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At first sight
Story written on February 27, 2011 by kins40.
CHAPTER 19
"You have been lying in hospital for two weeks, you lost consciousness and have been in a coma ever since!" the doctor continued softly.
Tina was looking incredulously at the doctor. What was he talking about? She was just after telling him that her memory had come back to her and she recalled perfectly the events which had led her to hospital.
"No…..no….I fell on the stairs and bumped my h…" Tina suddenly stopped. The nurses and the doctor were all observing her. A similar empathetic look on their faces. They did not believe her.
The doctor was treading carefully. Many coma patients suffered from post traumatic amnesia. They needed to get to the bottom of Tina’s story. But they could not allow her to get confused any further. It would be detrimental to her recovery.
The doctor proceeded with some light questioning. After all they knew very little about the blonde and starting with the basics would allow some research to begin, especially regarding relatives and close friends.
She was now also able to recall her full name, Tina Kennard. It was a great starting point and the police would be able to trace any parents, siblings or significant others.
The ordeal had been quite enough for one day and the doctor opted for a rest as he was concerned for his patient.
She was freed from her restraints and the staff ensured she was comfortable.
Tina was left alone. She was lying there trying to comprehend what had happened to her. The memory of her falling was so vivid, how could it not be true. And Bette? Surely she would come visit? She could tell them all about her! And Dana! Her best friend! Had she been told that she was in hospital? Dana would know everything about her! And oh my God, she could see now…she was no longer blind, how was all this possible?
Her head was spinning. So many questions with no answers. The doctor was probably right, she needed to rest. This day been eventful enough. She would try and sleep a little and maybe things would become clearer when she woke up.
Despite the inner turmoil which inhabited her at this precise moment, sleep came easily to her and she fell into a deep slumber.
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(27 votes, average: 4.41 out of 5)
They are not going to give Bette any info on Tina are they? This is just great she would have to leave just when T was waking up, I hope she gets some info or Dana gets ahold of her since she is the only person that has been to see Tina from day one. PPVS
First of, great story and thank you for sharing it with us. As for the dickhead for a doctor, he has no right to do that to Tina. If ever Tina finds out that he has been keeping things from her, she can press charges and they can take his licence. It’s like the “doctor’s top secrt” (that’s how it called in Greece) policy there is at the hospitals where doctors has no right to share a patient’s condition with anyone other than the patient and his/her family. But enough of that, I guess that’s the way the story has to be for future’s shake. Anyway, it’s a great one. Thank you again
wow… lets hope tina also sees bette and in the next chapter they both scream for each other… come on dana… please don’t keep them apart… great story… pps
Wait, don’t let the door close yet. Bette has to see Tina and Tina see Bette before they pull out.
Wait, don’t let the door close yet. Bette has to see Tina and Tina see Bette before they pull out.
Firstly, thank you for your moving story. And secondly, apologies for not thanking you before! It has been a great read, from the initial teasing as to who was in the car, to the thoughtful description of Tina’s blindness, and Bette and Tina’s amusing meeting. And then came the twist! And it was initially confusing but, as all became clear, it was revealed as clever and believable, for who is to say that someone in a coma could not hear and understand enough to create a dream world which would feel very real, although of course unsupported by any visuals. And of course Bette will fight to find her T and Tina will be reunited with her dream girlfriend – right?! Can’t wait!
Wonderful story with a great twist! Love it and can’t wait to read how our girls make it back to eachother.
Is Bette too late? [told her to COME HOME SOON!] would the Hospital give her Tina’s add?..Would any of them [Dana or Alice] Inform Bette what had happen to Tina in the last two weeks?..God it’s killing me!!! PPS…ANYTIME NOW WOULD BE GREAT!
PPS.Love your story.
I love this story, I don’t usually comment too much but can’t resist. PPS
Thank God that Bette is back! Tina needs to see her! Great story
omg whats going and hope B&T will see each other. Please post more, thanks!
You know…the doctor seems like a good guy…but his social decisions are for shit. He better not keep Bette from Tina. And if he DOES…Dana should step in. The dude shouldn’t be able to control everybody! Hopefully, Bette will go all Alpha and get the information she needs!
Wow! Loved the way the story
took a new turn.
In the next chapter expectation.
5 stars