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The Proposal
Story written on November 29, 2010 by emilythestrang3.
i silently walked from the door towards the back of the chair with the box in hand and when i was at the back i knelt down behind the chair on one knee and said with a huge grin on my face "so what do you say beautiful?"
she turned to see me there with ring in hand and she was crying i walked over to her and sat on her lap "baby whats wrong are you ok?
"oh my god Bette, you did all this for me?"
"yes me and a little girl you know seem to think you deserve it"
"Bette you are one in a million i love you so much"
"i love you too Tee but it would be less worrying if you would answer me Tina Kennard will you do me the pleasure of becoming my wife?"
"Bette of course YES"
i place the diamond engagement ring on her finger and place a small kiss upon the finger holding the ring.
i wraped my arms around her waist and pulled her into an embrace she wraped her arms around my neck and said "Porter i have loved you from day one"
i said "feelings mutual babe" i pulled her in for a kiss which started off sweet and kind but things soon heated up and the kiss was passionate and when we broke away we both wanted more.
"BEDROOM" we both just about managed to say before catching each others mouth in a very heated kiss tounges dancing about in a show of love and lust, we both raised off the chair without leaving each others body.
we walked throught the glass doors toward the bedroom clothes flying everywhere when we reached the bed i layed Tina down and as i lay down beside her resting my body on my arm i said "your my fiance, your going to be my wife"
"i love you" she said with a sparkle in her eyes "i love YOU, Bette Porter, all i need is you and Angie and my life is complete"
i leaned over to give her a kiss on her cheek and she had fallen asleep our hands entwined as one i pulled her closer and let my head rest in her chest feeling it rise and fall with her sleeping state this was my fiance, my future wife
you wouldnt believe how good it feels to say that "I love you Tina Kennard and i will never ever hurt you" then i drifted off into a sleep dreaming of the girl i was holding in my arms, my one and only love.
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(38 votes, average: 3.34 out of 5)
Lovely. Thanks.
That was a very good start for your first post. I thoroughly enjoyed your one-off. Waiting for another one.
i may consider writing another one off but i have no ideas yet so may take me a while :) glad you liked it thanks for commenting i was worried about posting it cause it was my first piece i have now lost my fan fic verginity
That was great and sweet!
Thank you.Please continue writing.
Beautiful. Thank you simply wonderful
That was so beautiful and sweet, love them!
@ut thankyou for you comment it is how i would hopefully propose when im older lol cheezy i know haha