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When She Loved Me (2)
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"My parents told me never to see you again," Tina said, and the hint of a rebellious grin showed itself.
Relaxing the tension in her shoulders, Bette let herself breathe again. She smiled in a pained way, afraid that all the blond had wanted was to anger her parents. "So naturally …"
"But I don’t know why," she said, shrugging her shoulders seemingly as high as they would move.
That surprised Bette, leading her to wonder if all the people she had spoken with – all the girls her age in town even – had been so naive in the same respect. Had their parents shielded them from the same information, leading these women to extract only the conclusion that Bette seemed infected with a plague of some sorts, and they were to stay as far away as the town would allow? Her eyes fell to the floor with Tina’s words, giving her much food for thought. Then she remembered to lift them again, not wanting to discourage the young thing. She looked the age of a senior in school, but still much too young to gaze at with affection.
"I think your parents are afraid" Bette started, trying to find the right words for her explanation.
"Of what?"
Bette had to chuckle at the girl’s impatience, glad for some comedic relief even if Tina didn’t realize she had been the cause.
"Hey, can I come in or do you usually make people wait on your porch?"
It was a surprise to Bette, even knowing her lack of social skills, that this girl could catch her off guard so easily. She silently stepped aside, and motioned for Tina to make her way in.
"God, it’s so nice," Tina smiled, looking all around at the simple adornments Bette had given the place. "It’s nothing like all of the awful, gaudy decorations my mom puts up in our house."
Bette wanted to laugh, but she figured it wouldn’t seem right. She just watched the girl’s expression and awe at her plain decor, puzzled with the amount of care Tina took in noticing each small detail. Then the girl turned and tucked her blond bangs behind her ear.
"Why do you live alone?"
Tina’s innocent curiosity made Bette smile, but also troubled her. How could she tell this girl about the truth of her life? Surely the girl’s parents had given her that much information, but not the reason she was as isolated as she was. Bette wouldn’t have expected such clarity from someone so terrified of honesty.
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oiujowijfo;iwjf YESSSSS!!! Lol I was hoping for another post tomorrow but my wish came true much earlier! I’m loving this story soo much (I love all your stories I can’t help it). Now about that post you promised us later on tonight…*whistles while running at full speed and looking over shoulder*
I agree,… just love your stories and am soo excited when I see a new post from you. Thanks for another great beginning and another new twist for our girls. Love ya GR!!
totally agree with Bad1
I’m truly loving this story. I love the interaction between Bette and Tina, and can’t wait to see how the story continue.
There are so many things to love about this story I don’t know where to start. So I’ll just end it by saying thank you GR.
lovely, cute, sweet, even funny chapter. I love it, loved Tina and her “hint of a rebellious grin” and Bette thinking she’s in Dreamland. Bette you’re so right at stopping yourself from gazing “with affection” at the “too much young” senior in school, seeing the kind of town you’re living in! Will Bette be able to wait till Tina’s eighteen birthday? GR how far is Tina from her majority? Please tell me it’s not at twenty-one! I’m looking for how Bette will explain her situation and particularly for their interactions. Thanks for your awesome writing of Tibette. Read you very soon.
You got me hooked!! This story’s soo sweet and gentle:) Love how T’s innocent and free and I’m reeeally impressed how you portrait Bette, her adaptation to the new situation, her understanding of consenquences and her way of thinking…How she’s mature, with a lot of harsh life experience.Wonder will you base story on their future interaction, or you’ll get us a glimps of Bette history??Can’t wait for next update.
Just wonderful. Thank you.
Another great story.Thank you.
This is so beautifully written to show how they come to be friends, but we all know that the drama has to be just around the corner and it will be painful, when Tina’s parents find out about her spending time with Bette.
They seem like a real comfort for one another. Hopefully they become friends. Bette seems to really need one in her life. I love your writing. Keep it coming. Thanks.
loving this story, so sweet, as i read it i’m setting it in the 50’s for some reason, maybe it just seems that way in the simplicity of Bettes living, can’t wait to read more, good work GR and sooooo different from what i’ve learned to expect from you…so far anyway ;)
okay three pages was way too short. Love the story keep it coming. Please
I love this story too. PPS!!
I can’t wait to read more of this story. This is another different beginning and I just love it. PPVS
REally enjoying this new story. Hope Tina doesn’t get banished to far flung relatives to keep her away from Bette. Tina seems very much enjoy being with Bette. Lovely. Thanks for posting.
That was great and like it.