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    When She Loved Me (2)

    Story written on October 29, 2010 by GrindRight.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=76473
    Author Notes:

    More of Bette’s POV – a love story.

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    Chapter 2

     

    As suspected, Tina didn’t run past the next morning. Bette laid in her bed, impressed with her own judgement, but also somewhat troubled by the prediction. Was she so frightening?

    "The only person I’ve ever liked here, and already she’s imprisoned," Bette mumbled to herself, turning on her side, smoothing out the sheet in a depressive manner. "I could move."

    The words hung in the air as her eyes searched the wall, wondering why this girl meant so much to her. Why this all got to her more than any other time a girl had shied away from her, or a man rudely teased her. She let out a deep sigh as her thoughts raced in the quiet of her own room. The only thing to distract her was the birds. The chirping, eager birds and that knock.

    Wait – knock? Bette sat up in her bed, confused. She didn’t ever get visitors. Even if she had mail, a package would be waiting at the doorstep. She slowly pivoted herself out of the sheets and laid her feet on the cool wooden floor. She ventured out of her room, wondering now if it was a hateful father or a drunk looking for a fight. And looking to surprise her. ‘Idiot’ she scolded herself with only a soft breath of laughter, ‘who knocks for the element of surprise?’

    On her way to the door, she picked up a two-by-four she had lying around and weighted it in her hand, ready to use it to defend herself if necessary. The gentle knock persisted and she stopped in front of the door with some confusion. Very slowly, she pulled open the old, thick wooden door which gave way to her screen door, hiding the instrument behind the wall.

    She immediately dropped the piece of wood, and wished she’d straightened herself up better. There at her door stood Tina, a white blouse on, a skirt to her knees, and a slight smile on her face. "Hi Beth."

    Bette couldn’t seem to control the drop of her jaw. "Uh …" Was this a dream? It seemed only in sleepy wishfulness that any girl had the courage to show up at her house. And especially a friendly one.

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    1. oiujowijfo;iwjf YESSSSS!!! Lol I was hoping for another post tomorrow but my wish came true much earlier! I’m loving this story soo much (I love all your stories I can’t help it). Now about that post you promised us later on tonight…*whistles while running at full speed and looking over shoulder*

    2. I agree,… just love your stories and am soo excited when I see a new post from you. Thanks for another great beginning and another new twist for our girls. Love ya GR!!

    6. lovely, cute, sweet, even funny chapter. I love it, loved Tina and her “hint of a rebellious grin” and Bette thinking she’s in Dreamland. Bette you’re so right at stopping yourself from gazing “with affection” at the “too much young” senior in school, seeing the kind of town you’re living in! Will Bette be able to wait till Tina’s eighteen birthday? GR how far is Tina from her majority? Please tell me it’s not at twenty-one! I’m looking for how Bette will explain her situation and particularly for their interactions. Thanks for your awesome writing of Tibette. Read you very soon.

    7. You got me hooked!! This story’s soo sweet and gentle:) Love how T’s innocent and free and I’m reeeally impressed how you portrait Bette, her adaptation to the new situation, her understanding of consenquences and her way of thinking…How she’s mature, with a lot of harsh life experience.Wonder will you base story on their future interaction, or you’ll get us a glimps of Bette history??Can’t wait for next update.

    10. This is so beautifully written to show how they come to be friends, but we all know that the drama has to be just around the corner and it will be painful, when Tina’s parents find out about her spending time with Bette.

    11. They seem like a real comfort for one another. Hopefully they become friends. Bette seems to really need one in her life. I love your writing. Keep it coming. Thanks.

    12. loving this story, so sweet, as i read it i’m setting it in the 50’s for some reason, maybe it just seems that way in the simplicity of Bettes living, can’t wait to read more, good work GR and sooooo different from what i’ve learned to expect from you…so far anyway ;)

    16. REally enjoying this new story. Hope Tina doesn’t get banished to far flung relatives to keep her away from Bette. Tina seems very much enjoy being with Bette. Lovely. Thanks for posting.

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