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When She Loved Me (7)
"Can I …" Bette started, leaning over her again. She was so hungry for Tina – for her body and for anything she would give.
"Touch me," Tina pleaded, enjoying Bette’s care more than anything.
It was soft at first, like Bette thought she would break, but when it picked up, Tina’s eyes rolled back. She tried to keep her sense, but the way Bette could please her – she thought it would drive her to insanity.
Instead of asking for a kiss here or a touch there, Bette lost herself in Tina. Taking what she wanted and enjoying the effect it was having on the beautiful woman beneath her. The moaning alone was seductive, never mind Tina’s mumblings.
"Just like that … So good … Yeah … Take me …"
Bette never in her wildest dreams imagined Tina so vocal, but it was quickly growing on her. She had no idea it was a surprise to Tina as well.
Once Bette had witnessed several of Tina’s orgasms, she was up on her knees, smiling down at Tina. She was so hyper-aroused she hardly even realized there was still pleasure to be had. The adrenaline was intense.
When Tina got up onto her own knees, completely nude next to Bette’s darker complexion, they kissed again. Messy hair alike and a thin sheet of sweat adorning their skin. Long, drawn out panting clouded the room when they pulled away. This was becoming a long – but pleasingly so – afternoon. And it was far from over.
Bette finally lay back, finding it difficult to lie still under Tina’s loving gaze. She wanted so much – she wanted everything, but slowed herself, waiting for Tina to become more comfortable with her body. And once again, this sweet woman surprised her.
As playful and energetic as Tina could be, her calmer, patient self could please Bette with a certain talent than any other more experienced woman had never quite perfected. With a sense of curiosity that caused Bette to wonder if Tina had any other experience with women, she explored the beautiful tan and musculature of Bette’s entire body, leaving nothing aside. She had given herself to Bette entirely, and received the same in kind.
With long, deep kisses, she moved her fingers inside of Bette, learning every part of the woman she loved. Not that she was sure it would be best to speak the words aloud, because of the unsteady world outside of their deep connection, but she loved Bette. And she made love to her that way, like she was confessing the fact.
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(65 votes, average: 3.82 out of 5)
Loved it that was so sweet and intense thanks for this story
Simply adore it!
Perfect.
This story is so beautifully tender. They’re just what one another needs right now. I’m usually long-winded but this chapter has rendered me somewhat speechless with its beauty. I just love your writing. Thanks again. I hope there’s not too much sadness to come.
That was a beautiful chapter they are meant to be. Bette’s family seems to have money but she sees it to be more of a curse than something that could bring her a different lifestyle but money doesn’t always bring you happiness. Love how you are portraying these two they feel so much but they don’t want to express it to each other. Thank you!
That was just beautiful. thank you.
You wrote their lovemaking so beautifully. So, we know that Bette has money and could actually move out of the bigoted town with Tina.
Thank you! That was beautiful.
Well done. :)
I know, right? The similarity is that they are both playfully intelligent in their innocence and unapologetic honesty and the way LH portrayed that character in TMOF was such a turn on. It’s wonderful comparison but you have such a gift at writing in involking those qualities in Tina. I almost feel just like Bette, in that Tina is just ‘perfect’ to her. Can’t wait for more……
Beautiful!
Absolutely breathtaking! Thank you GR.
Another tender, sensual chapter – just loving your writing. I’m definitely going to stay and read, have no fears about that! Thank you. (Oh, and you and sindeelou2 sold me “The Myth of Fingerprints” – I’ve just ordered the DVD!)
They are so good for each other. I hope Bette has the courage to do whatever she needs to do so that they can stay together.
That was wonderful and sweet, love it!
Sweet & touched, full of love. enjoy this story just as much as your others. Thanks