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Chapter 5
“Alice … Alice” Dana struggled to stop the onslaught of pushing and shoving that was Alice. “ALICE … you can’t do that here.” Dana desperately pants while squeezing her eyes shut. She and Alice were smack dab in the center of a mass of undulating bodies, moving up and down to a beat that can be felt as much as heard. They have been dancing up close and personal, rubbing their hips together in rhythm to the beat long enough that they both were to the point of wanting more. Alice at first had just grabbed onto Dana’s hips and held them tight against her own. This has resulted in their bodies moving as one, Alice thrusting forward every other moment or two hoping to achieve maximum friction between them. But soon this was not enough for Alice, which was why Dana was struggling to get Alice’s attention. She feels exposed with Alice’s new antics. It is just Dana has more control and discretion then to proceed to the next level in the middle of a public place.
For Alice this was natural, the next step. She had only one thought, one goal. So involved was Alice in achieving her goal of plunging into Dana’s pants, she doesn’t hear Dana’s protests above the music. Her mind was determined to overcome all of Dana’s inhibitions including the one about initiating sex in public places. With all the build up over the last few hours, fueled by alcohol, Alice wants nothing less then to reach her ultimate prize.
Dana involuntary responses kick in at Alice’s persistence. “Alice NO.”
Jerking away to emphasis her point, Dana traps Alice’s hand somewhere between her waistband and her shirt. When Dana’s large step back reached the length of Alice’s arm, Alice was jerked forward tipping her off balance her wrist caught up in the material of Dana’s waistband. Falling forward with only one arm to catch herself Alice grabs onto Dana blouse while her face gets buried in Dana’s chest.
Nervous that someone would see them, Dana frantically looks around instead of catching Alice who by now is sinking to her knees on the floor. It’s with her frantic look that Dana’s eye catches someone.
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This was an intense chapter with filled with a lot of emotion. Thanks
You do an excellent job, perfect
OMG, I don’t think Bette will cooperate. This is intense. They need to call own The most impotant is to hel Bette gets better an regain her full mental capaity without drugs. And the only person who vcn do that is Tina with al the family(kit, Shane Alice) support ad help. PPVS
I left my comment above immediately after reading the chapter. I came back to see other people’s comments, and I re-read it. Wow – strike a nerve much, Socal? LOL.
Love this story. Pain…So much pain. You can feel it…There is so much here. Kit’s fears, Tina’s certainty and uncertainty still present. Awesome. Please MORE!!!!!!
Well, I don’t know if Bette will cooperate with Tina and Kit but she will have to rely on someone and at this point Tina is the best candidate. For the main reason is that Tina is at the heart of helena’s conspiracy although unwittingly, and by being gullible and oblivious to helenas antics and reacting to Bette’s betrayal of their marriage. helena is an evil predatory, revenge seeking biatch. Yes Bette thinks she is right to mistrust Tina and I would agree with her to a point. With Tina overhearing what helena has been doing and with Alice’s investigative results and with Tina still trying to get more info on helena Bette should give her the benefit of the doubt, as hard as it may be. But there is one thing that Bette knows above all else, if she wants to remember it, is that Bette is the only person that Tina has ever truly loved with all her heart and soul and would not do anything to harm her for any reason even if she is angry as hell for what Bette has done to them. For this reason, Bette would be wise to trust her and let go of all that she holds against Tinas’ passive aggressive actions. Tina has information right now that even Bette doesn’t know about. Guess I could’ve said all that in one sentence and that is that Tina is the only one that can have any hope of turning all this around and helping Bette back on her feet and salvaging her career from helenas evil acts. Tina and Kit needs to tell Bette what they have found out.
