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    At first sight

    Story written on February 27, 2011 by kins40.
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    Chapter 19

    "You’ll have breakfast and then we need to take you away for a few tests to check you over…….!"
    Breakfast consisted of a few spoonful of porridge and a glass of orange juice. Her stomach had not seen food for a little while and they had to be careful not to overload it to much. 
    She was then whisked away for a battery of tests. She surprised herself that she could actually get up. She was a bit wobbly on her legs at first but with the support of the nursing staff and a wheelchair she had made it out of her room.
    She returned a couple of hours later, thoroughly  exhausted. The doctor would come by in a little while to discuss the findings. She enquired whether anyone had showed up looking for her, but her question had been met with a negative reply. No one yet, but she was not to lose hope.
    She was left very unsettled by this answer. Where were all the people in her life? 
    She was tired but did not want to sleep. Had she not done enough of this lately? She tried to concentrate on the programme playing on  the television she had in her room. But she only looked at the pictures rolling over and was not really concentrating on what was being said.
    The doctor finally entered her room. He was followed in by a small brunette, who looked almost shy.
    They both sat on either side of Tina’s bed. They talked for a while, asking her how she was feeling and if she’d had had a good night sleep, how she had managed her first breakfast..niceties, Tina thought but were they precursors to something less enjoyable?
    Tina sensed it. She almost interrupted the doctor abruptly. She wanted to know what the tests had revealed.
    The doctor cleared his throat. He explained methodically that it was entirely impossible that Tina had ever been blind. Scans showed a perfectly healthy optic nerve, there was no evidence of previous trauma in that part of her brain. Her eyes were perfectly healthy also, no cornea damage, no cataract, she even could boast of having 20/20 vision.
    The rest of her tests had shown that physically she was fit maybe a bit frail but it was all normal considering what she had gone through a couple of weeks ago.
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    1. They are not going to give Bette any info on Tina are they? This is just great she would have to leave just when T was waking up, I hope she gets some info or Dana gets ahold of her since she is the only person that has been to see Tina from day one. PPVS

    2. First of, great story and thank you for sharing it with us. As for the dickhead for a doctor, he has no right to do that to Tina. If ever Tina finds out that he has been keeping things from her, she can press charges and they can take his licence. It’s like the “doctor’s top secrt” (that’s how it called in Greece) policy there is at the hospitals where doctors has no right to share a patient’s condition with anyone other than the patient and his/her family. But enough of that, I guess that’s the way the story has to be for future’s shake. Anyway, it’s a great one. Thank you again

    3. wow… lets hope tina also sees bette and in the next chapter they both scream for each other… come on dana… please don’t keep them apart… great story… pps

    6. Firstly, thank you for your moving story. And secondly, apologies for not thanking you before! It has been a great read, from the initial teasing as to who was in the car, to the thoughtful description of Tina’s blindness, and Bette and Tina’s amusing meeting. And then came the twist! And it was initially confusing but, as all became clear, it was revealed as clever and believable, for who is to say that someone in a coma could not hear and understand enough to create a dream world which would feel very real, although of course unsupported by any visuals. And of course Bette will fight to find her T and Tina will be reunited with her dream girlfriend – right?! Can’t wait!

    8. Is Bette too late? [told her to COME HOME SOON!] would the Hospital give her Tina’s add?..Would any of them [Dana or Alice] Inform Bette what had happen to Tina in the last two weeks?..God it’s killing me!!! PPS…ANYTIME NOW WOULD BE GREAT!

    13. You know…the doctor seems like a good guy…but his social decisions are for shit. He better not keep Bette from Tina. And if he DOES…Dana should step in. The dude shouldn’t be able to control everybody! Hopefully, Bette will go all Alpha and get the information she needs!

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