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When She Loved Me (7)
Just as Tina was smiling at Bette’s obvious weakness, Bette sat up beneath her, supporting her with both hands, and slowly got to her feet. Tina just smiled as Bette carried her, walking to her bedroom while keeping her close. The sheer strength was a turn on, never mind Bette’s ability to do so gracefully, and laying her onto the bed before climbing over her all in one fluid motion.
With excitement and hopefulness, Tina lay beneath the physically intimidating brunette, and yet she wasn’t intimidated. She felt safest there, bringing her fingers up to touch Bette’s lips while she looked in her eyes, trying to assure Bette this was what she wanted most.
"Make love to me."
Bette had no time to respond verbally, leaning over Tina automatically and lowering her body between Tina’s quickly parted legs. They both moaned at the intimate touch, Bette’s lips moving to Tina’s neck with a sort of gentleness to the kisses, in between the playful nipping and licking.
"Bette!" Tina gasped, arching sharply into the stronger, more capable body. This was the woman she had dreamed about – this was the woman that shook her fantasies, capable of throwing her around or lifting her over her shoulder. She let herself melt there, underneath Bette, allowing her anything she pleased.
Watching Tina writhe, Bette held her face in one hand, her other hand traveling down the trembling stomach. It was as if Tina shook from a violent chill.
"You’re scared." Sounding more like a question.
"No," Tina whispered emotionally, locking eyes with Bette. "Bette … I’ve wanted this for so long …" She continued as she moved her own hands down Bette’s remarkable abdomen, lifting the shirt up to feel the tensed muscles there against her fingers. "God you’re so beautiful …"
Bette smiled down, lifting her tank top clean off of herself before looking back down to Tina. She loved the look on Tina’s face, staring at her bare chest. Even as she stripped further, the look in Tina’s eyes aroused her. No one had ever looked at her that way, like she was showing her everything – every part of herself.
With excitement, Tina quickly tugged at her own shirt, finally freeing herself from it to reveal a grey cotton bra, plain on its own, but a beautiful accent to Tina’s creamy smooth skin.
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(65 votes, average: 3.82 out of 5)
Loved it that was so sweet and intense thanks for this story
Simply adore it!
Perfect.
This story is so beautifully tender. They’re just what one another needs right now. I’m usually long-winded but this chapter has rendered me somewhat speechless with its beauty. I just love your writing. Thanks again. I hope there’s not too much sadness to come.
That was a beautiful chapter they are meant to be. Bette’s family seems to have money but she sees it to be more of a curse than something that could bring her a different lifestyle but money doesn’t always bring you happiness. Love how you are portraying these two they feel so much but they don’t want to express it to each other. Thank you!
That was just beautiful. thank you.
You wrote their lovemaking so beautifully. So, we know that Bette has money and could actually move out of the bigoted town with Tina.
Thank you! That was beautiful.
Well done. :)
I know, right? The similarity is that they are both playfully intelligent in their innocence and unapologetic honesty and the way LH portrayed that character in TMOF was such a turn on. It’s wonderful comparison but you have such a gift at writing in involking those qualities in Tina. I almost feel just like Bette, in that Tina is just ‘perfect’ to her. Can’t wait for more……
Beautiful!
Absolutely breathtaking! Thank you GR.
Another tender, sensual chapter – just loving your writing. I’m definitely going to stay and read, have no fears about that! Thank you. (Oh, and you and sindeelou2 sold me “The Myth of Fingerprints” – I’ve just ordered the DVD!)
They are so good for each other. I hope Bette has the courage to do whatever she needs to do so that they can stay together.
That was wonderful and sweet, love it!
Sweet & touched, full of love. enjoy this story just as much as your others. Thanks