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Timid Devotion (Part 29)
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The conversation was having a strong effect on both women.
“I was,” Tina whispered back, as if she had to whisper, and continued analyzing Bette’s expression.
Bette needed to continue. “I really wanted to be on top of you … telling you to spread your legs for me.”
Tina started shifting in her seat, keeping her eyes on Bette. “You really wanted all that?”
“Yes,” Bette admitted with a smile, getting off on Tina’s questions.
“I didn’t know the way you could make me feel … and make me moan …” Tina quietly continued, wishing she could be in bed with Bette again. “… The way you make me crazy for you.”
“T, I think we’re gonna be late for dinner,” Bette said confidently, her eyes on the road.
“But we’re not late,” Tina said, still in her trance.
“We will be,” Bette smirked, turning off the road and travelling down toward a park.
“Where are we going?” Tina asked, breathing hard already.
“I need to touch you.”
“Now?”
“Right now.”
Bette parked in an isolated spot and leaned over, taking Tina’s hair into her hand while she claimed her lips. Tina leaned too, shifting so she could bring her leg onto Bette’s lap.
“You make me crazy,” Bette breathed with her cheek to Tina’s, feeling up that slender leg on hers. “Fuck … T …”
“Yeah, fuck me,” Tina said softly. “I love the way you move your hand up my thigh.”
Bette was going absolutely insane with Tina’s verbalizations. Tina smiled and reclined Bette’s seat, moving over to straddle the brunette.
“Bette …” Tina whispered with her eyes closed, “Touch me.”
Bette couldn’t resist. She never could. She slipped her hand under Tina’s skirt, but her hand was stopped.
“No … touch me like you wanted to that night,” Tina moaned into Bette’s ear, “Please. I want to feel what you wanted to do to me.”
Bette was getting really excited, but she tried to control herself to do what Tina wanted. It was a really hot idea. “Okay.”
Tina was so whet she was sure Bette could feel it by now, but she remained in her girlfriend’s lap. She sat there waiting, until she felt Bette’s hands rest on her legs, making their way from her knees up to her thighs and slowly creeping up to her ass.
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I think they’ve already given that night a run for the money, but I hope there’s more to come. Thanks for posting! I love both your stories!
Damn its hot in here! :)PPS
Yeah babee! I love it. I would’ve wrecked if Tina had been in the car with me talking to like that. That is why you carry duct tape in the glove box, for sexiness control. Thanks sexi.
Love it!!! That was so DAMN HOT!!!! Thank you
omg that was so damned hot!!! yea, sorry its ending. love ur writing. take care.
You write Tina perfectly… right combination of sexy and vulnerable. Great to see you back, but sad that we’re nearing the end.
Mmmmmmmmmmmmm very interesting. Very hot. More please. :)
Oh wow, that was incredibly sizzling. Love how Tina set Bette up for the hot time in the car.
please dont end this story,im sure you could think of alot more chapters or maybe another story
That was so hot and love it. More please thanks!!!!!!!
it realy making me sad to know that this story comes to its end. i love cluless tina in this ff. shes sooooo cute.the talk was such a turn on and bette..hoo im in love with her.i will miss this sweet love and i realy realy hope u wont leave and start a new ff.plsssssssssss
Wow! This was so hot. Phew! I’m so going to miss this story. Thank you for this story. The talk they had was just way too hot!
yeah forget cute in this chapter…hot i love how Tina reeling Bette in..
Love the memory of the first dat. Such a hot chapter (like they all are!)Thank you, biisexi.
Uhhhh… I would like to go away to have dinner like this. Just once. :o)
So, this double anniversary turns out to be getting a little too much to handle-for someone that reads your posts in the middle of a working day…
You think I’d know better by now not to read your NC 17 chapters at work. I told myself I’d wait until the end of my shift…yeah well that lasted about 4 hours.LMAO! seriously No thanks for the update. I hate to see your stories end, I hope you some new story ideas in mind. Well I might as well get to your other post. LOL.
You know, you’re one of my favorite writers and I can’t quite figure out how I’ve missed commenting on these two stories that I love. Now to the real comment, go Tina!!! Someone’s shed that timid skin forever, hasn’t she? :D