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Daughter of a Criminal
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“But look at her background, Lieutenant, she has a degree in nursing practice and went to medical school for 3 years.” It explained why the woman was still a rookie when she could have made it to a detective at this age. “We need someone with medical training. Pulpo is hiring a new caretaker for his wife.”
“And you think she can handle this?”
“Her father—”
“I know who her father is, god rest his soul.” The lieutenant rested her chin on her palm and sighed. “Do you suppose she has some kind of instinct for this sorta thing?”
“She did graduate at the top of her class from the academy.”
“Ok, page her in. I need to personally talk her through this.” Kroll tapped her chin and decided to give it the best shot.
Officer Tina Kennard walked out of the lieutenant’s room with a stunned expression. She had never thought that they would send her go undercover in her second year here. Apparently it was her nursing practitioner skill that stood out from the rest of the department. She…was about to take on THE most renowned drug cartel in Chicago, led by the cocaine king Pulpo. They already had an undercover detective in the cartel, Henry, a young but seasoned police, under the alias “Eric”. However, the superintendent was worried that he got into some trouble within the cartel and was not making progress on the intelligence.
This new mission made her legs shake, yet at the same time it made her full of hope. She never really knew what she wanted in life in earlier years. It took her almost all her youth to figure out that her true purpose was becoming a law enforcer. Her father died in a gun fight with a local drug dealer some years ago and the tragedy triggered something inside her. So she quit medicine and applied to the academy. Now it was her moment.
In her car, she reviewed the file the lieutenant gave her. Pulpo, the long-lived leader of the biggest latino drug cartel, was a slick and resourceful man, his people literally die for him in numerous occasions to keep him safe. He was an untouchable man. His wife, Jodi, was an addict and suffered from chronicle diseases that needed around-the-clock attention. And within the core group, most of the members’ information were very detailed, but there was one person that nobody had anything on. Someone named Vincent. The lieutenant told her that she wouldn’t worry too much about this Vincent person since there was no indication that he was an active member. Kroll presumed that it was just a bouncer for Pulpo.
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Shout outs to my ladies! And an enormous ‘happy birthday’ to TN1! We all love you and wish you all the best next year! And Happy New Years to everyone.
Seriously… I suffer from stage four cancerous procrastination. When I can’t continue with what I’m supposed to do, I do something else to distract myself…
Again, *hiding my face in my palms and running away in shame*
How do you like this story? TBC or no?
To be truthful, I don’t know!
It seems so sad but intriguing, so intriguing!
Tina looking after Jodi! Can I handle that?
Can I forgive this procrastination? Already had a 1 off Writer’s block when we are just looking for a Lucky one!
How quickly TBC? So many questions!
Happy New Year! Balls in your Court!
Aww shucks thanks Robyn, gosh I love you *ok stalker moment* lol..now thank you so much!
The story comments…
Well let me say that I lovvee it and so happy to be seeing your name posting on here again, Writer’s block is a disease that we can’t afford for you to have my darling that would be excrucaiating. This is absolutely interesting, so excited to see where you taking this,,and if its anything life Round and Round, or The Lucky One, I know it would be better, you are so talent and I’m one of your number 1 fans, so gives us another chapter of this great story soon, don’t block up on us! ;-) lol
Loved it, please continue. Thanks
Ok.. So I was thinking just because you introduced Candace in the lucky one it doesn’t mean Bette has to cheat with her… You could introduce Jodi and they could hookup or Helena, Lara or even Moira sense she’s not max yet…
I’m late to that story but I would hate for Bette and Tina to be ruined by the cheating factor.. So maybe you can go in a different direction and make Candace not an issue.. I’m just throwing ideas out there to help you get back on track…
And I’m not sure yet about this one although I loved Round and Round… You know what I’m talking about…
Intriguing for sure! I hope Bette is not a tranny – that would just be too weird – not that I have anything against tranny’s, just can’t go there with Bette.
Lol doc she’s not a tranny… She just has a guy’s name I’ll explain it later into it.
oh yeah, I remember this story from Chinese version again! Man,that was one hot and desperate story, now I am here to see your version,
nice work!
Lets go! PPS
Very good beginning, i am hooked.
I hope that Bette is a CIA or FBI agent and not a criminal.
My heart bleeded for her, her youth must have been terrible.
Please continue.
My heart is about to start hitting the Thousand !!
Very intriguing and mysterious this story, already
held my atenção.Bette and Tina
face to face after all this time, as will be
Bette that will react?
I love your stories and my favorite
is “Round in Round We Go”, which I believe
a masterpiece.
10 Stars.
I’m so glad that you were given a new story. it is very interesting start.
It was so heartbreaking to read Bette’s life in high school.
I’m Mamadoc, I hope he does not tranny!
I hope Bette not become criminals! it would be terrible!
So good
thank you for your new story, its starts a very interesting!! :))i’m impatient for the next chapter
i hope you will continue with “the lucky one” too
:)
Hi Robyn, indeed very happy to read your story again.. Thank you for that.
No opinion at all how the story going to line up , your writing talent will always lead us to the peak….
Wishing you this new year will bring you more joy, more peace and good health…