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Save Tonight – (Chapter: 5. Truths and Decisions)
“Fine”
How could she possibly distract me from dance dance revolution? It was near impossible. But why must I speak so soon, because as I quickly learned impossible wasn’t a word in Ashley Davies’ vocabulary, in fact I don’t think she’d ever heard the word. She soon had her arms around my lower back grinding my hips into hers, to the sound of a version of cascada’s ‘everytime we touch’ on hyperspeed. Once again I got lost in her hypnotic spell and once again I failed at accomplishing my mission, and I’m not even sure what my mission was anymore. If it was trying time and time again to not be distracted by the Davies’ charm then I was failing miserably. It didn’t stop there, oh no. she had me pinned up against ms. Pacman in 4 seconds flat, on the skiball ramp before I could even throw the first ball and my legs practically gave out when she came up from behind me when I tried my luck at basketball shootout.
She was grinning from ear to ear each and every time she pulled away from me, more satisfied with her newest victory than her last.
“Enough already” I felt like I had just ran a suicide sprint on a football field
“How about some pool?”
“please just spare me, you win, okay?” I leaned up against the pool table
“I know I win, and I knew that I would” she still smiling, “but I’ll play with you this time”
I let out a sigh, “fine, go easy on me though. I’m not actually very good at pool” I confessed
She raised her eyebrow and studied me up and down.
“I can’t tell if you’re being serious or if I’m about to get hustled again”
“No really, pool was one thing I never really could grasp”
Her eye brow was still raised, “well I’m a crack shot, balls and sticks are quite my forte but in pool I’m an ace” she was quite proud of herself
I’m glad I could give her this one thing, “so will you teach me, properly?”
She walked over to the wall and grabbed two sticks and handed one to me before she proceeded to rack up the balls.
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I can’t wait for the next chapter! Love it!
oh my freaking god. seriously? how the hell could you… well okay so it’s not ended but still!?!? I really really hope you are already writing the beginning of the next part because that was just the cliffhanger of cliffhangers! this story is soooooooo freaking good so yea you had better be working! or we’ll send stix after you!
so I’m guessing spence saying that made ash realize she feels the same and that made the whole leaving thing too real for her to cope with… but I could be wrong. good god almighty see you have me double commenting (who knows maybe they’ll be another after I reread this masterpiece). because I really don’t think that ash just wants some action because otherwise she would have continued so yea…. ok really POST MORE SOOOOOOON!
totally love it. but no way how can you do that they just finally got it together. I cant wait for the next chapter. PMS!!!!!
okay i gotta say, that is an equal mix of the best thing ever and the worst.. i mean, they FINALLY got together, they were finally going to BE together, spencer says i love you and ashley WALKS OUT!??!!?!? what the hell!?!? i dont know whether to be happy that you posted or sad that it ended like this.. all i can say is that never the less it was an awesome chapter and i REALLY hope that you start posting part 2 soon and by soon i mean like right now.. and that they get together and .. well ya.. that they get together! pms pleaaassee!!!
Thank you sooooo much for posting! I’m glad I didn’t have to do what the monks do and pull a hunger strike. This was much easier! I loved it! Loved it! I’m also very very happy that this isn’t the end of the story or else we’d be in a fight right now! Start writing the next part so I can continue posting in normal fequencey! I love my power of you and will continue to be selfish ;)
Yes, I have to agree. I’m so into this story it’s insane! So, what happens next? Do you even know….I freakin’ hope so. Now get back to work….pleeease! lol!
aaaahhhhh!!! thats frustration and elation in case youre wondering :) so good!!! oh and “Pause. Time out…”- i really liked that effect- playing with the timeline like that at just the right moment. it reminded me of a tv show, or i think a couple of shows have had the main character do or say that… or movies??? suddenly i have 2 names in my head- parker lewis and ferris bueller… anyway, still aaaaahhhhh!!! :) pmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmsppmspmsppmspmspmspms……pmspmspmspmspmpmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmspmspms… but no pressure :)
great update…thank u six for your strike lol….PMS roxy