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At first sight
Story written on February 27, 2011 by kins40.
Outside, the doctor had gathered the team which had cared for the blonde. He explained his fears that the patient was currently suffering from amnesia, temporarily he hoped. He would have to run a series of tests to validate or not, as the case may be, some of her claims.
He also needed the police to be informed of the identity of Jane Doe, so that the search for kin could be started. In the meantime, the patient was not to be pressed with any questioning.
The following morning, Tina awoke somewhat refreshed. She was not startled by her surroundings. She knew where she was which was in stark contrast to the previous 24 hours.
Immediately, a million questions came into her head. Would anyone she knew come visit today and clarify all these questions for her.
A nurse entered her room, carrying a tray of medical equipment.
"Good morning!" she was friendly and chirpy "I see you are awake…how did you sleep?" She set the tray down next to Tina’s bed.
"My name’s Alice…I am here to take care of all these" she pointed to the different drips Tina was still connected to, "and I’ll also take care of this bandage on your head, the wound has healed up quite well…..time to let it breathe a bit!"
Tina was surprised when she heard her name. She knew Alice, they were friends, she was sure of it. The nurse noticed the look on her face.
"Are you ok?" she asked carrying on with the task at hand.
"Do we know each other?" Tina asked tentatively.
"Well…we sort of…..I know you better than you know me…if this is what you are asking…..I have been taking care of you for the past two weeks" Alice replied.
"Did we know each other beforehand?" Tina hazarded again.
"No…..can’t say that we ever met!". She was now finished with her care. "How about we get you fed….not through drips anymore …… but a proper breakfast?" the nurse continued.
Tina tried not to show her disappointment at Alice’s dismissal of ever knowing her. Maybe it was coincidence but there was something in the nurse’s demeanour which reminded her so much of the Alice she knew.
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(27 votes, average: 4.41 out of 5)
They are not going to give Bette any info on Tina are they? This is just great she would have to leave just when T was waking up, I hope she gets some info or Dana gets ahold of her since she is the only person that has been to see Tina from day one. PPVS
First of, great story and thank you for sharing it with us. As for the dickhead for a doctor, he has no right to do that to Tina. If ever Tina finds out that he has been keeping things from her, she can press charges and they can take his licence. It’s like the “doctor’s top secrt” (that’s how it called in Greece) policy there is at the hospitals where doctors has no right to share a patient’s condition with anyone other than the patient and his/her family. But enough of that, I guess that’s the way the story has to be for future’s shake. Anyway, it’s a great one. Thank you again
wow… lets hope tina also sees bette and in the next chapter they both scream for each other… come on dana… please don’t keep them apart… great story… pps
Wait, don’t let the door close yet. Bette has to see Tina and Tina see Bette before they pull out.
Wait, don’t let the door close yet. Bette has to see Tina and Tina see Bette before they pull out.
Firstly, thank you for your moving story. And secondly, apologies for not thanking you before! It has been a great read, from the initial teasing as to who was in the car, to the thoughtful description of Tina’s blindness, and Bette and Tina’s amusing meeting. And then came the twist! And it was initially confusing but, as all became clear, it was revealed as clever and believable, for who is to say that someone in a coma could not hear and understand enough to create a dream world which would feel very real, although of course unsupported by any visuals. And of course Bette will fight to find her T and Tina will be reunited with her dream girlfriend – right?! Can’t wait!
Wonderful story with a great twist! Love it and can’t wait to read how our girls make it back to eachother.
Is Bette too late? [told her to COME HOME SOON!] would the Hospital give her Tina’s add?..Would any of them [Dana or Alice] Inform Bette what had happen to Tina in the last two weeks?..God it’s killing me!!! PPS…ANYTIME NOW WOULD BE GREAT!
PPS.Love your story.
I love this story, I don’t usually comment too much but can’t resist. PPS
Thank God that Bette is back! Tina needs to see her! Great story
omg whats going and hope B&T will see each other. Please post more, thanks!
You know…the doctor seems like a good guy…but his social decisions are for shit. He better not keep Bette from Tina. And if he DOES…Dana should step in. The dude shouldn’t be able to control everybody! Hopefully, Bette will go all Alpha and get the information she needs!
Wow! Loved the way the story
took a new turn.
In the next chapter expectation.
5 stars