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Something so right – chapter 83
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“You didn’t agree ?”
“He could be sweet and I just worshipped him Tina “
“Just about every girl just worships her father. I know that I do “
“Your dad is sweet and lovely – mine isn’t “
Tina took a good look at the picture – there was no deception – this woman was Bette’s mom. She had given birth to the woman that Tina loved and then abandoned her. She was the reason that Bette was so desperate to marry – she wanted to feel that Tina would not leave her the way that her mother had.
“I have always wondered why she left “
“For a mother to leave their child there must have been a very major reason “
“And she stayed away “
“Maybe she found it too hard to come back or to know whether she should or not”
“What did you make of her ?”
“I was creeped out that she knew who I was “
“That was weird I know – I don’t know Tina – its going to take over my whole thinking “
“Its bound to be on your mind all the time at the moment “
“I want so many answers from her – the main one is WHY “
“You could call her and see what she has to say “
“I think that I am going to have to “
“What about your father ?”
“I was just dropping off to sleep earlier when it suddenly popped into my head that what if what she says is right -what if he did spend my college fund and what if he’s keeping this trust fund from me. It makes my whole life a lie – he has always used the fact that he brought me up as a single father and look how I repaid him – by becoming a lesbian to spite him almost – the fucking old hypocrite “
“So far we don’t know much do we ?”
“No – what do you want to do Bette ?”
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haha soo good!! absolutely love your story! thanks! :D
“That is my wife Hannah ” WOW…. I DIDN’T SEE THAT COMING!!! GREAT UPDETE BY THE WAY :)
Absolutely wonderful, just wait till Melvin knows his ex has a wife, going to be some fireworks.
That is a great twist! Bette’s mom is full of secrets. It will be interesting if Bette goes and confronts Melvin after all this. Thanks for posting so many wonderful stories!
Wow didn’t see that one coming. Melvin must have known and that is why he is so down on Bette. Can’t wait for B&T’s talk with her dad. PPPPS
Didn’t see that coming, like mother like daughter no wonder Melvin didn’t approve of Bettes sexuality. Glad they talk and Elizabet explain why is she leaving Bette. Please post more, thanks!
Always the drama queen. Makes for interesting stories.
Yeah your definitely on a roll. Not complaining though :D Wow, just wow!
whoa… didn’t see that one coming :) great update ally!
Huh…wife Hannah? Didn’t see that coming. Great update! Hope your roll continues.
Oh man! I really didn’t expect that. Great story and can’t wait to read more. Thank you :)
she was on top??? sounds fun. thx
Oh yeah, you are on a roll! Love it!!
Well Ally, you certainly know how to leave us hanging! So Mom’s a lesbian too. I hope that roll you’re on keeps going, because I definitely need the next chapter of this story soon!
Keep them coming, Ally! PPS!
I keep reading all your stories and you keep getting my attention with the way you write and the happenings in your stories. You are very good at keeping the tension in them. Love it! Keep writing, please!
This story is getting better and better-if possible..!
Like mother like daughter; Hannah and Tina. What is Melvin going to say when he sees Elizabeth??????? PPS
hmmm…Elizabeth has a wife…maybe now we know why Melvin doesn’t approve of Bette’s sexuality – the old buzzard! PPS!
Oh boy, the thickened pot is starting to stir…
WOW…. Like mother like daughter for sure…. But what the hell took Elizabeth so long. 10 yrs sober, she should have made amends before now. great story
Oh wow! I wasn’t expecting that. I wonder if that’s not why Melvin is so terribly pissed about Bette. Great chappie, as always.
OMG, no wonder Melvin doesn’t like Bette being lesbian, like mother, like daughter. The old bastard knew Eliz was gay and wanted to leave him and take Bettead he did not want to be embarrased by her sexuality. And he probably thought he would be chided, “can’t hold your woman, lost her to another woman’s bed.” Oh damn, I love it. Serves him right. Pleaase post soon, I want to know how far Tina and Bette’s mouths dropped open, mine certainly did. I hope Tina and Bette find this info as uproariously funny as I did. This info will help Bette understand a lot of things. Wonderful AllyE, just freaking wonderful.
Great story. Iwould really love to read where Bette wades into Melvine for all his small minded, belittling diatribe over the years. I know you and she could cut him to ribbons.
ha-ha, way to pull that one out of the hat Elizabeth, ‘my wife Hannah’. Love it!! Hope the roll continues.
OMG this is great melvin has a lot to answer for ! :)PPS
Cider?
Ally, What a great chapter. Melvin has alot to answer for. Thank you I love this story. PPS
WOO!! knocked my buttox for a loop! its so great to read bette is so like her mother in many ways. and, snigger snigger…. didn’t we all say it’s in the genes? NOW tis time for mother and daughter and ms. tina to bombard mr. melvin with the porter/kennard verbal bitch slap. but hey, i am lovin’ this story. great reading. thanxs for sharing and taking the time to post this for us.