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The cemetery, or what was left of it, was in complete silence again, as a cemetery should be. Both of the sides of this battle were taking their time to think what to do next and sizing the other.
“Agent Porter what do you wanna do?” Came the voice in the walkie-talkie.
“Let’s close the perimeter on them and if they open fire take them down but do not kill them, I repeat if they open fire respond without killing them… the priority is to take them alive, as many as possible” She quickly answered.
“Tina really, they will be okay. They are backed up by half of the NYPD and six FBI teams, we were expecting this” Dana tried to sound as convincing as possible but Tina’s face showed otherwise.
“I know but… I thought they were supposed to be here with us” Tina replied trying her best to disguise her concern and failing miserably at it.
“I know and we’re sorry about that, we should have told you before the ceremony started but then again, we didn’t want to worry you in vain in case nothing happened” Dana patiently elaborated.
“Where are we going now? I’m sorry, I’m sure you told us yesterday but I… just… I forgot” Tina asked trying to divert the conversation, although she was sure nothing was going to help her situation, given the huge knots in both her stomach and throat.
“We’re going to the FBI’s main offices” Dana gently replied with a warm smile and the blonde just nodded still unable to shake her concern away.
Back to the cemetery Bette was hiding behind a small mausoleum and gently whispered “Shane I’ve got two on sight, twenty yards away… I’m going in”
“Be careful” Came the reply on her ear.
Bette approached the two men as quietly as a hunting snake and once she positioned herself in shooting range she decided it was time to do the proper introductions.
“FBI! Don’t you fucking move!” Bette shouted coming from behind the suspects.
Right then the two men froze on their spots.
“Put your guns down slowly, very slowly” She commanded and the men didn’t move nor gave a verbal answer of any type. “Do it now or I will shoot, I promise you that” Bette said in a cold and collected tone of voice.
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Awesome update… had me at the edge of my seat the whole time. You do write well. Please keep the chapters coming. Thank you!
I’ve missed quite a few chapters on this story, absolutely live it and I am hoping both Peggy, Shane and Bette will be ok. I wonder how Tina will greet Bette if she comes back un injured and completely unharmed.
Just read all your updates on this story thank you absolutely excellent
Great job, now you have to post quickly cause I want to know what happens. Thanks
Really interesting,good job.Please not too much drama.PPS
great update. talk about action…you nailed it.
All caught up…I clicked ‘next post by author’ and got nothing, Dang it!!!!!!! PPVS!
Whoa!! Anne…! You left me baffled here :-O I do hope you will post the next chapters soon!! ;-) and how could you worry about the way you write it?! You know what they said-there’s always a first time for everything :-D and you, my friend, just do it so perfectly amazing!! I don’t think anyone would believe your confession about being your first time writing this kind of action story ;-) I hope there’s another update from you soon, regardless how great is the Monday for you ;-) and let me thank you again for this update and for sharing the story that make me sit on the edge and still I asked for some more :-)
Great update. Great story. Why in the world couldn’t they have caught these guys before they entered the building? You are doing such a great job with this story. Thanks for coming back to complete it. Enjoying it so much. PPS. Thanks.
Well, my Monday improved considerably, but now I´m hanging from that seat again..Peggy is my all time favourite..you know you have to post asap – please.
Hope they will be ok