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Surrender Everything – Chapter 2
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“So, tell me, why were you crying?” Tina asked, for some reason she was interested in this woman. She was interested beyond believe. She didn’t just want to use this as a source of information; she actually wanted to know more about her.
Bette laughed. “Every woman cries before her wedding.”
Tina frowned. “Why?”
Bette looked at Tina with a puzzled look. “How can you now know? Don’t you live on this planet?” Bette asked her, sarcastically. Tina swallowed, damn, she let that one slip. She had to think fast.
“I do but I don’t live with… people. I live here in the forest. Alone.” Tina told her. She was pleased with her own imagination.
“How is that possible?” Bette asked, puzzled.
Tina sighed. “I lived with my mother until I was 8. She taught me how to survive in the woods and when she thought I could, she build me a small shed and left. I am a surviving orphan.”
Bette’s eyes grew wide. “That’s cool. I didn’t think that was possible.”
“It is.” Tina told her. “Now, Bette tell me your story because I don’t understand.”
“Okay, I am 18 and therefore I have to get married. My Dad found three men he thinks are suitable for me. I don’t know any of them and tonight at 5.45PM, I’ll have to pick one of them to be my husband. I know what is waiting for me: serving him, having babies and be nothing. It’s the destiny of a woman here. I want to be so much more than a slave and a mother. Don’t get me wrong, I want to be a mother but I don’t want to be married. I feel like I’m too young and I want to work. I want to go to school and learn about art. I want to make my own money and not depend on anyone. I want to be my own person you know?” Bette asked Tina, desperation laced her eyes and voice.
“I understand. It’s awful that you can’t, Bette. Tell me, what are your dreams?” Tina wanted to know.
“I can’t tell you.” Bette told the stranger.
“Why can’t you?” Tina asked.
“You know my name and if you tell this to anyone, they’ll punish me.” Bette said. “I can’t tell you.”
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Go Tina Go u r the best, yes please save Bette! I think I already hooked to ur story, so please keep it coming it is wonderful ;D
It’s like a race against time! Go Tina go!!!
I’m really liking this tale
hey soon enough .. haha great chapter Bette wants the same perfect life that I want well except for the work in a galery… ((and Bette would be hers.)) I loved that part.PPS
Hey BetteAddict you are doing a great job with this story. Stick to your vision and don’t get bogged down by the numbers and ratings if they happen to be low. They don’t really mean much in regard to how good a story is because they are so subjective. I hate to see stories either go by the wayside because the author is discouraged or else they go the NC 17 route and use gratuitous sex as a filler just for popularity without having any substance or adding to the plot line. You’ve got a great premise for this story, you are imaginative, and the way you are setting it up is intriguing and leaves the reader wanting for more. I’m not usually into sci-fi but I really want to see how this turns out. Thank you for offering something different. PPS
This is so good and love it. Hope Tina will save Bette and take her away before she get married. Please post more, thanks!
Sad..oh how i wished that this is just a dream for Bette..It’s tough to lived in Earth…yeah, hear ya..If Tina would take Bette away this soon..then no more story to tell?. (O O)
Wonderful update. I do hope that Tina can save bette. thank you for this story.
Go Tina,fight for your woman.Thank you for the update.PPS