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Just then the two suspects dropped their guns and put their arms in the air.
“Turn around slowly, VERY slowly” The brunette commanded again and the men did as told but this time, as they saw her, they started speaking to one another in Russian and with smug smiles plastered on their faces.
“Niet” Bette simply said and the two of them went completely silent and simply stared at one another utterly surprised. The brunette spoke again in Russian and basically commanded them to turn to face each other and go down on their knees, all done in slow motion of course.
The two Russian strangers did as were told so Bette approached one of them from behind, and just as she was about to handcuff him the suspect pushed her gun away and hit her in the stomach with his elbow, that was luckily protected by the bulletproof vest, but this made Bette stumble a couple of steps backwards.
Just as the other one was about to get up Shane came out of nowhere and pointed her gun directly to the guy’s skull.
“Give me a reason” She simply said and the stranger understood she meant serious business, so he just quit what he was about to do.
The other guy managed to get up and went in search for Bette but probably he wasn’t prepared for what he found when he did that, for one heck of a fight started with arms, legs, elbows, knees and fists flying all over the place and mostly in the direction of the Russian. The whole situation looked like a scene taken from one of the Jason Bourne movies, one of those in which Matt Damon single handedly kicks everyone’s ass basically.
As Bette was taking care of this guy, Shane quickly handcuffed the one that was under her gun and proceeded to push him to the ground quite roughly.
“And when she says niet, she means niet” The slim brunette simply added before she kicked the stranger on the head leaving him unconscious.
“And now you are under arrest… bitch” Bette said again in perfect Russian, except for the bitch part of her phrase, as she handcuffed a bleeding man that was clearly in severe pain and with his face to the ground.
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Awesome update… had me at the edge of my seat the whole time. You do write well. Please keep the chapters coming. Thank you!
I’ve missed quite a few chapters on this story, absolutely live it and I am hoping both Peggy, Shane and Bette will be ok. I wonder how Tina will greet Bette if she comes back un injured and completely unharmed.
Just read all your updates on this story thank you absolutely excellent
Great job, now you have to post quickly cause I want to know what happens. Thanks
Really interesting,good job.Please not too much drama.PPS
great update. talk about action…you nailed it.
All caught up…I clicked ‘next post by author’ and got nothing, Dang it!!!!!!! PPVS!
Whoa!! Anne…! You left me baffled here :-O I do hope you will post the next chapters soon!! ;-) and how could you worry about the way you write it?! You know what they said-there’s always a first time for everything :-D and you, my friend, just do it so perfectly amazing!! I don’t think anyone would believe your confession about being your first time writing this kind of action story ;-) I hope there’s another update from you soon, regardless how great is the Monday for you ;-) and let me thank you again for this update and for sharing the story that make me sit on the edge and still I asked for some more :-)
Great update. Great story. Why in the world couldn’t they have caught these guys before they entered the building? You are doing such a great job with this story. Thanks for coming back to complete it. Enjoying it so much. PPS. Thanks.
Well, my Monday improved considerably, but now I´m hanging from that seat again..Peggy is my all time favourite..you know you have to post asap – please.
Hope they will be ok