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The Proposal
Story written on November 29, 2010 by emilythestrang3.
told by Bette Porter
i woke at 6am to the feel of the love of my life lying next to me, her toned body looked amazing curled up next me.
i looked back at the clock and and saw that i had been looking at her for an hour now whilst it felt like it had been five minuites
i could tell she was about to wake so i slowly started to move nearer to her so i could give her a good morning kiss.
my body moved closer to hers i placed a small kiss upon her shoulder and then moved towards her cheek when her face turned and she pulled me into the most breathtaking kiss ever.
it was the most beautiful feeling ever i would always say everything was perfect and then it would just get better. this was the woman i loved the one i would give everything to and what better day to ask her to spend her life with me.
she finally opened her eyes.
"morning beautiful" i said peacefully "i love you"
she replied sleepily "morning baby" she gave me a killer smile and another beautiful kiss and added "i love you too"
"i love you to with all my heart, your it for me" i whispered into her ear and placing another kiss upon her shoulder
"i will be right back Baby" i said before slowly pulling the covers back and getting out of the bed i went to the bathroom for my morning rituals and then went into the kitchen to call kit and tell her my plan
Kit said she would bring Angie right over whith breakfast. i thanked kit and went back into the bedroom where i saw those hazel eyes fixated on me.
"see something you like?" I asked
the reply to this was "NO"
"well your body is saying different Baby" i told her with a smug face
"i dont like it Baby, i love it" she said
i walked over to the window to watch the sun in the sky wow it was beautiful
"come here" i told her she paracticallty jumped off the bed and into my arms it was nice we fitted perfectly as one and soon i hopefully could have her as my wife.
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(38 votes, average: 3.34 out of 5)
Lovely. Thanks.
That was a very good start for your first post. I thoroughly enjoyed your one-off. Waiting for another one.
i may consider writing another one off but i have no ideas yet so may take me a while :) glad you liked it thanks for commenting i was worried about posting it cause it was my first piece i have now lost my fan fic verginity
That was great and sweet!
Thank you.Please continue writing.
Beautiful. Thank you simply wonderful
That was so beautiful and sweet, love them!
@ut thankyou for you comment it is how i would hopefully propose when im older lol cheezy i know haha