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One Night Stand – (Chapter: Unwanted Visitor)
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Finally I’m here. Being a Dr. sure comes in handy when you’re trying to find parking in a hospital, ha, ha. I have reserved parking. As I’m making my way up to the ICU unit I begin to think about the conversation we had about the bastard. The more I think about it the more I begin to understand her, I think. I still wish he dies but I can kind of understand how she feels. Well at least I’m trying really hard to understand. I guess I’ll make a stop by the nurses station to find out how he’s doing since she wanted to know. I really don’t want to but I love her so much and I’ll basically do anything that will make her happy as long as it doesn’t hurt her.
As soon as I walk in to the ICU unit, instead of making my usual bee line to her room I walk to the nurses station. Luckily for me, Melissa a nurse I knew and liked was manning the desk. I put the flowers down and smile, “Hey, Melissa. How are you doing?”
“Great, Dr. Carlin, you?” Melissa beams. Okay, so Melissa is a young nurse in her mid twenties. Quite beautiful to tell you the truth. Pretty green eyes, long reddish-brown hair, toned body. We’ve flirted a little in the past but nothing serious. She just never caught my attention enough to ask her out.
“Wonderful, great, since my sleeping beauty woke up.” I grin.
She looks down a little and says monotone, “I’m glad.”
Trying to avoid an awkward silence I ask, “Hey Melissa, can you tell me how the guy that shot my sleeping beauty is doing?”
“You mean the evil-doer?” Melissa smiles slightly while I frown in confusion as she goes on, “That’s the nickname we gave him. Since we nicknamed Ashley sleeping beauty we nicknamed him Maleficent which means Evil-Doer. You know that was the name of the evil fairy in the story.”
I chuckles a little and say, “You guys sure are creative.’
Melissa smiles shrugs her shoulders and says, “Now back to your original question, he’s not doing well at all. He still hasn’t regained consciousness and his vitals are horrible. He’s barely hanging in there. Then there‘s his parents. Nobody can stand them. They bitch and complain about everything. Especially the mother. She just rants and raves about this whole thing not being her sons fault and that it was his bitch of a fiancées evil doing. She really takes exception that the police actually handcuffed him to the bed in his condition and have a guard posted outside his door. I‘m so glad that they just went to go have dinner so that I don‘t keep hearing them complain.” Melissa says quietly
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awesome like always…i like how you handled Aiden..and the end was very sweet…cant wait to read the next update PMS
wonder if the death of aiden is going to hurt spence in a way pms
great update!!! man i so love this story and you’ve gathered quite the following now huh? lol. i’m glad that even though spence hates aidens guts she did the best she could to save him for his and ashleys sake.again great update!!pms!!!
that was uh freakin mazin.PMASAP!
Amazing update. I’m so glad Aiden is dead and Aiden’s Mom has her issues by trying to kill Ashley. Poor Ash. I love this story. PMASAP.
ash can’t ever catch a break. great update! pmasap!!!!
Aiden’s gone, would it be heartless of me to say I’m relieved and somewhat happy about that? I hope Aiden’s mom doesn’t try to come back for Ash, but she probably will since she seems to be crazy like her son. The ending was so sweet, and I love that movie Imagine You & Me. Back to the topic, I hope Ash doesn’t become depressed over Aiden’s death, that’d be a whole nother problem and Spashley doesn’t need anymore problems. But…problems equal entertainment, so do what you will, it’s your story and I’m loving it. As usual, another amazing update. Continue with the great work, PMASAP!!!!!!!!!
OK that was another great chapter! So Aidens dead huh? Doesn’t phase me in the least. j/k Keep up the good work and PMS soon!
Aaawwww! Have I mentioned that I love this story?!?!?
Oh I forgot to add. Can’t wait for the next update!!!!!
OMG! That was so so good. The end was so beautiful. Babe, you shouldn’t worry if this is good or not. It’s the best. I’m so addicted to this story that my heart wants to comment after every paragraph at times. Loved it. You’re an excellent writer. Much love to you.
wow! that was incredible! pms! theres like 1000 people waiting for the next entry…not that there’s any pressure or anything…haha. But seriously, you are a wonderful writer. At this point you can do no wrong! PMS!
:-) loved the update amazing as always PMS
Great Update! I really can’t wait for Ashley to have a good day where no one tries to kill her lol PMS!!!!!
Great update! I’m glad that Aiden died that ass. I loved it! That nurse not Hailey but the other one makes me nervous. PMASAP!
Wow i never expected that it was brilliant i mean i think i actually stopped breathing when i read the part about her being smothered again another awesome update. And im still breathing :) so keep them coming PMS!!!
that was so amazingly written. aiden’s mother is a freaking whack job! wow! gah! you amamze me. you are such a wonderful writer. damn! awesome awesome update as always!! PMASAP!