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    Daughter of a Criminal

    Story written on December 31, 2014 by robyntibetter.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=87867
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    “Report to this address tomorrow for your duty, and assignments will be delivered to the drug store. Follow the instruction, Tina, don’t do anything stupid.”  Kroll gave her the address, the fake identity and everything she needed to get in there. But how to find information of use, and how to help the department destroy

    “Report to this address tomorrow for your duty, and assignments will be delivered to the drug store. Follow the instruction, Tina, don’t do anything stupid.” 

    Kroll gave her the address, the fake identity and everything she needed to get in there. But how to find information of use, and how to help the department destroy this cartel while keeping herself alive, that was her responsibility now. Tina took a deep breath in and out, and another one, and another one until she could finally calm down. There was a feeling, that this mission would be the most important one in her life. Whether or not she may have a life after this…now entirely depended on herself.

     

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    With all the nerves in her stomach fluttering like crazy, the newbie undercover stepped out of her second-handed car that was registered under her fake name, and she straightened her “professional” outfit. As she rang the doorbell for the third time outside a giant luxurious mansion, some guy with a pair of suspiciously oversized sunglasses opened up for her. Having a trained eye, she could tell he had his hand on the concealed weapon back in his suit.

    “You the nurse?” The man had a Latino accent.

    She nodded, acting like she didn’t know what she was walking into.

    He looked around before letting her in. And as she slide in through the small crack he opened, he captured her slender arm with some menace force. He sniffed her hair, an act she found unbelievably repulsive, and whispered into her ears, his breath so hideous that she nearly vomited. “You’re pretty. I got my eyes on you.” 

    Just as she shuddered and tried to struggle out of his grip, a firm voice appeared from inside the yard. “Let her go, Tito.” 

    And just like that, the hand left her quickly. “Sorry sir.” The man named Tito even apologized.

    Tina realized who the one was speaking. It must be the man in charge, Pulpo. And soon enough, the man strolled down from where he was sitting, and confirmed her speculation. “Hello, Ms. Kristen Dean, I’m Jorge Perez. Don’t mind the guys, they’re barbarians.” He let out a throaty laugh.

    The blonde finally got a good glance at the famous “Pulpo” close in person. He was in a grey suit, the color similar to the salt and pepper on either sides of his temple, a good-looking middle aged man, great looking, actually, clean and decent. She would absolutely mistook him as a successful entrepreneur if she didn’t know better.

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    1. Author:

      Shout outs to my ladies! And an enormous ‘happy birthday’ to TN1! We all love you and wish you all the best next year! And Happy New Years to everyone.

      Seriously… I suffer from stage four cancerous procrastination. When I can’t continue with what I’m supposed to do, I do something else to distract myself…

      Again, *hiding my face in my palms and running away in shame*

      How do you like this story? TBC or no?

      • To be truthful, I don’t know!

        It seems so sad but intriguing, so intriguing!

        Tina looking after Jodi! Can I handle that?

        Can I forgive this procrastination? Already had a 1 off Writer’s block when we are just looking for a Lucky one!

        How quickly TBC? So many questions!

        Happy New Year! Balls in your Court!

      • Aww shucks thanks Robyn, gosh I love you *ok stalker moment* lol..now thank you so much!

        The story comments…
        Well let me say that I lovvee it and so happy to be seeing your name posting on here again, Writer’s block is a disease that we can’t afford for you to have my darling that would be excrucaiating. This is absolutely interesting, so excited to see where you taking this,,and if its anything life Round and Round, or The Lucky One, I know it would be better, you are so talent and I’m one of your number 1 fans, so gives us another chapter of this great story soon, don’t block up on us! ;-) lol

    3. Ok.. So I was thinking just because you introduced Candace in the lucky one it doesn’t mean Bette has to cheat with her… You could introduce Jodi and they could hookup or Helena, Lara or even Moira sense she’s not max yet…

      I’m late to that story but I would hate for Bette and Tina to be ruined by the cheating factor.. So maybe you can go in a different direction and make Candace not an issue.. I’m just throwing ideas out there to help you get back on track…

      And I’m not sure yet about this one although I loved Round and Round… You know what I’m talking about…

    4. Intriguing for sure! I hope Bette is not a tranny – that would just be too weird – not that I have anything against tranny’s, just can’t go there with Bette.

    7. Very good beginning, i am hooked.

      I hope that Bette is a CIA or FBI agent and not a criminal.

      My heart bleeded for her, her youth must have been terrible.

      Please continue.

    8. My heart is about to start hitting the Thousand !!
      Very intriguing and mysterious this story, already
      held my atenção.Bette and Tina
      face to face after all this time, as will be
      Bette that will react?
      I love your stories and my favorite
      is “Round in Round We Go”, which I believe
      a masterpiece.
      10 Stars.

    9. I’m so glad that you were given a new story. it is very interesting start.
      It was so heartbreaking to read Bette’s life in high school.
      I’m Mamadoc, I hope he does not tranny!
      I hope Bette not become criminals! it would be terrible!

    11. thank you for your new story, its starts a very interesting!! :))i’m impatient for the next chapter
      i hope you will continue with “the lucky one” too
      :)

    12. Hi Robyn, indeed very happy to read your story again.. Thank you for that.
      No opinion at all how the story going to line up , your writing talent will always lead us to the peak….
      Wishing you this new year will bring you more joy, more peace and good health…

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