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Becca finally turned, clutching both ends of the woolen blanket draped over her shoulders like a cape. There was a look in her eye as she slowly leaned forward, just far enough for their lips to brush. She grazed her nose against Jo’s and breathe in. Mmmnnn she smells so good. She blew a breath out slowly, and leaned back to stare at Jo’s lips, then looked up into her eyes. “This is the nicest surprise anyone’s ever given me. I understand why you’ve kept this place to yourself. And the fact that you’re choosing to share this with me really means a lot. So thank you. Thanks for bringing me here.”
Unwittingly, her lean forward moved her ample cleavage into Jo’s line of sight.
They gazed at each other wordlessly, both aware of the shift in the mood in the car, eyes roaming restlessly, burning with a fever, drinking in the other’s sheer sexuality. Becca ping-ponged between tongue-tied lust for Jo and holding Jo to her promise they’d talk through everything first.
“Let’s talk first,” she was about to say when Jo pressed something that made both car doors open smoothly. “Let’s get in,” Jo said hoarsely, halfway out the door already.
Becca jumped out, none too steady on her legs, shaking from a wave of arousal. She knew she was leaking into her panties already.
She felt Jo pull her along into the house. “Things in the car,” she started to say. Jo muttered something about getting them tomorrow.
They stumbled into the house, and Jo pressed a few buttons that shut and locked the door, and slowly dimmed the lights around the house, until only a few were lit, in dim setting.
She nudged Becca against a nearby post, mind lost in a haze of lust. ”I really, really need… this.” Her lips were on Becca before Becca could release her hold on the woolen blanket, felt them soft, full and flush against her own. No slow lean in, the way Jo had long imagined their first kiss after all this time would go. Their mouths met like the yin and yang of a mystical whole, and Jo slipped her tongue in before Becca, still clutching the blanket, could realize what was happening.
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I am not familiar with these two characters – Becca and Jo. I went back and started at the beginning, so, these comments are for the two chapters.
Chapter 1 – Oh, my god. What a absolutely horrendous situation. Becca is so much in love with Jo and is ready to announce to her friends and family that she is in a relationship with a woman. Jo tries to convince her not to go through with her outing to her family, which does not work. On the way to the family gathering Jo ends the relationship with Becca for her own good. Needless to say Becca falls apart. The pain and anguish Becca feels is devastatingly clear to the reader. Becca even though she spends months under the care of her family and hours in therapy never reveals to her family and friends that her massive breakdown is the result of a lesbian relationship breakup. Becca continues to love Jo but continues to anguish over the sudden break up without knowing the reason why.
The story has a flash black to when the two characters meet and begin their romantic relationship. This is certainly an attraction at first sight which by all appearances develops into a deep love for both parties.
Chapter One ends when three years after the breakup, Becca is in New York City in time square when an electronic billboard catches her eye that features an androgynous model of male clothing – her ex girlfriend Jo.
Chapter Two – Three years after the abrupt termination of their relationship, Becca is talked into attending a charity event by her friends. At the event, across the room, she see her long lost love Jo. Jo sees her and works her way to Becca vicinity to say hello. The rest of the chapter tells what happens the rest of the evening. Much of the dialogue is in the mind of Becca. Becca and Jo find a secluded area where they can talk which does not go as well as either hopes. Jo takes an opportunity to serenade Becca an abbreviated explanation as to what happened three years ago. Jo gets an emergency alert on her property in upstate New York and needs to leave town at once. Jo agrees to take Becca with her for the weekend and the story goes on from there.
After getting to the “cabin”, its becomes obvious that Jo is still very much attracted to if not in love with Becca. The weekend adventures are very descriptive and preview what might be a very interesting weekend for Becca.
There is an indication that not just a reunion but a reconciliation may be in the works for these two.
I recommend this story and I encourage the author to add to this frequently as possible.
Hi Martha3128,
Happy you’ve “met” Becca and Jo, and that you’re into their story. Thank you for taking the time to post a recap, and thank you, also, for recommending it. I’ll try to post the next chapter as soon as I can. But, as you can see, each one runs quite long, between 9k to 10k words a chapter, even as I try to make each word count and flow smoothly.. Hope you’ll find the next one as enjoyable a read as the first two.
Take good care, in the meantime..
“Talk” to you soon!
– S –