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At first sight
Story written on February 24, 2011 by kins40.
Tina’s eyes were closing again. She was so tired. She let herself drift off to sleep and this time she was not kept awake. The staff retreated to let her rest a few hours.
Her sleep was restless and a mere two hours later she wakened with a jolt. Memories came flooding back like a torrent down a hill.
Her screams alerted the staff who came rushing in the room. The nurse found her sitting in her bed evidently panicked.
"I am blind..!" she was shouting. She was looking straight in front of her directly at the concerned staff. A doctor came running in shortly after.
He approached her and was shining a light into her eyes, checking for a response. She immediately pushed his hand away bothered by the brightness of the little torch.
"Tina..listen to me!" the doctor started, "Can you see anything at all?"
She looked at him in surprise. In her strained voice, she explained that she remembered being blind. She was blind, before the accident she was blind, she was certain of it!
She had been blinded in a car accident two year ago, she knew now why she was on hospital.
It was raining, she had left her girlfriend’s house, she was going back to her place to look for something and she slipped and fell on the steps in front of her building. She had hit her head, she was now touching the bandage on her head. This is why she was in hospital she had knocked herself unconscious by slipping and bumping her head on her front steps! She felt such relief at the realisation.
As she spoke, it was all become clearer and clearer in her head….Bette that was her name……the loving, caring Bette! A smile illuminated her face at the memory of the woman she…….loved!
The doctor was now looking at her very concerned.
"Tina….the reason you are in hospital is because you were in a really bad car accident….it did not happen two years ago….it happened….two weeks ago!" the doctor said gently, "You are very lucky to be alive!"
Tina turned her face toward the doctor’s as his words sank in the smile disappeared from her face.
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(26 votes, average: 4.42 out of 5)
Ohhh.got it now…amazing story..incredible writing!
Thank you for another lovely chapter. So Tina loves Bette. Hope she gets to tell Bette in person.
Well this the most well written story, that sets the most past and present storyline. Well done… I was confused there for a while but starting to understand where you were heading with it and then now this turn has me speechless. Thanks for a great story and cannot wait for the next installment.
You really threw us a curve there for a while. This is an amazingly complex story.
Loving this story more with every chapter. Can’t wait for Bette to get back in town.
ooooo this is gonna be sooo good!!:)) Can’t wait for Bette to return from her trip and esp can’t wait for next update!!!
Hahaha…. Kins40, you’ve got something in your sleeve! This is getting more interesting and confusing :-p oh please post soon so we can read more and hopefuly get the answer soon :-) PPVS, thanks!
Don’t worry Tina your Bette will return to you soon only this time you will have your sight.
Wow, just WOW. There are so many great stories on this site right now and yours is in my top two.
She remembered all of that..And not her real life?..Wow, what a love..
thanks for the post!
What an amazing twist – can´t wait for Bette to come back and for them to meet.
Sooo good.I hope,Bette comes back soon.Thank you for the update.
Very interesting chapter, you have taken us on quite a ride with this story. Sure hope someone remembered to call Bette and tell her of the change in Tina’s condition. She would love to know that Tina has awakened and can now see. Great update. Thanks for posting.
WOW!!! Fantastic story, thank you!!
I am no longer a silent reader I am liking this story a lot,
Now Tina is awake and can’t wait for Bette to return and they meet each other. Please post more, thanks!