Well, I don’t know if Bette will cooperate with Tina and Kit but she will have to rely on someone and at this point Tina is the best candidate. For the main reason is that Tina is at the heart of helena’s conspiracy although unwittingly, and by being gullible and oblivious to helenas antics and reacting to Bette’s betrayal of their marriage. helena is an evil predatory, revenge seeking biatch. Yes Bette thinks she is right to mistrust Tina and I would agree with her to a point. With Tina overhearing what helena has been doing and with Alice’s investigative results and with Tina still trying to get more info on helena Bette should give her the benefit of the doubt, as hard as it may be. But there is one thing that Bette knows above all else, if she wants to remember it, is that Bette is the only person that Tina has ever truly loved with all her heart and soul and would not do anything to harm her for any reason even if she is angry as hell for what Bette has done to them. For this reason, Bette would be wise to trust her and let go of all that she holds against Tinas’ passive aggressive actions. Tina has information right now that even Bette doesn’t know about. Guess I could’ve said all that in one sentence and that is that Tina is the only one that can have any hope of turning all this around and helping Bette back on her feet and salvaging her career from helenas evil acts. Tina and Kit needs to tell Bette what they have found out.
Tough, Tina and Kit are there because Bette is dying. She is literally killing herself and Kit and Tina are there because they love her.
This is sad and hope Bette will let Tina and Kit help her!
This is really great – and a unique take on the Tibette history. My take on Bette is that she would be furious at Tina being anywhere near her. Kit, she knows has her best interests at heart, but Tina? The arrogance, the audacity, the nerve of coming back in to her house and deciding she would now be there for Bette. Now that what she sees scares her enough to waltz back in and decide she will be the one to pick Bette up and get her back on her feet. How dare she? I really think if Bette has an ounce of mental energy left she will reject Tina’s help outright – Tina has brought her to the depth of despair that few people have experienced – just the sight of Tina must enrage her. The bottom line is that she cannot let her guard down to Tina – she could never withstand another betrayal and literally her life depends on her awareness of that. Just my 6-penny-worth. PPS!
love it when youre stilling wanting to be in control and being a pompus ass!!! when were hurt and afraid are not good places to be for being able to understand. weve been moving this week. tomo is hell day with furniture!!! but i love our house. thx for this great story. what a party!!! thx
i agree with Dainty…awesome writing!
Thanks for the update. You describe Bette’s anguish so well I can almost feel it….amazing. Bette is so fortunate to have two people who love her so much and are willing to support her through this. She’s not in a place to able to accept any help yet but hopefully she will be soon.
Bette’s rejecting them, but Tina needs to stand strong. The only way she’s going to build Bette’s trust in her again is by actions. Bette is right there on the edge. This is powerful writing. PPVS!
So much emotion. Thank you for updating. I hope that Tina and Kit get a chance to explain to Bette. :)
So much emotion. Thank you for updating. I hope that Tina and Kit get a chance to explain to Bette. :)
Hello Jwet, It is so wonderful to have you back and posting this amazing new adventure. Bette and Tina really have been throught the wringer in this alternate version of events. Helena is the Queen Bi-atch from Hell. All charged up and able to take Bette down. Okay she did have help. The evilness just seaps out. Scary and so deserving of a great dose of comeuppance, methinks. Jwet, you have totally captured the depth and width of Bette’s despair here. She is lost in the destruction of her own self and addictions. Trying to numb the pain is only a short term solution. I do hope she see the light begin to break again and start to chase away the darkness from her heart and soul.Kit and Tina were temporarily sisters-in-law again. Good to have Kit there as a support and then turn the heat on Tina as she tried to sort the past out. They need to discuss the recent events, gain some logic and acceptance of them. I do think Tina is ready to do her penance with both Kit and with Bette. While Tina was not alone in destroying her former lover, she did have a leading part. Now is the time to start rebuild the relationship she once had with her soul-mate and obliterate the hatred that Helena fuelled.And just when things were settling down between Tina and Kit, Bette appears (in a foul mood) and wants to know what the hell is going on. You are such a devil for this tantalizinfg cliff-hanger. I really can’t wait too long for thei next installment.I just love your wickedness and delicious drama. Much gratitude and appreciation from Your Loyal Fan and Friend.
another great update…i hope that ridge is pretty close, can’t see bette suffering more and those misunderstandings between them…i hope bette will believe tina and not think the worst