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“FFFFFUCK” involuntary moan.
Bette moves to a semi-sitting position on the couch. She thinks about lying back down and ignoring the annoying whispered conversation but she knows from past experience that it’s useless. The damage has already set in motion the sequenced firing of millions of little nerve endings. All of them frayed from Bette’s drug interaction. Closing her lids did little to relieve the throbbing now placed in motion. She was just going to have to ride this out. The pain is ever present and seems to ricochet around the inside of her skull waking up any sleeping cells left. Lying her head back on the couch Bette hopes to quell the pain by staying as still as possible. This included holding her breath. It was only after a few long seconds that the technique began to work. The pain, which started so abruptly, was slow in its retreat. The banging that cut like a jack-hammer on concrete was now just a mild thud. As it began to subside Bette still lay motionless for another second or so releasing her breath in a haltingly slow stream of air. This was not a good way to start her day.
Afraid of a repeat of painful experience Bette continued to sit still with her eyes closed. Hoping the extra time will give the rest of her body the time it needed to acclimate to the start of a new day, Bette regulated her breathing. It was while her eyes were still closed that she could again hear the murmurings. This time her mind could formulate ideas of what it was she was taking in. Someone was talking, no wait it was two someones were talking and they were doing is somewhere nearby.
Now her curious mind was trying to piece together what was being said. But while she could hear them, they were far enough away that she could only hear the constant drone of noise they created. Clearly she knew that it was voices she heard. They rang out like a song being sung with only two notes. While the sound was not grating it still annoyed her. If they had to talk the least they could do was be loud enough for her to hear. Better yet why hear them at all. What were they doing in her house disturbing her little trip anyway? Feathers ruffled, Bette again opened her eyelids but this time it was in a slow controlled opening.
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This was an intense chapter with filled with a lot of emotion. Thanks
You do an excellent job, perfect
OMG, I don’t think Bette will cooperate. This is intense. They need to call own The most impotant is to hel Bette gets better an regain her full mental capaity without drugs. And the only person who vcn do that is Tina with al the family(kit, Shane Alice) support ad help. PPVS
I left my comment above immediately after reading the chapter. I came back to see other people’s comments, and I re-read it. Wow – strike a nerve much, Socal? LOL.
Love this story. Pain…So much pain. You can feel it…There is so much here. Kit’s fears, Tina’s certainty and uncertainty still present. Awesome. Please MORE!!!!!!
Well, I don’t know if Bette will cooperate with Tina and Kit but she will have to rely on someone and at this point Tina is the best candidate. For the main reason is that Tina is at the heart of helena’s conspiracy although unwittingly, and by being gullible and oblivious to helenas antics and reacting to Bette’s betrayal of their marriage. helena is an evil predatory, revenge seeking biatch. Yes Bette thinks she is right to mistrust Tina and I would agree with her to a point. With Tina overhearing what helena has been doing and with Alice’s investigative results and with Tina still trying to get more info on helena Bette should give her the benefit of the doubt, as hard as it may be. But there is one thing that Bette knows above all else, if she wants to remember it, is that Bette is the only person that Tina has ever truly loved with all her heart and soul and would not do anything to harm her for any reason even if she is angry as hell for what Bette has done to them. For this reason, Bette would be wise to trust her and let go of all that she holds against Tinas’ passive aggressive actions. Tina has information right now that even Bette doesn’t know about. Guess I could’ve said all that in one sentence and that is that Tina is the only one that can have any hope of turning all this around and helping Bette back on her feet and salvaging her career from helenas evil acts. Tina and Kit needs to tell Bette what they have found out.
