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When She Loved Me (2)
"I know it’s only really for boys," Tina said, looking a bit disappointed, and Bette saw that she felt teased – like she had no right to think she could be of any help.
"No, I didn’t mean it that way," Bette said immediately, before Tina looked up at her, and a part of her just flourished. "You’re just as good as any help I’d get, alright?"
A little smile revealed itself as Tina stepped closer still, wrapping her arms around Bette simultaneously in a warm hug. "Thank you."
The simple touch of the girl sent Bette into shock, but the sensation grew on her. And as unnatural as it seemed for such a rough persona, she felt her arms returning the embrace. She hoped Tina couldn’t hear her heart racing with the unexpected invasion of her personal space. It had been so long since anybody had gotten that close to her. She closed her eyes with a smile, finally relaxing with the girl’s unconditional kindness. "It’s true, Tina."
"Tina?" she asked, a smile of confusion on her lips. Suddenly Bette was embarrassed – she hadn’t meant to voice the little nickname. "Uh …"
"No, I like it," Tina giggled, walking back toward the door in playfulness. "Come out and help me already. I can’t do all the work myself, Lumberjill."
The small teasing fascinated Bette. She had never heard anyone call her something even remotely as darling and strange as ‘Lumberjill’, but she found herself enjoying the taunt. It was something a friend would do.
After she followed Tina out of her house – and once again was thankful for the many trees protecting her privacy on the lot – they got to work at raking. Sure enough, Tina teased her still, jumping in her pile of leaves or throwing some toward her and messing up all of her work, but she didn’t mind.
As Bette wasn’t used to the teasing or friendliness between them, she found herself a bit awkward in the situation, but Tina saw it, and she didn’t care. She teased her just the same, demanding a tolerance that built up through the afternoon, and as they worked on the pile of firewood. Bette helped Tina carefully swing the axe, safely and with the required amount of force. She was surprised at the young girl’s strength.
While they worked, they even played – Tina helping Bette all the while with her response and replies. She was beginning to tease the girl back, not so afraid of frightening the blond. Tina seemed almost like a puppy or a little rabbit, timid in some ways and unforgivably curious in another. She loved the girl’s enthusiasm and motivation to learn all that Bette would teach her.
When the sun had lowered only slightly in the beautifully clear sky, Bette could see it was early afternoon, and decided they had worked long enough. She invited Tina in for a bit of a rest. The last thing she wanted was for Tina to return home, sweaty and panting from her house with clothes dishevelled. She smiled to herself at the awful, twisted humour there.
She made some tea for them both, so as not to pressure the girl into drinking her bitter coffee, and sat down at the table with her cup.
"Don’t you have a cute little swing out there?" Tina asked, standing on her tiptoes to look out the small kitchen window. "I think I saw it earlier."
Bette stood with a smile, "I can’t hide anything from you." She chuckled and made her way out the back door – Tina following closely behind – and walked through the backyard to a place most secluded. It was a peaceful patch of grass almost entirely surrounded by evergreens, with the sun just peaking through. In the middle was an old cedar pergola swing set; perfect for a patio, but peacefully comforted by the homely trees around it.
"This is so nice," Tina smiled, watching Bette take her corner and relax with her arm over the back of the swing. It was natural and it was her usual position, assuming Tina would take the opposite end. Instead, Tina sat directly beside her, the mug balanced on both of her knees. She didn’t lean into Bette’s arms, but she didn’t shy away either.
They just sat in silence, looking out to the trees and enjoying the sweet raspberry tea; each moment more comforting than the last.
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(31 votes, average: 3.87 out of 5)
oiujowijfo;iwjf YESSSSS!!! Lol I was hoping for another post tomorrow but my wish came true much earlier! I’m loving this story soo much (I love all your stories I can’t help it). Now about that post you promised us later on tonight…*whistles while running at full speed and looking over shoulder*
I agree,… just love your stories and am soo excited when I see a new post from you. Thanks for another great beginning and another new twist for our girls. Love ya GR!!
totally agree with Bad1
I’m truly loving this story. I love the interaction between Bette and Tina, and can’t wait to see how the story continue.
There are so many things to love about this story I don’t know where to start. So I’ll just end it by saying thank you GR.
lovely, cute, sweet, even funny chapter. I love it, loved Tina and her “hint of a rebellious grin” and Bette thinking she’s in Dreamland. Bette you’re so right at stopping yourself from gazing “with affection” at the “too much young” senior in school, seeing the kind of town you’re living in! Will Bette be able to wait till Tina’s eighteen birthday? GR how far is Tina from her majority? Please tell me it’s not at twenty-one! I’m looking for how Bette will explain her situation and particularly for their interactions. Thanks for your awesome writing of Tibette. Read you very soon.
You got me hooked!! This story’s soo sweet and gentle:) Love how T’s innocent and free and I’m reeeally impressed how you portrait Bette, her adaptation to the new situation, her understanding of consenquences and her way of thinking…How she’s mature, with a lot of harsh life experience.Wonder will you base story on their future interaction, or you’ll get us a glimps of Bette history??Can’t wait for next update.
Just wonderful. Thank you.
Another great story.Thank you.
This is so beautifully written to show how they come to be friends, but we all know that the drama has to be just around the corner and it will be painful, when Tina’s parents find out about her spending time with Bette.
They seem like a real comfort for one another. Hopefully they become friends. Bette seems to really need one in her life. I love your writing. Keep it coming. Thanks.
loving this story, so sweet, as i read it i’m setting it in the 50’s for some reason, maybe it just seems that way in the simplicity of Bettes living, can’t wait to read more, good work GR and sooooo different from what i’ve learned to expect from you…so far anyway ;)
okay three pages was way too short. Love the story keep it coming. Please
I love this story too. PPS!!
I can’t wait to read more of this story. This is another different beginning and I just love it. PPVS
REally enjoying this new story. Hope Tina doesn’t get banished to far flung relatives to keep her away from Bette. Tina seems very much enjoy being with Bette. Lovely. Thanks for posting.
That was great and like it.