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Save Tonight – (Chapter: 5. Truths and Decisions)
“Ash…”
She looked up at me as she racked the balls in the triangle thing.
“Yeah?”
“I’m never seen you so passionate about something”
“Besides you?”
I blushed at this, that I could even be put in the same category as this. I know it was a simple game of billiards but I could tell there was more to it, something behind it.
She sighed, “My dad and I used to play every waking hour when he was around, he was always out of town and every chance I spent with him, we would be playing pool. He would take me to this one pool hall with all of his buddies” she was laughing as if she was in that same pool hall “god, my mother would get so mad at him, we’d stay out til 3 in the morning, for Christmas one year he bought me this beautiful table, customized just for me. When he was gone I would just play and play, practice and practice. He never let me win, ever and I was determined to beat him so I would just play until he got back and show him how good I got.”
I just contently watched her relive these days as she told her story.
“It became like my therapy, well that’s until I discovered Whiskey, I guess that sort of replaced it.” She laughs a little but quickly realizes it wasn’t a joking matter “I um, since ya know…it happened, I haven’t played” she confesses
I took two strides over to her and wrapped my arms around her to pull her closer to me. She accepted my hug and rested her head on my shoulder
“Shhh, it’s fine we don’t have to talk about this anymore” I pulled back to see her fighting back tears, I wiped back some hair that was threatening to cover her brown eyes.
“C’mon, teach me how to make every ball disappear”
She smiled, “Alright” I gave her a kiss on the lips before picking up my pool stick once again
She went through a bunch of techniques and tips on how to eye up your shot how to judge exactly how much force to use when hitting the ball. Was I listening? God no. I was just watching her ramble on about god knows what as I stared at her while she talked about something that I could tell meant a lot to her. I would entertain her ramblings for hours if I could just watch how her eyes were lit up.
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I can’t wait for the next chapter! Love it!
oh my freaking god. seriously? how the hell could you… well okay so it’s not ended but still!?!? I really really hope you are already writing the beginning of the next part because that was just the cliffhanger of cliffhangers! this story is soooooooo freaking good so yea you had better be working! or we’ll send stix after you!
so I’m guessing spence saying that made ash realize she feels the same and that made the whole leaving thing too real for her to cope with… but I could be wrong. good god almighty see you have me double commenting (who knows maybe they’ll be another after I reread this masterpiece). because I really don’t think that ash just wants some action because otherwise she would have continued so yea…. ok really POST MORE SOOOOOOON!
totally love it. but no way how can you do that they just finally got it together. I cant wait for the next chapter. PMS!!!!!
okay i gotta say, that is an equal mix of the best thing ever and the worst.. i mean, they FINALLY got together, they were finally going to BE together, spencer says i love you and ashley WALKS OUT!??!!?!? what the hell!?!? i dont know whether to be happy that you posted or sad that it ended like this.. all i can say is that never the less it was an awesome chapter and i REALLY hope that you start posting part 2 soon and by soon i mean like right now.. and that they get together and .. well ya.. that they get together! pms pleaaassee!!!
Thank you sooooo much for posting! I’m glad I didn’t have to do what the monks do and pull a hunger strike. This was much easier! I loved it! Loved it! I’m also very very happy that this isn’t the end of the story or else we’d be in a fight right now! Start writing the next part so I can continue posting in normal fequencey! I love my power of you and will continue to be selfish ;)
Yes, I have to agree. I’m so into this story it’s insane! So, what happens next? Do you even know….I freakin’ hope so. Now get back to work….pleeease! lol!
aaaahhhhh!!! thats frustration and elation in case youre wondering :) so good!!! oh and “Pause. Time out…”- i really liked that effect- playing with the timeline like that at just the right moment. it reminded me of a tv show, or i think a couple of shows have had the main character do or say that… or movies??? suddenly i have 2 names in my head- parker lewis and ferris bueller… anyway, still aaaaahhhhh!!! :) pmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmsppmspmsppmspmspmspms……pmspmspmspmspmpmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmspms… but no pressure :)
great update…thank u six for your strike lol….PMS roxy