! Hope your roll continues.
Oh man! I really didn’t expect that. Great story and can’t wait to read more. Thank you :)
she was on top??? sounds fun. thx
Oh yeah, you are on a roll! Love it!!
Well Ally, you certainly know how to leave us hanging! So Mom’s a lesbian too. I hope that roll you’re on keeps going, because I definitely need the next chapter of this story soon!
Keep them coming, Ally! PPS!
I keep reading all your stories and you keep getting my attention with the way you write and the happenings in your stories. You are very good at keeping the tension in them. Love it! Keep writing, please!
This story is getting better and better-if possible..!
Like mother like daughter; Hannah and Tina. What is Melvin going to say when he sees Elizabeth??????? PPS
hmmm…Elizabeth has a wife…maybe now we know why Melvin doesn’t approve of Bette’s sexuality – the old buzzard! PPS!
Oh boy, the thickened pot is starting to stir…
WOW…. Like mother like daughter for sure…. But what the hell took Elizabeth so long. 10 yrs sober, she should have made amends before now. great story
Oh wow! I wasn’t expecting that. I wonder if that’s not why Melvin is so terribly pissed about Bette. Great chappie, as always.
OMG, no wonder Melvin doesn’t like Bette being lesbian, like mother, like daughter. The old bastard knew Eliz was gay and wanted to leave him and take Bettead he did not want to be embarrased by her sexuality. And he probably thought he would be chided, “can’t hold your woman, lost her to another woman’s bed.” Oh damn, I love it. Serves him right. Pleaase post soon, I want to know how far Tina and Bette’s mouths dropped open, mine certainly did. I hope Tina and Bette find this info as uproariously funny as I did. This info will help Bette understand a lot of things. Wonderful AllyE, just freaking wonderful.
Great story. Iwould really love to read where Bette wades into Melvine for all his small minded, belittling diatribe over the years. I know you and she could cut him to ribbons.
ha-ha, way to pull that one out of the hat Elizabeth, ‘my wife Hannah’. Love it!! Hope the roll continues.
OMG this is great melvin has a lot to answer for ! :)PPS
Cider?
Ally, What a great chapter. Melvin has alot to answer for. Thank you I love this story. PPS
WOO!! knocked my buttox for a loop! its so great to read bette is so like her mother in many ways. and, snigger snigger…. didn’t we all say it’s in the genes? NOW tis time for mother and daughter and ms. tina to bombard mr. melvin with the porter/kennard verbal bitch slap. but hey, i am lovin’ this story. great reading. thanxs for sharing and taking the time to post this for us.