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When She Loved Me (7)
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Chapter 7
Tina just touched her lips to Bette’s, a kiss so tender the brunette remained asleep. They both had fallen asleep after Bette had read the story, and after some much needed rest – having fallen asleep on Bette’s chest – Tina couldn’t seem to resist the temptation. Smiling to herself, she playfully dragged her bottom lip over Bette’s, a hand on either side of the thick, curly brown hair, holding her weight up as she dipped in and played again. Those soft, rosy lips spoke to her, inviting her.
Bette was lifted from her sleep with Tina’s kiss on her cheek, moving over her mouth and to the other side. Very small, peppered kisses; patiently gentle. Bette kept her eyes closed to the hot need, and what she had kept to herself all this time. The raw desire was screaming out, almost as if it had its own voice, and she was frightened to release it.
They each breathed into the sizzling of the fire, Bette accepting the gentle lips on her own now, and returning the passion. Now fully awake, she moved her hands up Tina’s legs, onto her hips. The soft skin and warmth that met her touch was intoxicating. Their kiss was even sweet when they allowed it to lead them, like a blurry delusion. One that would forget the instability of their relationship in a town so unforgiving of differences. And yet, when Bette opened her eyes, it was all true. She had never been so happy.
Very slowly, Tina rocked on top of Bette, grinding comfortably, while managing to keep her lips in place, feeling Bette’s response. She wanted to talk – wanted to scream – but she just breathed instead; softly, slowly kissing the timid woman beneath her.
With Tina’s immediate response to her touch, Bette realized how much she needed to have Tina, and touch her too. As conflicted as she was, the love Tina was offering took precedence. There was no conflict when Tina touched her – she just responded in kind. It was an immediate reaction.
Realizing Tina’s desire was enough, Bette pulled her closer, kissing her harder to truly appreciate the woman on top of her. Bette was raging with want, and allowed her hands to slip further up Tina’s legs, squeezing as she whimpered with satisfaction. It was all so incredibly right. She had never felt a release so true, and never been as wet as she was then.
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(65 votes, average: 3.82 out of 5)
Loved it that was so sweet and intense thanks for this story
Simply adore it!
Perfect.
This story is so beautifully tender. They’re just what one another needs right now. I’m usually long-winded but this chapter has rendered me somewhat speechless with its beauty. I just love your writing. Thanks again. I hope there’s not too much sadness to come.
That was a beautiful chapter they are meant to be. Bette’s family seems to have money but she sees it to be more of a curse than something that could bring her a different lifestyle but money doesn’t always bring you happiness. Love how you are portraying these two they feel so much but they don’t want to express it to each other. Thank you!
That was just beautiful. thank you.
You wrote their lovemaking so beautifully. So, we know that Bette has money and could actually move out of the bigoted town with Tina.
Thank you! That was beautiful.
Well done. :)
I know, right? The similarity is that they are both playfully intelligent in their innocence and unapologetic honesty and the way LH portrayed that character in TMOF was such a turn on. It’s wonderful comparison but you have such a gift at writing in involking those qualities in Tina. I almost feel just like Bette, in that Tina is just ‘perfect’ to her. Can’t wait for more……
Beautiful!
Absolutely breathtaking! Thank you GR.
Another tender, sensual chapter – just loving your writing. I’m definitely going to stay and read, have no fears about that! Thank you. (Oh, and you and sindeelou2 sold me “The Myth of Fingerprints” – I’ve just ordered the DVD!)
They are so good for each other. I hope Bette has the courage to do whatever she needs to do so that they can stay together.
That was wonderful and sweet, love it!
Sweet & touched, full of love. enjoy this story just as much as your others. Thanks