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Chapter 13
The first shots were heard as Dana was closing the door of the chopper and Bette quickly identified the source. She gently leaned her head on the rifle and stared right through the gun’s sight.
“Got you” She said barely above a whisper and opened fire to her target, instantly killing the guy as the shot went right to his head. Immediately another three guns were heard as the helicopter was taking off, and instantaneously Bette repeated the operation taking out her three objectives in less than thirty seconds.
The helicopter was high up in the sky and on its way to the FBI’s central offices carrying three scared lawyers back to safety, and as the assault teams that were assembled to get them realized this their rage was instantly felt through the rain of bullets that were travelling from everywhere, but mainly from three very distinct places.
“Shane take the ones to your eleven” Bette said almost shouting for the sounds of bullets travelling everywhere was almost deafening.
“Roger” Shane said as she took one of the extra guns she was carrying and immediately opened fire from her position, using two guns.
This gave Bette time to adjust her rifle again and make four shots, enough to silence that spot for good. But the reply from the others didn’t take long to intensify even more as they were able to identify where the brunette sniper was.
“Shit” Bette exclaimed as she was forced to hide from the bullets that were purred on her direction.
“The back-up teams are almost here” Shane spoke as she heard complimentary guns being fired from several spots behind her.
“Back-up teams what’s your location?” Bette asked and the replies didn’t take long to arrive.
“Roger team alfa, open fire to your twelve” The brunette again commanded and once more the much needed cover gave her the time she needed to take down four more objectives.
The intense rounds of shooting kept on going for almost ten minutes as the criminals realized that not only there was a sniper taking them one by one, but they were also surrounded by both the FBI and the NYPD.
“Shane, I’m coming down cover me”
Once on the ground Bette quickly took cover completely decided to either arrest them all or leave none alive.
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Awesome update… had me at the edge of my seat the whole time. You do write well. Please keep the chapters coming. Thank you!
I’ve missed quite a few chapters on this story, absolutely live it and I am hoping both Peggy, Shane and Bette will be ok. I wonder how Tina will greet Bette if she comes back un injured and completely unharmed.
Just read all your updates on this story thank you absolutely excellent
Great job, now you have to post quickly cause I want to know what happens. Thanks
Really interesting,good job.Please not too much drama.PPS
great update. talk about action…you nailed it.
All caught up…I clicked ‘next post by author’ and got nothing, Dang it!!!!!!! PPVS!
Whoa!! Anne…! You left me baffled here :-O I do hope you will post the next chapters soon!! ;-) and how could you worry about the way you write it?! You know what they said-there’s always a first time for everything :-D and you, my friend, just do it so perfectly amazing!! I don’t think anyone would believe your confession about being your first time writing this kind of action story ;-) I hope there’s another update from you soon, regardless how great is the Monday for you ;-) and let me thank you again for this update and for sharing the story that make me sit on the edge and still I asked for some more :-)
Great update. Great story. Why in the world couldn’t they have caught these guys before they entered the building? You are doing such a great job with this story. Thanks for coming back to complete it. Enjoying it so much. PPS. Thanks.
Well, my Monday improved considerably, but now I´m hanging from that seat again..Peggy is my all time favourite..you know you have to post asap – please.
Hope they will be ok