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Daughter of a Criminal
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“I believe you are here to take care of my wife. Her room is on the second floor. Please, since Ms. Dean will be living with us for a while, let my people show you around the place.” He gently put a hand on Tina’s lower back and guided her through the garden.
While being led to the main building, the blonde got a chance to observe this place. As if she was in a movie set, the sight was breathtaking. Everything had a sense of luxurious taste to it. The mansion was bright and spacious, the garden had many miniature fountains, sculptures, pools and numerous exotic flowers grown, the small shrubs and woods around the fence went on for hundreds of yards. The only thing that could interrupt the peaceful scene in this haven was the fact that it was built by hundreds and thousands kilograms of cocaine.
Jorge, the drug lord “Pulpo”, was literally inches from her and it made her sick to her stomach. He had an easy smile and a set of kind eyes, or at least he seemed to have. Tina knew how brutal he could become in motion and she needed to be careful.
“Pulpo” let her into the main living room on the first floor. There were six men scattered around the place, and most of them Tina had known their name and nickname from the file. They were only a quarter to one third of the inner group Pulpo had. And as she looked around, she saw a friendly face, Henry, or here he was called Eric, sat in the corner, seemed to be a bit surprised to find her there.
Jorge smoothed his fingers over his chin and looked around for someone. When he didn’t find that person, he frowned a little and asked. “Where is Vincent?”
“With Jodi, sir, helping her bathe. It’s been quite a while.”
Tina widened her eyes hearing this. Vincent, the person she had no information on, was bathing the drug lord’s wife?
Jorge nodded, seemed to be content about it. “Ok, well Ms. Dean will take the job from now on. Can’t just let Vincent do the all the scut, I need my best man on deck for our next deal.” Then Jorge looked among the men. “Maybe just after Vincent familiarizes Ms. Dean with the situation. Can’t trust you animals to it.”
The rest of the guys all laughed in agreement.
“Vincent? Come down meet our new nurse!” Jorge called, his masculine voice echoed in the entire building and quickly some stumping approached them.
A tall figure entered the living room. “I’m coming geez!”
It was a woman’s voice.
“Oh there she is!” Jorge said, sounded very pleased.
So Vincent was a woman? It definitely intrigued the blonde. Well now it made much more sense for this “Vincent” person to be bathing Jodi. She tried to get a look at the mysterious woman while Jorge temporarily blocked her as he turned to give a greeting kiss to her.
“Now Vincent, meet Ms. Kristen Dean.” He stepped out of the way.
And that was when Tina collided into a pair of familiarly strange, dark without a light, deep without a bottom, frozen, brown eyes.
Bette!?
TBC??
Happy New Years and happy birthday to Tibettenation1! My gift to you! I won’t tell how old you are ;)
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Shout outs to my ladies! And an enormous ‘happy birthday’ to TN1! We all love you and wish you all the best next year! And Happy New Years to everyone.
Seriously… I suffer from stage four cancerous procrastination. When I can’t continue with what I’m supposed to do, I do something else to distract myself…
Again, *hiding my face in my palms and running away in shame*
How do you like this story? TBC or no?
To be truthful, I don’t know!
It seems so sad but intriguing, so intriguing!
Tina looking after Jodi! Can I handle that?
Can I forgive this procrastination? Already had a 1 off Writer’s block when we are just looking for a Lucky one!
How quickly TBC? So many questions!
Happy New Year! Balls in your Court!
Aww shucks thanks Robyn, gosh I love you *ok stalker moment* lol..now thank you so much!
The story comments…
Well let me say that I lovvee it and so happy to be seeing your name posting on here again, Writer’s block is a disease that we can’t afford for you to have my darling that would be excrucaiating. This is absolutely interesting, so excited to see where you taking this,,and if its anything life Round and Round, or The Lucky One, I know it would be better, you are so talent and I’m one of your number 1 fans, so gives us another chapter of this great story soon, don’t block up on us! ;-) lol
Loved it, please continue. Thanks
Ok.. So I was thinking just because you introduced Candace in the lucky one it doesn’t mean Bette has to cheat with her… You could introduce Jodi and they could hookup or Helena, Lara or even Moira sense she’s not max yet…
I’m late to that story but I would hate for Bette and Tina to be ruined by the cheating factor.. So maybe you can go in a different direction and make Candace not an issue.. I’m just throwing ideas out there to help you get back on track…
And I’m not sure yet about this one although I loved Round and Round… You know what I’m talking about…
Intriguing for sure! I hope Bette is not a tranny – that would just be too weird – not that I have anything against tranny’s, just can’t go there with Bette.
Lol doc she’s not a tranny… She just has a guy’s name I’ll explain it later into it.
oh yeah, I remember this story from Chinese version again! Man,that was one hot and desperate story, now I am here to see your version,
nice work!
Lets go! PPS
Very good beginning, i am hooked.
I hope that Bette is a CIA or FBI agent and not a criminal.
My heart bleeded for her, her youth must have been terrible.
Please continue.
My heart is about to start hitting the Thousand !!
Very intriguing and mysterious this story, already
held my atenção.Bette and Tina
face to face after all this time, as will be
Bette that will react?
I love your stories and my favorite
is “Round in Round We Go”, which I believe
a masterpiece.
10 Stars.
I’m so glad that you were given a new story. it is very interesting start.
It was so heartbreaking to read Bette’s life in high school.
I’m Mamadoc, I hope he does not tranny!
I hope Bette not become criminals! it would be terrible!
So good
thank you for your new story, its starts a very interesting!! :))i’m impatient for the next chapter
i hope you will continue with “the lucky one” too
:)
Hi Robyn, indeed very happy to read your story again.. Thank you for that.
No opinion at all how the story going to line up , your writing talent will always lead us to the peak….
Wishing you this new year will bring you more joy, more peace and good health…