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Timid Devotion (Part 29)
Tina felt shaky. It felt so good, and so bad. She loved when Bette was bad, and she had no intention of stopping it. When Bette started to squeeze her ass, Tina started to grind.
“Tisk tisk,” Bette whispered, “You have to act how you would have that night too, baby.”
“Okay,” Tina moaned, trembling with anticipation. “It’s really hard.”
“Just try,” Bette smirked, pulling Tina onto her hard. When she heard the blonde gasp and move along with her touch, Bette continued with desperate hands. She was definitely enjoying it.
“Was it hard for you to wait?” Tina breathed, feeling Bette’s fingers move under her to rub her clit over the material of her panties. “Ahh …”
“Yeah … it was …” Bette moaned, feeling Tina’s arousal on her fingers. It was adorably obvious how excited Tina was as well. “… I wanted to feel this,” she added, finally slipping her fingers inside of her lover, gently biting Tina’s shoulder.
“Baby, I want you too,” Tina panted, arching back to feel the steering wheel at her back. “B … Bette … let me touch you.”
“Yes,” Bette pleaded with that one word, tilting her head in to kiss Tina’s cleavage that had been teasing her.
Tina eagerly slipped her hand into Bette’s pants, seeking out what she needed so desperately. “Fuck Bette …” Tina cried out, her hair becoming a complete mess. She started moving in rhythm with Bette, each lost in their own world together.
“T …”
“Bette … yeah … more …”
“Harder,” Bette pleaded, trying to spread her legs but it was becoming more difficult.
It was a beautiful scene with the two women completely engulfed in their combined passion. The intensity climbed further and further until Bette couldn’t hold it in any more and came, closely followed by Tina. The scenario had proved very intriguing, and they were both happy Tina had brought it up.
“That … was hot,” Bette chuckled as Tina moved back to her seat, straightening her dress.
“Mmm …” Tina smiled, satisfied as she rested her head back on the seat, “So hot.”
“Ready for dinner now?” Bette smiled, turning the car back on.
“Aren’t we gonna be late?” Tina asked quietly.
“Sooo late,” Bette laughed, turning out of the park. “But that’s alright. I’m sure they’d expect that of us, given how attracted we were to each other from the start.”
“What do you mean from the start?” Tina asked, still somewhat disoriented.
“You haven’t figured out where we’re going baby?” Bette teased.
“Ooh … is it “Buona Sera”?” Tina inquired, a smile flirting on her lips.
“Indeed it is,” Bette chuckled, “And I would just love to have Alberto again.”
“How dare you!” Tina laughed, swatting playfully at Bette’s arm. “I’m right here!”
“Very funny,” Bette smiled, shaking her head. “He was a funny guy.”
“Yeah,” Tina breathed, looking over to Bette with a warm smile. “Baby … that night meant so much for me.”
“Me too,” Bette sighed happily. “It was the most amazing night.”
Tina smiled at that, looking out her window before Bette responded again.
“Now let’s see if we can’t give that night a run for its money.”
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(58 votes, average: 3.53 out of 5)
I think they’ve already given that night a run for the money, but I hope there’s more to come. Thanks for posting! I love both your stories!
Damn its hot in here! :)PPS
Yeah babee! I love it. I would’ve wrecked if Tina had been in the car with me talking to like that. That is why you carry duct tape in the glove box, for sexiness control. Thanks sexi.
Love it!!! That was so DAMN HOT!!!! Thank you
omg that was so damned hot!!! yea, sorry its ending. love ur writing. take care.
You write Tina perfectly… right combination of sexy and vulnerable. Great to see you back, but sad that we’re nearing the end.
Mmmmmmmmmmmmm very interesting. Very hot. More please. :)
Oh wow, that was incredibly sizzling. Love how Tina set Bette up for the hot time in the car.
please dont end this story,im sure you could think of alot more chapters or maybe another story
That was so hot and love it. More please thanks!!!!!!!
it realy making me sad to know that this story comes to its end. i love cluless tina in this ff. shes sooooo cute.the talk was such a turn on and bette..hoo im in love with her.i will miss this sweet love and i realy realy hope u wont leave and start a new ff.plsssssssssss
Wow! This was so hot. Phew! I’m so going to miss this story. Thank you for this story. The talk they had was just way too hot!
yeah forget cute in this chapter…hot i love how Tina reeling Bette in..
Love the memory of the first dat. Such a hot chapter (like they all are!)Thank you, biisexi.
Uhhhh… I would like to go away to have dinner like this. Just once. :o)
So, this double anniversary turns out to be getting a little too much to handle-for someone that reads your posts in the middle of a working day…
You think I’d know better by now not to read your NC 17 chapters at work. I told myself I’d wait until the end of my shift…yeah well that lasted about 4 hours.LMAO! seriously No thanks for the update. I hate to see your stories end, I hope you some new story ideas in mind. Well I might as well get to your other post. LOL.
You know, you’re one of my favorite writers and I can’t quite figure out how I’ve missed commenting on these two stories that I love. Now to the real comment, go Tina!!! Someone’s shed that timid skin forever, hasn’t she? :D