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War, Love, and Commitment…a Sci-Fi Story Chapter 4 – THE MOVE, REVELATIONS

New Pasadena, 9:00 am. Friday, October 26, 2057. New CalTech-Biochemistry building – Top floor lab
Louise is sitting with Tina and Willow behind a super computer; they are studying the morphology of the wormhole in the vicinity of the portal to the Hellmouth; five probes have been self-installed to observe the activity of the aliens in the surrounding of the network of black and white holes, the probes were provided with a device able to count the pulses of its power source to simulate and estimate time and distance, and after few initial calculations, they were certain about those parameters; to achieve their positions the probes have been moving along the top of the wormhole in order to avoid being detected.

Currently the probes were standing on the upper part of the wormhole, on what would correspond to the roof, and their presence was imperceptible and silent to someone close to them; nevertheless the devices are distributed in the way that the people in the lab could observe the traffic of entities and vehicles around and soon Louise and the girls discovered that armies of uber-vamps are moving to other two portals (white holes) disappearing at the entrances to probably pass to the universes behind them, the view inside the Hellmouth wasn’t clear, but Willow already recognized a demon called Gnarl, who feed on human skin, and also the treacherous and evil Jasmine one of the so-called ’Power That Be’, who were ancient beings inhabiting the same universe where our planet belong; some of them are good and other evil, it is believed the good ones watch for the peace and welfare of the inhabitants of different planets; but the evil ones are apparently, the culprits of the opening the portals to the universe where the First Evil came from.
Louise: “I think we should try to send a probe farther”
Tina: “how much farther?”
Louise: “Inside the Hellmouth”
Willow: “that place is too far away, how are you going to manage the transmission…? And it is very risky, what if they detect us?”
Louise: “well…, we’ll see if it is possible to do it without raise suspicion…, what do you say Tina?”
Tina: “let me think about that”
Willow: “hmm…, that would be hard”
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Laurel Holleman is the answer to your question. What a beautiful woman 😍
There were some rumours after a tweet from Ilene, but Laurel said it was about a picture that will be taken ????, maybe from all the actresses from the L Word.
Great update as always.
But i was looking forward to the birthday present to Bette from Tina 😔 you forgot to post that very important part of the chapter.
Glad that Maxime showed up to warn them and gave advice how to handle the Uber Vamp, the mole and First Evil.
Thanks for the update!
Almost didn’t tell you, i really liked the pictures.
Hi Bibi
Thanks again for your comments Bibi. Agree totally with you, Laurel Holloman, so gorgeous woman, and so smart (BTW what was the rumor from Ilene, are you talking about the comeback of TLW?).
And NO, I have not forgotten the gift from Tina to Bette, but it will require a big part of the next chapter, including the music and the aftermath of that event, as well as the banter; I better don’t mention anything else, but that chapter is almost finished in my hard drive, I’m just looking for the pictures and to ‘make’ new ones.
Thanks again Bibi
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I got a tweet alert that showed a tweet from Ilene where she included the @adress from several The L Word actress. That started some rumours.
Today Laurel came with a tweet that it was going about a picture? And that she isn’t going to act anymore, that she has a new career, painting. She is very good. She had a show in the Netherlands last year, but i injured my knee and wasn’t able to go ???? That really sucks, is she in my home country and i couldn’t go ????
Looking forward to the chapter.
Yes, I received the same tweet from Ilene, but I didn’t have time to read Laurel’s; well, I would be amazed if she could take some spare time for acting again, she is very good at painting (in my dreams she is showing her work in Jennifer Beals’ gallery…, haha ????); no, she wouldn’t have time to act anymore, this is the problem with committed people who are too good in more than one field; but it’s fine I admire her anyway ????.
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Hello my friend
Here I am again slowly keeping my reading updated.
I know how sad and this feeling of denial that Buffy lives with Faith, Buffy must have her reasons for doing so. Since both have lived by their feelings between love and hate, and that kind of feeling about someone, and it confuses us a lot, because they are emotions that are in two different extremes. I am hoping that they will have a happy ending in this story.
I hope that through this dream, the information of Maxine will be of great help to Bette, Tina and company in this fight, which in my view and surrounded by many dangers.
All the universe
Bear hug !
Hi, my friend:
Thanks for your nice comment. Yes, it’s hard and very painful when you are in that type of relationship, love, and hate, But sooner or later the balance should lean to one side; and we will see how it turns. I have missed your comments and I’m happy you are back. This week I will post the last chapter 0f this story. There is a sequel but that will have to wait, I have another story writing right now and some others in-line to start.
I hope at the end, you will like this whole story.
Bear hug my friend
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