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She didn’t like the sight of the wicked grin Jo gave her, even though it was tempered by another soft, lingering kiss. “I need to see what the alarm is about, babe. I really should have checked the shed when we pulled in … but you were looking so damned … hot. I couldn’t think of anything else but you. I promise, I’ll make it up to you. Won’t be gone a minute.”
The door slamming behind Jo triggered a simultaneous bang in Becca’s mind. She pounded her fists against the cold metal door with decreasing force as she repeatedly cried out, “What the fuck???” to the empty house.
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“So you’re not scared being out there by yourself? What if bears attack you, or some deranged serial killer running from the cops breaks in? How would you protect yourself?”
Jo bit her tongue before saying something she would likely regret later on.
People had been questioning her sanity for two years now about pouring her heart and soul into building her mountain retreat so far from the nearest town. Their questions started even earlier, after she’d spent some of her savings on sizable acreage on a mountain in Duchess County, where she didn’t even have family or friends, arguing that it would be difficult for her later on to offload the property.
But it was late, and it was still snowing. She was cold and tired out from the drive. Plus a smoking hot Becca was waiting inside the house. Jo didn’t want to waste a second on a pointless conversation. So she forced a smile and lightness in her voice. “You know me, Peter. I can’t fully explain why I feel like I’ve found a slice of paradise up here.”
“All the same, Jo …”
Jo made a noise on the phone that made it sound like her cell signal was wavering . “But thanks, again, for helping me reset the security system. No more alarms, and everything’s gone quiet now. Maybe we can talk later on about that upgrade you were telling me about earlier?”
“Yeah, let’s. I’ll install it at cost, Jo. Carol and I sometimes worry, as you know, …”
“Nothing to worry about, tonight, Peter. And please tell Carol I’ll probably drop by sometime this weekend. You know how much I love her red velvet cake.”
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I am not familiar with these two characters – Becca and Jo. I went back and started at the beginning, so, these comments are for the two chapters.
Chapter 1 – Oh, my god. What a absolutely horrendous situation. Becca is so much in love with Jo and is ready to announce to her friends and family that she is in a relationship with a woman. Jo tries to convince her not to go through with her outing to her family, which does not work. On the way to the family gathering Jo ends the relationship with Becca for her own good. Needless to say Becca falls apart. The pain and anguish Becca feels is devastatingly clear to the reader. Becca even though she spends months under the care of her family and hours in therapy never reveals to her family and friends that her massive breakdown is the result of a lesbian relationship breakup. Becca continues to love Jo but continues to anguish over the sudden break up without knowing the reason why.
The story has a flash black to when the two characters meet and begin their romantic relationship. This is certainly an attraction at first sight which by all appearances develops into a deep love for both parties.
Chapter One ends when three years after the breakup, Becca is in New York City in time square when an electronic billboard catches her eye that features an androgynous model of male clothing – her ex girlfriend Jo.
Chapter Two – Three years after the abrupt termination of their relationship, Becca is talked into attending a charity event by her friends. At the event, across the room, she see her long lost love Jo. Jo sees her and works her way to Becca vicinity to say hello. The rest of the chapter tells what happens the rest of the evening. Much of the dialogue is in the mind of Becca. Becca and Jo find a secluded area where they can talk which does not go as well as either hopes. Jo takes an opportunity to serenade Becca an abbreviated explanation as to what happened three years ago. Jo gets an emergency alert on her property in upstate New York and needs to leave town at once. Jo agrees to take Becca with her for the weekend and the story goes on from there.
After getting to the “cabin”, its becomes obvious that Jo is still very much attracted to if not in love with Becca. The weekend adventures are very descriptive and preview what might be a very interesting weekend for Becca.
There is an indication that not just a reunion but a reconciliation may be in the works for these two.
I recommend this story and I encourage the author to add to this frequently as possible.
Hi Martha3128,
Happy you’ve “met” Becca and Jo, and that you’re into their story. Thank you for taking the time to post a recap, and thank you, also, for recommending it. I’ll try to post the next chapter as soon as I can. But, as you can see, each one runs quite long, between 9k to 10k words a chapter, even as I try to make each word count and flow smoothly.. Hope you’ll find the next one as enjoyable a read as the first two.
Take good care, in the meantime..
“Talk” to you soon!
– S –