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At first sight
Story written on February 24, 2011 by kins40.
CHAPTER 18
She knew her first name, but it took an almighty effort to recall it. What was wrong with her? Why was everything such a struggle?
She was drifting off again. She could hear voices calling her name. Why was everyone so intend on keeping her awake? She was tired!
She ignored them and fell asleep again but this time it felt like a different kind of sleep, much lighter.
She floated in her dreams, sounds mostly, no images, the same voice seemed to be running in her head, the sound of a woman’s voice, soft, loving, whispering the most amazing words to her. She felt very close to this voice. It soothed her. Her heart jumped and startled her out of her sleep. She obviously knew this person very well but who was she? She felt an intense happiness attached to this memory.
Her eyes shot wide opened. Confusing bits and pieces were coming back to her but she couldn’t put them together.
This was exhausting. Her mind seemed bombarded with high speed bits of information which bounced around in her head so quickly she did not have time to analyse their meaning.
Her eyes were fluttering opened and closed rapidly. The brightness of the room had hit the back of her eyes. It made her squint.
Her heart beat was fast paced and the monitors registered that fact. It seemed to make the people around her spring into action.
She started thrashing in her bed, her arms and legs moving erratically but she was maintained in a safe position with the restraints.
Her breathing was shallow and rapid matching each beat of her heart. She felt dizzy. It all went dark again, she fainted.
The hospital staff around her were keeping a close eye on the awakening progress. They were used to the confusion that struck coma patient at the onset of wakefulness. The doctors were already very much encouraged by the fact that she had opened her eyes and had understood the simple command of answering her name. She was responsive and communicative. Full recovery was a distinct possibility.
She came to again. Not opening her eyes she listened intently. Things were now a lot clearer. She was aware that a number of people were around her bed.
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(26 votes, average: 4.42 out of 5)
Ohhh.got it now…amazing story..incredible writing!
Thank you for another lovely chapter. So Tina loves Bette. Hope she gets to tell Bette in person.
Well this the most well written story, that sets the most past and present storyline. Well done… I was confused there for a while but starting to understand where you were heading with it and then now this turn has me speechless. Thanks for a great story and cannot wait for the next installment.
You really threw us a curve there for a while. This is an amazingly complex story.
Loving this story more with every chapter. Can’t wait for Bette to get back in town.
ooooo this is gonna be sooo good!!:)) Can’t wait for Bette to return from her trip and esp can’t wait for next update!!!
Hahaha…. Kins40, you’ve got something in your sleeve! This is getting more interesting and confusing :-p oh please post soon so we can read more and hopefuly get the answer soon :-) PPVS, thanks!
Don’t worry Tina your Bette will return to you soon only this time you will have your sight.
Wow, just WOW. There are so many great stories on this site right now and yours is in my top two.
She remembered all of that..And not her real life?..Wow, what a love..
thanks for the post!
What an amazing twist – can´t wait for Bette to come back and for them to meet.
Sooo good.I hope,Bette comes back soon.Thank you for the update.
Very interesting chapter, you have taken us on quite a ride with this story. Sure hope someone remembered to call Bette and tell her of the change in Tina’s condition. She would love to know that Tina has awakened and can now see. Great update. Thanks for posting.
WOW!!! Fantastic story, thank you!!
I am no longer a silent reader I am liking this story a lot,
Now Tina is awake and can’t wait for Bette to return and they meet each other. Please post more, thanks!