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    Surrender Everything – Chapter 2

    Story written on August 25, 2011 by BetteAddict.
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    Author Notes:

    Tina and Bette meet. How will it go? Will Tina get the information she needs? Will Bette give it to her? Will Bette discover who she is? What are both women’s dream? Find the answer to those questions in this chapter.

    PREVIOUSLY…

    Bette… 

    She ran out of the house with tears in her eyes. She ran as fast as possible, her lounges felt like they were going to explode but she didn’t care. Tears were streaming down her face and her chest was going up and down, always sucking more air in. She arrived in the woods and kept on running, jumping over roots of trees. She didn’t see one and fell down, on her knees and hands. She felt even more miserable. She sat back only on her knees. She whipped her hands clean on her dress and then covered her face with them. She didn’t want to get married, she didn’t want to meet those guys and then choose someone after 45 minutes. She wanted to fall in love, met her princess charming and get married but then she knew she would never have the kids she wanted. She kept crying, feeling helpless.

    Tina…

    Tina just landed on the planet Earth. (…) When she thought she would never find someone around here, she heard soft sobs. She frowned, trying to concentrate on the sound and find out where it was coming from. She walked to the right and suddenly saw a young woman sitting on her knees, looking like a human ball. She felt so bad for her, not even knowing why she was crying. Her dark brown curly hair was hanging over her face. It was long and shone in the sunshine that had found it’s way through the leaves and her shoulders were shaking slightly. Tina walked closer, trying not to startle the woman. 

    Chapter Two…

    Bette was so wrapped up in herself that she didn’t notice that someone kneeled next to her. She only looked up when she felt a gentle touch on her back. She looked up and saw that there was a woman sitting next to her, looking at her with sweet hazel eyes. She felt something click inside her and an unknown feeling spread through her. A good feeling.

    “Hey.” Came the sweet voice of the blonde woman. Tina could talk and understand English, which was not the language she normally spoke, because Dr. Wilson had implanted a ship into her brain that made her understand and talk other languages.

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    4. hey soon enough .. haha great chapter Bette wants the same perfect life that I want well except for the work in a galery… ((and Bette would be hers.)) I loved that part.PPS

    5. Hey BetteAddict you are doing a great job with this story. Stick to your vision and don’t get bogged down by the numbers and ratings if they happen to be low. They don’t really mean much in regard to how good a story is because they are so subjective. I hate to see stories either go by the wayside because the author is discouraged or else they go the NC 17 route and use gratuitous sex as a filler just for popularity without having any substance or adding to the plot line. You’ve got a great premise for this story, you are imaginative, and the way you are setting it up is intriguing and leaves the reader wanting for more. I’m not usually into sci-fi but I really want to see how this turns out. Thank you for offering something different. PPS

    7. Sad..oh how i wished that this is just a dream for Bette..It’s tough to lived in Earth…yeah, hear ya..If Tina would take Bette away this soon..then no more story to tell?. (O O)

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