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She shot her a quick smile, though. “But thanks for the thought. Don’t worry, they’ll be other things you can help me with over the next couple of days.”
This time, it was Becca who grabbed one of Jo’s cold hands. She rubbed on it quickly, to warm it up. She also gave it a quick kiss before returning it back to the wheel.
Jo was smiling at her the whole time. “When I woke up do you know the first thing I felt?”
Eyebrows raised in question, Becca asked confusedly, “No, I haven’t the faintest idea how you felt, Jo.”
“Excited. Anxious. A little nervous even. I had a strong feeling I was going to see you tonight.”
“Really? Based on …”
Jo was focused again on the tree-lined road, which hadn’t been plowed. Since they were now on Jo’s property, though, Becca guessed the blond was even more familiar with this road than she was with the county road they’d just left.
“Based on what I overheard during a break in a photoshoot I was in last week. The gala invite came from the fashion house I was modeling suits for in that shoot, and one of their reps mentioned who the main sponsors of the charity would be, including your family. That gave me hope you’d attend to rep your family. Then when I saw you there …”
“Good thing I saw you first. But flirting with all those girls, by the way.”
Jo’s shrug spoke volumes.
Time has brought your heart to me
“Well, none of them are here with me, are they? You’re the one with me, Becca. No one’s ever been here with me. Just you.”
The winds that had whipped up snow drifts died down, and the snow fog soon lifted. They crested over a short hill, drove around a grove of trees, then, pretty soon, they saw it. Lit from inside, surrounded by a white sheen of snow, Jo’s mountain retreat glowed in the night like a glass-encircled postcard of edgy architecture.
“Oh my … Jo, I’m speechless! Beautiful doesn’t begin to describe it!”
Jo was looking at it proudly, too. “You like it?”
“I love it!”
Becca couldn’t wait to get inside. “So it’s glass walls all around, and inside you’ve got wood and timber providing the structure? Including for the roof?
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I am not familiar with these two characters – Becca and Jo. I went back and started at the beginning, so, these comments are for the two chapters.
Chapter 1 – Oh, my god. What a absolutely horrendous situation. Becca is so much in love with Jo and is ready to announce to her friends and family that she is in a relationship with a woman. Jo tries to convince her not to go through with her outing to her family, which does not work. On the way to the family gathering Jo ends the relationship with Becca for her own good. Needless to say Becca falls apart. The pain and anguish Becca feels is devastatingly clear to the reader. Becca even though she spends months under the care of her family and hours in therapy never reveals to her family and friends that her massive breakdown is the result of a lesbian relationship breakup. Becca continues to love Jo but continues to anguish over the sudden break up without knowing the reason why.
The story has a flash black to when the two characters meet and begin their romantic relationship. This is certainly an attraction at first sight which by all appearances develops into a deep love for both parties.
Chapter One ends when three years after the breakup, Becca is in New York City in time square when an electronic billboard catches her eye that features an androgynous model of male clothing – her ex girlfriend Jo.
Chapter Two – Three years after the abrupt termination of their relationship, Becca is talked into attending a charity event by her friends. At the event, across the room, she see her long lost love Jo. Jo sees her and works her way to Becca vicinity to say hello. The rest of the chapter tells what happens the rest of the evening. Much of the dialogue is in the mind of Becca. Becca and Jo find a secluded area where they can talk which does not go as well as either hopes. Jo takes an opportunity to serenade Becca an abbreviated explanation as to what happened three years ago. Jo gets an emergency alert on her property in upstate New York and needs to leave town at once. Jo agrees to take Becca with her for the weekend and the story goes on from there.
After getting to the “cabin”, its becomes obvious that Jo is still very much attracted to if not in love with Becca. The weekend adventures are very descriptive and preview what might be a very interesting weekend for Becca.
There is an indication that not just a reunion but a reconciliation may be in the works for these two.
I recommend this story and I encourage the author to add to this frequently as possible.
Hi Martha3128,
Happy you’ve “met” Becca and Jo, and that you’re into their story. Thank you for taking the time to post a recap, and thank you, also, for recommending it. I’ll try to post the next chapter as soon as I can. But, as you can see, each one runs quite long, between 9k to 10k words a chapter, even as I try to make each word count and flow smoothly.. Hope you’ll find the next one as enjoyable a read as the first two.
Take good care, in the meantime..
“Talk” to you soon!
– S –