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She was out the door before Becca could say anything, trudging through the snow bank likely created by the snow plow when it plowed the road earlier. Becca could see her clearly through the bright halogen lights that were now on full beam setting, as she worked to clear a path for the gates to swing through, using a shovel she produced out of nowhere, it seemed.
Becca stared. It looked like hard work, but Jo managed to quickly clear a path for the gates, moving with an athlete’s grace and economy of effort, no wasted motion. She liked watching Jo move, and marveled at how in tune every part of her seemed to be with the rest of her body. Especially in bed.
As Becca looked on, she noticed light purple lilac petals strewn over the hoarfrost behind the post that Jo was now checking. For the first time, Becca noticed the biggest grove of lilac tree-shrubs she’d ever seen hovering a few feet from the post. Lilacs! Oh, I love lilacs. Unexpected beauty in the darkness outside.
It was soothing, watching Jo work. She’d expected Jo to be sluggish, stumbling around in the snow, belabored, the way she would be if she’d done what Jo had already done so far that day, starting with an early morning call to work, working non-stop til the night, then doing that tricky drive through unpredictable road conditions created by the sudden snow storm. But the blond went about her tasks purposefully, yet managing to look over, and wave and smile at Becca a few times.
Yup. Jo was quite the catch. “Everything ok?” she asked Jo, with a smile of her own as Jo hopped back into the warm cabin of the SUV.
“Uh huh. The gate wasn’t the source of the alarm. So it must be something else.”
And all along I believed I would find you
“Hey, I’m sorry I started to lose my shit earlier.”
Jo grinned as she removed her gloves. “No problem, city girl.”
“And I should have offered to do something to help you.”
Jo blew on one hand to restore some warmth to it as she released the park brake and slowly eased the SUV forward. “Becca, you’re dressed for a gala, not for clearing snow.”
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I am not familiar with these two characters – Becca and Jo. I went back and started at the beginning, so, these comments are for the two chapters.
Chapter 1 – Oh, my god. What a absolutely horrendous situation. Becca is so much in love with Jo and is ready to announce to her friends and family that she is in a relationship with a woman. Jo tries to convince her not to go through with her outing to her family, which does not work. On the way to the family gathering Jo ends the relationship with Becca for her own good. Needless to say Becca falls apart. The pain and anguish Becca feels is devastatingly clear to the reader. Becca even though she spends months under the care of her family and hours in therapy never reveals to her family and friends that her massive breakdown is the result of a lesbian relationship breakup. Becca continues to love Jo but continues to anguish over the sudden break up without knowing the reason why.
The story has a flash black to when the two characters meet and begin their romantic relationship. This is certainly an attraction at first sight which by all appearances develops into a deep love for both parties.
Chapter One ends when three years after the breakup, Becca is in New York City in time square when an electronic billboard catches her eye that features an androgynous model of male clothing – her ex girlfriend Jo.
Chapter Two – Three years after the abrupt termination of their relationship, Becca is talked into attending a charity event by her friends. At the event, across the room, she see her long lost love Jo. Jo sees her and works her way to Becca vicinity to say hello. The rest of the chapter tells what happens the rest of the evening. Much of the dialogue is in the mind of Becca. Becca and Jo find a secluded area where they can talk which does not go as well as either hopes. Jo takes an opportunity to serenade Becca an abbreviated explanation as to what happened three years ago. Jo gets an emergency alert on her property in upstate New York and needs to leave town at once. Jo agrees to take Becca with her for the weekend and the story goes on from there.
After getting to the “cabin”, its becomes obvious that Jo is still very much attracted to if not in love with Becca. The weekend adventures are very descriptive and preview what might be a very interesting weekend for Becca.
There is an indication that not just a reunion but a reconciliation may be in the works for these two.
I recommend this story and I encourage the author to add to this frequently as possible.
Hi Martha3128,
Happy you’ve “met” Becca and Jo, and that you’re into their story. Thank you for taking the time to post a recap, and thank you, also, for recommending it. I’ll try to post the next chapter as soon as I can. But, as you can see, each one runs quite long, between 9k to 10k words a chapter, even as I try to make each word count and flow smoothly.. Hope you’ll find the next one as enjoyable a read as the first two.
Take good care, in the meantime..
“Talk” to you soon!
– S –