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Surrender Everything – Chapter 2
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“Hi.” Bette said, and whipped her tears away.
“What’s wrong?” Tina asked.
Bette let out a bitter laugh. “I don’t think you want to know.”
“Well, I do want to know but why don’t you stand up? We can sit over there on that tree stump.” Tina said and stood up. She held her hand out and smiled at Bette. The brown-haired woman took Tina’s hand and together they walked to the stump. It was a big one so they could both sit on it but before Tina took place, she saw that Bette’s knee was bleeding.
“Oh, you hurt yourself.” Tina concluded and sat on her knees in front of Bette.
“Yeah, but I’m okay.” Bette said.
Tina just smiled at Bette and took out a little bag that contained an herb she had gotten form Dana that cleaned wounds and let them heal faster. She laid it on the ground next to her and then opened her water bottle. She cleaned the wounds with the water, which made Bette breath in. That stung a little. Then, Tina opened the bag it and took a few blue leaves out. She pulled Bette’s dress up a little, letting it rest on the mocha thighs.
“This going to hurt a little.” Tina said before she pressed a few leaves of the herb against the wounds making Bette yelp. With a strong hold, Tina kept the leg in place. She held it against the wound for 10 seconds before throwing it away. It was useless now. She still had some. Bette had tears in her eyes. It felt like Tina had burned her wound. “It’ll be healed in two days. I’m sorry it hurt.” Tina said and stood up.
“I’ve never seen that herb before, what is it?” Bette asked.
Tina grinned. “That’s a secret. Now, tell me, what is your name?”
Bette smiled. Her tears and pain was forgotten when she saw that grin. “Elisabeth Preston Porter, but just call me Bette. What is your name?”
Tina knew she couldn’t tell her full name to anyone. That was too dangerous. “Just call me Tina.”
Bette smiled. “Okay, Tina.”
Her name sounded so good coming from the brunette’s lips.
Tina sat next to Bette, their thighs touching which made both women shudder. It was a feeling that both women had never experienced.
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Go Tina Go u r the best, yes please save Bette! I think I already hooked to ur story, so please keep it coming it is wonderful ;D
It’s like a race against time! Go Tina go!!!
I’m really liking this tale
hey soon enough .. haha great chapter Bette wants the same perfect life that I want well except for the work in a galery… ((and Bette would be hers.)) I loved that part.PPS
Hey BetteAddict you are doing a great job with this story. Stick to your vision and don’t get bogged down by the numbers and ratings if they happen to be low. They don’t really mean much in regard to how good a story is because they are so subjective. I hate to see stories either go by the wayside because the author is discouraged or else they go the NC 17 route and use gratuitous sex as a filler just for popularity without having any substance or adding to the plot line. You’ve got a great premise for this story, you are imaginative, and the way you are setting it up is intriguing and leaves the reader wanting for more. I’m not usually into sci-fi but I really want to see how this turns out. Thank you for offering something different. PPS
This is so good and love it. Hope Tina will save Bette and take her away before she get married. Please post more, thanks!
Sad..oh how i wished that this is just a dream for Bette..It’s tough to lived in Earth…yeah, hear ya..If Tina would take Bette away this soon..then no more story to tell?. (O O)
Wonderful update. I do hope that Tina can save bette. thank you for this story.
Go Tina,fight for your woman.Thank you for the update.PPS