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“I said all that hair stroking was gonna cost you. Not to mention your leaving me high and dry earlier.” Becca had opened her eyes, gazing openly and clearly at the blue eyes that were transfixed by something.
Jo’s tongue felt thick and useless in her mouth. “Um … B-b-becs .. you … you know how sometimes you don’t know what makes you say what you say? Or want to do what you want to?”
Becca knew now that it was something about her body that was scrambling Jo’s thoughts. That made her feel so good she couldn’t even.
“Up here blue eyes. My face is up here.”
Jo’s finger grazed the exposed nipple, eyes fixed on the prize. “There’s no way they didn’t break the mold when they made this body.”
Again, that low, sexy rumble, now hoarse with desire, lit Becca up. “So here’s the thing, stud. I was thinking half an hour after you’d deserted me on the brink of an orgasm, breaking off before I got off, that you are emotionally destructive and generally not good for me.”
Jo couldn’t help it, she pulled Becca closer and dipped her mouth and slowly licked the nipple she’d been grazing with a fingertip. “I’m sorry this is such a nightmare for you, babe. Being cooped up with me in a place you can’t escape from.”
“I thought we were supposed to talk while we’re up here,” Becca murmured, running her hand through Jo’s damp hair. “Why does this happen to us? We’re supposed to be arguing about something right now, but we’re not … why?”
“I know, I know, it’s barbaric,” Jo mumbled as she slipped her hand into the robe to cup Becca’s warm, full, bouncy breast. “Unforgivable, really. It should be harder. We should be like most couples when things don’t make sense. They fight, right? We don’t. Another thing: we’re so different, you and I. We shouldn’t work.”
She squeezed the breast she was fondling slowly as she nibbled her way up Becca’s neck. “But we do.”
She felt Becca open her mouth to say something, but uttered a moan instead. “I think it’s all this crazy chemistry that’s getting in the way of sanity. It’s like we never stopped.”
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I am not familiar with these two characters – Becca and Jo. I went back and started at the beginning, so, these comments are for the two chapters.
Chapter 1 – Oh, my god. What a absolutely horrendous situation. Becca is so much in love with Jo and is ready to announce to her friends and family that she is in a relationship with a woman. Jo tries to convince her not to go through with her outing to her family, which does not work. On the way to the family gathering Jo ends the relationship with Becca for her own good. Needless to say Becca falls apart. The pain and anguish Becca feels is devastatingly clear to the reader. Becca even though she spends months under the care of her family and hours in therapy never reveals to her family and friends that her massive breakdown is the result of a lesbian relationship breakup. Becca continues to love Jo but continues to anguish over the sudden break up without knowing the reason why.
The story has a flash black to when the two characters meet and begin their romantic relationship. This is certainly an attraction at first sight which by all appearances develops into a deep love for both parties.
Chapter One ends when three years after the breakup, Becca is in New York City in time square when an electronic billboard catches her eye that features an androgynous model of male clothing – her ex girlfriend Jo.
Chapter Two – Three years after the abrupt termination of their relationship, Becca is talked into attending a charity event by her friends. At the event, across the room, she see her long lost love Jo. Jo sees her and works her way to Becca vicinity to say hello. The rest of the chapter tells what happens the rest of the evening. Much of the dialogue is in the mind of Becca. Becca and Jo find a secluded area where they can talk which does not go as well as either hopes. Jo takes an opportunity to serenade Becca an abbreviated explanation as to what happened three years ago. Jo gets an emergency alert on her property in upstate New York and needs to leave town at once. Jo agrees to take Becca with her for the weekend and the story goes on from there.
After getting to the “cabin”, its becomes obvious that Jo is still very much attracted to if not in love with Becca. The weekend adventures are very descriptive and preview what might be a very interesting weekend for Becca.
There is an indication that not just a reunion but a reconciliation may be in the works for these two.
I recommend this story and I encourage the author to add to this frequently as possible.
Hi Martha3128,
Happy you’ve “met” Becca and Jo, and that you’re into their story. Thank you for taking the time to post a recap, and thank you, also, for recommending it. I’ll try to post the next chapter as soon as I can. But, as you can see, each one runs quite long, between 9k to 10k words a chapter, even as I try to make each word count and flow smoothly.. Hope you’ll find the next one as enjoyable a read as the first two.
Take good care, in the meantime..
“Talk” to you soon!
– S –