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The Proposal
Story written on November 29, 2010 by emilythestrang3.
Angie had fell asleep in the car on the way over so i went to wake her "Angie wake up darling you have to do a big girl job for me" i said "can you do that for me?"
i picked her up and walked into the kitchen where i told her what she had to do.
whilst Angie was getting everything prepared i went to see if Tina was still in the garden, she was and i went to get the ring and hid beside the glass door ready to walk out when it was time
Angie came out of the kitchen towards the door carrying a tray with a silver lid on so the surprise could not be revealed just yet.
Tinas back wast to the door so she could not see what was going on angie walked over to her mamma T and said what she had been told to say
"Hi mamma T heres your breakfast you cant open it until i leave but momma B said you dont wait for her"
"ok Angie can i have a hug from my little girl?" she said whilst standing and picking angie up and spinning her i saw this and thought it was the cutest thing ever
"mamma mamma mamma stop please i have to go back to auntie Kits now" Tina put down angie and gave her a kiss goodbye.
"i will see you soon baby" she said with a tear in her eye
Angie ran back in and said goodbye to me and walked with Kit to go back to the planet.
tina was curious of what was under the plate and opened it seeing as she was told not to wait for me, i wish i could have seen her face but her back was to me, but i could imagine it.
on the plate was some pancakes with a chocolate sauce the twist is that the sauce had written out a message it said
TINA KENNARD
WILL YOU
MARRY ME!!!
she turned around to look for me wow she was even more beautiful than ever with that sun shining down on her blonde hair she turned back round to look at the plate again this was it now or never
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(38 votes, average: 3.34 out of 5)
Lovely. Thanks.
That was a very good start for your first post. I thoroughly enjoyed your one-off. Waiting for another one.
i may consider writing another one off but i have no ideas yet so may take me a while :) glad you liked it thanks for commenting i was worried about posting it cause it was my first piece i have now lost my fan fic verginity
That was great and sweet!
Thank you.Please continue writing.
Beautiful. Thank you simply wonderful
That was so beautiful and sweet, love them!
@ut thankyou for you comment it is how i would hopefully propose when im older lol cheezy i know haha