Well, I don’t know if Bette will cooperate with Tina and Kit but she will have to rely on someone and at this point Tina is the best candidate. For the main reason is that Tina is at the heart of helena’s conspiracy although unwittingly, and by being gullible and oblivious to helenas antics and reacting to Bette’s betrayal of their marriage. helena is an evil predatory, revenge seeking biatch. Yes Bette thinks she is right to mistrust Tina and I would agree with her to a point. With Tina overhearing what helena has been doing and with Alice’s investigative results and with Tina still trying to get more info on helena Bette should give her the benefit of the doubt, as hard as it may be. But there is one thing that Bette knows above all else, if she wants to remember it, is that Bette is the only person that Tina has ever truly loved with all her heart and soul and would not do anything to harm her for any reason even if she is angry as hell for what Bette has done to them. For this reason, Bette would be wise to trust her and let go of all that she holds against Tinas’ passive aggressive actions. Tina has information right now that even Bette doesn’t know about. Guess I could’ve said all that in one sentence and that is that Tina is the only one that can have any hope of turning all this around and helping Bette back on her feet and salvaging her career from helenas evil acts. Tina and Kit needs to tell Bette what they have found out.
Tough, Tina and Kit are there because Bette is dying. She is literally killing herself and Kit and Tina are there because they love her.
This is sad and hope Bette will let Tina and Kit help her!
This is really great – and a unique take on the Tibette history. My take on Bette is that she would be furious at Tina being anywhere near her. Kit, she knows has her best interests at heart, but Tina? The arrogance, the audacity, the nerve of coming back in to her house and deciding she would now be there for Bette. Now that what she sees scares her enough to waltz back in and decide she will be the one to pick Bette up and get her back on her feet. How dare she? I really think if Bette has an ounce of mental energy left she will reject Tina’s help outright – Tina has brought her to the depth of despair that few people have experienced – just the sight of Tina must enrage her. The bottom line is that she cannot let her guard down to Tina – she could never withstand another betrayal and literally her life depends on her awareness of that. Just my 6-penny-worth. PPS!
love it when youre stilling wanting to be in control and being a pompus ass!!! when were hurt and afraid are not good places to be for being able to understand. weve been moving this week. tomo is hell day with furniture!!! but i love our house. thx for this great story. what a party!!! thx
i agree with Dainty…awesome writing!
Thanks for the update. You describe Bette’s anguish so well I can almost feel it….amazing. Bette is so fortunate to have two people who love her so much and are willing to support her through this. She’s not in a place to able to accept any help yet but hopefully she will be soon.
Bette’s rejecting them, but Tina needs to stand strong. The only way she’s going to build Bette’s trust in her again is by actions. Bette is right there on the edge. This is powerful writing. PPVS!
So much emotion. Thank you for updating. I hope that Tina and Kit get a chance to explain to Bette. :)
So much emotion. Thank you for updating. I hope that Tina and Kit get a chance to explain to Bette. :)
Hello Jwet, It is so wonderful to have you back and posting this amazing new adventure. Bette and Tina really have been throught the wringer in this alternate version of events. Helena is the Queen Bi-atch from Hell. All charged up and able to take Bette down. Okay she did have help. The evilness just seaps out. Scary and so deserving of a great dose of comeuppance, methinks. Jwet, you have totally captured the depth and width of Bette’s despair here. She is lost in the destruction of her own self and addictions. Trying to numb the pain is only a short term solution. I do hope she see the light begin to break again and start to chase away the darkness from her heart and soul.Kit and Tina were temporarily sisters-in-law again. Good to have Kit there as a support and then turn the heat on Tina as she tried to sort the past out. They need to discuss the recent events, gain some logic and acceptance of them. I do think Tina is ready to do her penance with both Kit and with Bette. While Tina was not alone in destroying her former lover, she did have a leading part. Now is the time to start rebuild the relationship she once had with her soul-mate and obliterate the hatred that Helena fuelled.And just when things were settling down between Tina and Kit, Bette appears (in a foul mood) and wants to know what the hell is going on. You are such a devil for this tantalizinfg cliff-hanger. I really can’t wait too long for thei next installment.I just love your wickedness and delicious drama. Much gratitude and appreciation from Your Loyal Fan and Friend.
another great update…i hope that ridge is pretty close, can’t see bette suffering more and those misunderstandings between them…i hope bette will believe tina and not think the worst