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At first sight
Story written on February 24, 2011 by kins40.
"When did it start happening?" a male voice enquired.
"A few minutes ago," came the reply from a female voice this time, "the monitor alert triggered at the nurses’ station."
In the bed, she opened her eyes once again, slowly, the light hit her eyes again. She held them opened only a sliver. She was looking through her eyelashes. She was able to distinguish figures.
She blinked, once, twice, three times. She was still having problems focusing. Her body’s natural response to that was to allow her tear ducts to fill and flood her eyes with warm tears. She really could not see at all at this point but as the stinging subsided the figures in the room came into clear focus, sharp perfect form. She felt someone wipe the tears that were now falling down the sides of her face.
She heard encouraging words from the people in the room. They were welcoming her back. "How odd," she thought. She felt a hand on hers.
She opened her mouth to speak but no real sound came out. A guttural groan is all she could muster this time around. Her throat was dry. She swallowed, there was pain, she winced.
"Take it easy, if your throat is sore, it’s because of the intubation, it’ll pass!"
She felt a cold, wet cloth on her lips. It felt good. Her mouth was so dry and so were her lips.
"Well Tina, good morning, it is real nice to have you back with us!" it was a nurse, next to her head who had spoken. Other people in the room were busying themselves around the room. She identified three more nurses and a man in a white coat, obviously a doctor!
The doctor approached her, produced a stethoscope and proceeded to check her over.
"Do you know where you are?" he asked.
Tina nodded. "in…..hos….hospital!" her voice was very hoarse. She took a look around her and saw that she was tied to the bed. Drips seemed to be stuck in every one of her veins. The nurses noticed her concerns at the medical paraphernalia which surrounded her.
"You have had an accident!" they limited the explanation to that simple fact, as there was no need to trouble the patient any further.
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(26 votes, average: 4.42 out of 5)
Ohhh.got it now…amazing story..incredible writing!
Thank you for another lovely chapter. So Tina loves Bette. Hope she gets to tell Bette in person.
Well this the most well written story, that sets the most past and present storyline. Well done… I was confused there for a while but starting to understand where you were heading with it and then now this turn has me speechless. Thanks for a great story and cannot wait for the next installment.
You really threw us a curve there for a while. This is an amazingly complex story.
Loving this story more with every chapter. Can’t wait for Bette to get back in town.
ooooo this is gonna be sooo good!!:)) Can’t wait for Bette to return from her trip and esp can’t wait for next update!!!
Hahaha…. Kins40, you’ve got something in your sleeve! This is getting more interesting and confusing :-p oh please post soon so we can read more and hopefuly get the answer soon :-) PPVS, thanks!
Don’t worry Tina your Bette will return to you soon only this time you will have your sight.
Wow, just WOW. There are so many great stories on this site right now and yours is in my top two.
She remembered all of that..And not her real life?..Wow, what a love..
thanks for the post!
What an amazing twist – can´t wait for Bette to come back and for them to meet.
Sooo good.I hope,Bette comes back soon.Thank you for the update.
Very interesting chapter, you have taken us on quite a ride with this story. Sure hope someone remembered to call Bette and tell her of the change in Tina’s condition. She would love to know that Tina has awakened and can now see. Great update. Thanks for posting.
WOW!!! Fantastic story, thank you!!
I am no longer a silent reader I am liking this story a lot,
Now Tina is awake and can’t wait for Bette to return and they meet each other. Please post more, thanks!