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She continued talking loudly as she put things away in the kitchen and prepped the coffee maker. But Becca didn’t respond to anything she said.
Where is she? Is she thoroughly pissed? What a bad start to a weekend that I’d hoped would help us reset things!
The house is nice and warm, at least, thank goodness. So she should be comfortable.
As she sipped on the lemon infused warm water she’d prepared, she took a second walk through the rest of the house, thinking about the mess between them that the alarm had inadvertently created. Hopefully, Becca wasn’t that angry, and had probably just fallen asleep while waiting for her, which would explain her continued silence.
She heaved a deep sigh and shrugged her shoulders at her image reflected in the shiny surface of the fridge. You are in deep shit with her. Yes, you had to balance her sexual needs against the alarms going off. Of course it was really important to check out what was happening with the alarm system. But you shouldn’t go heavy on the technical mambo-jambo about the alarms when you talk to her, ok? Be patient, and see if you can help her see your side of things.
“And will you please not fuck her first? Talk, listen, build things up slowly, ok?”
This self-talking process used to work much better.
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Her hair was still damp, but Jo didn’t care. It would have taken another 5 to 10 minutes to blow her hair dry. Those minutes away from Becca’s side weren’t worth hair blown dry.
She pulled the shower door shut with a soft thud and tossed the towel onto a large hook on the opposite wall. The towel nestled next to the one Becca had evidently used earlier. Jo smiled broadly at the sight of two towels hanging on her bathroom wall. No particular reason. Two towels hanging next to each other in MY bathroom. And one of them belongs to Becca.
She’d noticed earlier that Becca had used the fluffy bathrobe that had been hanging on a rail below the stack of folded towels resting on a glass shelf that ran along a wall of the bathroom. It was the only bathrobe she had in this house, which meant Jo didn’t have one to use for herself. At least it was newly laundered! As long as Becca’s making herself comfortable here, she can use anything she wants to use. That’s fine with me.
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I am not familiar with these two characters – Becca and Jo. I went back and started at the beginning, so, these comments are for the two chapters.
Chapter 1 – Oh, my god. What a absolutely horrendous situation. Becca is so much in love with Jo and is ready to announce to her friends and family that she is in a relationship with a woman. Jo tries to convince her not to go through with her outing to her family, which does not work. On the way to the family gathering Jo ends the relationship with Becca for her own good. Needless to say Becca falls apart. The pain and anguish Becca feels is devastatingly clear to the reader. Becca even though she spends months under the care of her family and hours in therapy never reveals to her family and friends that her massive breakdown is the result of a lesbian relationship breakup. Becca continues to love Jo but continues to anguish over the sudden break up without knowing the reason why.
The story has a flash black to when the two characters meet and begin their romantic relationship. This is certainly an attraction at first sight which by all appearances develops into a deep love for both parties.
Chapter One ends when three years after the breakup, Becca is in New York City in time square when an electronic billboard catches her eye that features an androgynous model of male clothing – her ex girlfriend Jo.
Chapter Two – Three years after the abrupt termination of their relationship, Becca is talked into attending a charity event by her friends. At the event, across the room, she see her long lost love Jo. Jo sees her and works her way to Becca vicinity to say hello. The rest of the chapter tells what happens the rest of the evening. Much of the dialogue is in the mind of Becca. Becca and Jo find a secluded area where they can talk which does not go as well as either hopes. Jo takes an opportunity to serenade Becca an abbreviated explanation as to what happened three years ago. Jo gets an emergency alert on her property in upstate New York and needs to leave town at once. Jo agrees to take Becca with her for the weekend and the story goes on from there.
After getting to the “cabin”, its becomes obvious that Jo is still very much attracted to if not in love with Becca. The weekend adventures are very descriptive and preview what might be a very interesting weekend for Becca.
There is an indication that not just a reunion but a reconciliation may be in the works for these two.
I recommend this story and I encourage the author to add to this frequently as possible.
Hi Martha3128,
Happy you’ve “met” Becca and Jo, and that you’re into their story. Thank you for taking the time to post a recap, and thank you, also, for recommending it. I’ll try to post the next chapter as soon as I can. But, as you can see, each one runs quite long, between 9k to 10k words a chapter, even as I try to make each word count and flow smoothly.. Hope you’ll find the next one as enjoyable a read as the first two.
Take good care, in the meantime..
“Talk” to you soon!
– S –