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Timid Devotion (Part 29)
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“Bette,” Tina smiled, looking over to her lover.
Bette just stared ahead with both hands on the steering wheel. “What is it baby?”
“Are we … going out to dinner?
Laughter escaped from Bette’s lips as she looked out toward the road ahead. “Yes, T.”
“Mmm … where?” Tina prodded, sitting to the side on her seat. “Somewhere … tasty?”
Bette’s eyes widened at that inquiry. “Tasty?”
“The food!” Tina giggled.
“Yes T,” Bette smirked, “It’s coming up soon.”
“Ahhh …” Tina moaned, turning her head to look our the window, “Yeah …”
Bette was immediately confused, tearing her eyes from the road to look over at Tina. “What … what are you doing?
Tina giggled, “Just seeing if you’re horny yet.”
Bette let out a breath of laughter, bringing her eyes back to the road. “Just seeing?! … Of course I’m horny. Fucking look at you, baby.”
Tina grinned, very pleased with herself.
“That dress … you look …”
“Did you wanna touch me when you saw me in it on our first date?” Tina asked innocently, looking over Bette’s expression.
Bette was shocked at the bold question, but smiled at Tina’s curiosity, and decided to answer truthfully. “Yes.”
Tina smiled, exhaling softly. “You did? … What did you wanna do to me?”
Bette swallowed hard. “Wh … what?”
“I really want to hear what was going through your mind,” Tina whispered, crossing her legs. She could already feel herself getting whet from the thought. She knew Bette had been fantasizing in secret that first time she wore that dress, and she wanted to know all the dirty details. She loved how sure of herself Bette had always been, and how attracted to each other they instantly were. “Please,” Tina added, biting her lower lip.
Bette smirked. “I … was thinking about sliding my hands up your dress T.
“Yeah?”
This was getting Bette hot. She tried to pretend it wasn’t affecting her, but she could already feel the throbbing between her legs. She was aroused and ready, but she had to drive. ‘Eyes on the road,’ she thought to herself, slightly shifting in her seat.
“What else?” Tina questioned, licking her lips.
Bette glanced over to her lover for a moment and then back to the road. She wouldn’t think something like that would be so difficult to confess, but somehow – in this particular situation – it was thrilling. “And feeling if you were whet or not,” she confessed, feeling as if the breath had been sucked out of her. How was Tina doing this to her?
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I think they’ve already given that night a run for the money, but I hope there’s more to come. Thanks for posting! I love both your stories!
Damn its hot in here! :)PPS
Yeah babee! I love it. I would’ve wrecked if Tina had been in the car with me talking to like that. That is why you carry duct tape in the glove box, for sexiness control. Thanks sexi.
Love it!!! That was so DAMN HOT!!!! Thank you
omg that was so damned hot!!! yea, sorry its ending. love ur writing. take care.
You write Tina perfectly… right combination of sexy and vulnerable. Great to see you back, but sad that we’re nearing the end.
Mmmmmmmmmmmmm very interesting. Very hot. More please. :)
Oh wow, that was incredibly sizzling. Love how Tina set Bette up for the hot time in the car.
please dont end this story,im sure you could think of alot more chapters or maybe another story
That was so hot and love it. More please thanks!!!!!!!
it realy making me sad to know that this story comes to its end. i love cluless tina in this ff. shes sooooo cute.the talk was such a turn on and bette..hoo im in love with her.i will miss this sweet love and i realy realy hope u wont leave and start a new ff.plsssssssssss
Wow! This was so hot. Phew! I’m so going to miss this story. Thank you for this story. The talk they had was just way too hot!
yeah forget cute in this chapter…hot i love how Tina reeling Bette in..
Love the memory of the first dat. Such a hot chapter (like they all are!)Thank you, biisexi.
Uhhhh… I would like to go away to have dinner like this. Just once. :o)
So, this double anniversary turns out to be getting a little too much to handle-for someone that reads your posts in the middle of a working day…
You think I’d know better by now not to read your NC 17 chapters at work. I told myself I’d wait until the end of my shift…yeah well that lasted about 4 hours.LMAO! seriously No thanks for the update. I hate to see your stories end, I hope you some new story ideas in mind. Well I might as well get to your other post. LOL.
You know, you’re one of my favorite writers and I can’t quite figure out how I’ve missed commenting on these two stories that I love. Now to the real comment, go Tina!!! Someone’s shed that timid skin forever, hasn’t she? :D