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Nobis Pacem Chapter 1
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I laughed.
“I love to hear you laugh,” she said softly. My stomach did another series of flip flops.
“Um … sorry, I didn’t –“ she stammered.
“Now you don’t be silly, Aerin. And thank you,” I answered quickly. There was no way I was going to let her take that precious sentiment back, now that she’d openly said it.
Before I could add anything else, her door suddenly opened, and she stepped out, thoroughly surprising me. She wore a big smile, which lit her face up like a Christmas tree. Her big, brown eyes were smiling also, and her lush brunette hair, which she often gathered in a high pony tail, fell in soft waves down to her back. She wore light make-up and just a hint of light red lipstick. She was dressed casually in stylish distressed jeans and a red single-shoulder silk top that skimmed over her breasts. She used a silk scarf (Hermes?) in lieu of a belt. She looked and smelt delicious.
“Don’t I get a kiss?” she asked with an impish smile, noticing I was checking her out.
“Wha-a-a-t-t?” I asked hoarsely, still trying re-group from her sudden appearance.
“A kiss,” she repeated. “Over the past week, you’ve given me a kiss every time you saw me, and then another one before you left.”
“Um … do you have a fire burning inside?” I asked, feeling slightly imbalanced still, hoping the question didn’t come out as clumsily as I imagined.
She snaked her arms around my neck and pulled me closer. “If you mean in the fireplace, I doused the fire with a pail of water and shut the fireplace with the metal grill,” she said as her lips inched closer to mine.
“Now I want to ignite something else altogether,” she whispered and then covered my lips with her warm soft, pliant ones.
I dropped whatever I was holding and wrapped my arms around that slim waist. I heard moaning and realized it was coming from both of us. Oh, she feels so good!
In each of our previous kisses I’d managed to pull away when I felt that we were losing control of ourselves. I felt we’d blown past that point with this kiss, though, and I was just about holding on to the last bit of self-control I had left. Unexpectedly, she threw me a lifeline.
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Bette and tina????
Here in spirit. But this is about a few special L words that play out in a couple’s life in another part of town. In the fringes of the world of the series I’ve been writing; but different. Hope you like it.
What a beautiful story! Your writing is such a treat to read as you evoke every emotion.
Will try this again. Left a message about 4:00 this morning and something happened, it’s not posted. My message was to thank you for posting such a beautiful love story. And that I hope this story will be continued we would like to know what happens to Aerin in the future. Thanks for sharing.
What an amazing story ! So glad I stumbled upon this treasure !
Sad and sweet -but you said it complete.
Dainty, Hellbent, and new friends: thanks for the comments. Honestly: was tough to pull this together, but it was worth it. Am v glad you liked it. Ok. I hear you. It may take a while for an update on her story, but it will be coming.
Well this was a pleasant surprise. I am always seeking an episode from your creativity. So much, I had to buy a smaller electronic device so that I might read your input on the go. Now, for me buying another electronic anything is saying a lot. I am one of the “dial phone” “get up and change the channel” “do not Text me and expect an answer” old school DIE HARD. But, your writing genius persuaded me to become a mobile reader at my neighborhood “coffee house.” Please continue to write
Beautiful story. I could feel Aerin’s struggle. I would love to read about the 18 months in between their first time and Chris’ final moments. I sure it would be moving.